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I have just completed the assessment of this article for the military history project and feel that this article could be improved by addressing the following:
Coverage: the article could be expanded to discuss the subject in more detail, discussing history, location, who maintains it (Commonwealth War Graves?), etc.
Supporting materials: are there any photographs or images that could be used to illustrate the article?
Structure: the addition of an introductory section, followed by a main body would help define the structure of this article. Also the addition of Notes, See also and External links sections would serve to provide readers with more resources relating to this topic;
Referencing: once the article is expanded, for a B class review it will require at least one in line citation per paragraph (more if multiple sources are used).
Just a few ideas. If you would like more in-depth comments, please consider adding this article to the discussion on
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WP:MHA. These comments are by no means meant to be a criticism of the work already undertaken, they are intended to provide some advice on how the article might be developed. Hope this helps.
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I have just completed the assessment of this article for the military history project and feel that this article could be improved by addressing the following:
Coverage: the article could be expanded to discuss the subject in more detail, discussing history, location, who maintains it (Commonwealth War Graves?), etc.
Supporting materials: are there any photographs or images that could be used to illustrate the article?
Structure: the addition of an introductory section, followed by a main body would help define the structure of this article. Also the addition of Notes, See also and External links sections would serve to provide readers with more resources relating to this topic;
Referencing: once the article is expanded, for a B class review it will require at least one in line citation per paragraph (more if multiple sources are used).
Just a few ideas. If you would like more in-depth comments, please consider adding this article to the discussion on
WP:MHPR. Also, if you would like to seek re-assessment in the future, please go to
WP:MHA. These comments are by no means meant to be a criticism of the work already undertaken, they are intended to provide some advice on how the article might be developed. Hope this helps.
AustralianRupert (
talk)
16:39, 12 April 2009 (UTC)reply