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The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. See below under Needs strong cleanup/rewrite for more info. -- Bsharkey 03:09, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
And may I ask in which fashion this article is inappropriately toned? Ravenswing 01:05, 16 August 2006 (UTC)
This is not one of the better athlete biography / hockey articles I've reviewed on Wikipedia. Not only is it written with inappropriate tone or point of view repeatedly, it has zero citations as to where facts originated or to back up its assertions which may or may not be factual in nature, and is poorly written with some distinct grammatical errors.
It could be much improved by giving more actual biographical information, such as a listing of statistics, info on his junior, college, and minor hockey career, and more about his background (where he was born, grew up, etc) and/or list of accomplishments as a player. Bsharkey 03:09, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
what about the Johnson's who both played for in net the blues? seriously tempted to just delete it, rewritting tit to say only father-son to golatend for the bruins makes it pretty pointless. ideas? Childhoodtrauma ( talk) 20:41, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
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The article may be improved by following the WikiProject Biography 11 easy steps to producing at least a B article. See below under Needs strong cleanup/rewrite for more info. -- Bsharkey 03:09, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
And may I ask in which fashion this article is inappropriately toned? Ravenswing 01:05, 16 August 2006 (UTC)
This is not one of the better athlete biography / hockey articles I've reviewed on Wikipedia. Not only is it written with inappropriate tone or point of view repeatedly, it has zero citations as to where facts originated or to back up its assertions which may or may not be factual in nature, and is poorly written with some distinct grammatical errors.
It could be much improved by giving more actual biographical information, such as a listing of statistics, info on his junior, college, and minor hockey career, and more about his background (where he was born, grew up, etc) and/or list of accomplishments as a player. Bsharkey 03:09, 20 March 2007 (UTC)
what about the Johnson's who both played for in net the blues? seriously tempted to just delete it, rewritting tit to say only father-son to golatend for the bruins makes it pretty pointless. ideas? Childhoodtrauma ( talk) 20:41, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
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