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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29  talk  22:31, 1 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Created by BeanieFan11 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 180 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 ( talk) 20:46, 15 May 2024 (UTC). reply

The hook is a bit confusing. What does "organized football game" mean? If you get the context, yes it's interesting, but without the context it may be confusing. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 00:36, 20 May 2024 (UTC) reply
I find it understandable, but would saying something like, e.g., his first "formal" game, be better? BeanieFan11 ( talk) 01:28, 20 May 2024 (UTC) reply
I don't think that helps. If the point is that the first he placed an actual game of American football while in the NFL and never played the game before, that could probably be made clearer. Adding that he actually started out as a basketball player might also add interest. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 01:51, 20 May 2024 (UTC) reply
As an aside, it's almost a week since the nomination so a QPQ will need to be given sooner rather than later. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 01:51, 20 May 2024 (UTC) reply
Will do tomorrow. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:02, 20 May 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Throwing out some possible ALTs, re-wording is welcome:
There might be a better way to word ALT2 to address my concerns about what "organized" means, these suggestions are more for brainstorming purposes. Pinging Gonzo_fan2007 for his thoughts. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 09:07, 21 May 2024 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29  talk  22:31, 1 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Created by BeanieFan11 ( talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 180 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 ( talk) 20:46, 15 May 2024 (UTC). reply

The hook is a bit confusing. What does "organized football game" mean? If you get the context, yes it's interesting, but without the context it may be confusing. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 00:36, 20 May 2024 (UTC) reply
I find it understandable, but would saying something like, e.g., his first "formal" game, be better? BeanieFan11 ( talk) 01:28, 20 May 2024 (UTC) reply
I don't think that helps. If the point is that the first he placed an actual game of American football while in the NFL and never played the game before, that could probably be made clearer. Adding that he actually started out as a basketball player might also add interest. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 01:51, 20 May 2024 (UTC) reply
As an aside, it's almost a week since the nomination so a QPQ will need to be given sooner rather than later. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 01:51, 20 May 2024 (UTC) reply
Will do tomorrow. BeanieFan11 ( talk) 02:02, 20 May 2024 (UTC) reply
  • Throwing out some possible ALTs, re-wording is welcome:
There might be a better way to word ALT2 to address my concerns about what "organized" means, these suggestions are more for brainstorming purposes. Pinging Gonzo_fan2007 for his thoughts. Narutolovehinata5 ( talk · contributions) 09:07, 21 May 2024 (UTC) reply

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