Jesper Fast was one of the Sports and recreation good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that a Swedish
New York Ranger was Fast(pictured)?
Current status: Delisted good article
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There should be a non-breaking space - between a number and the unit of measurement.
Are you referring to the references to weight (like 20 pounds)? I've added it to those. Or would this also apply to such things as number of goals, assists, points, etc.? Let me know and I can add them wherever necessary. — HunterKahn03:37, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"In 2009–10, Fast recorded 49 points (23 goals, 26 assists), SuperElit" - this sentence doesn't make sense.
I'm not very familiar with the citation format, but why does every reference contain the "|archiveurl=" parameter?
In just about every article I edit, I use
WebCite to created an archived version of the article. That way in the future, if the original website for the source were to disappear (
WP:LINKROT) there will be a backup archived version. — HunterKahn02:04, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"exceeded most observers' expectations" - I don't see a FN which cites that
The Swedish language source in the next citation that follows the next sentence makes multiple references to Fast exceeding expectations in that season. I didn't think an inline citation at the end of that sentence was necessary because I thought the citation at the end of the last sentence covered it, but I added it to both sentences to clarify. — HunterKahn02:04, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
I really don't understand why someone would simply delete a whole section of an article with accurate and easy-to-verify information rather than add sources, add a "sources needed" tag or seek someone to update it. Really annoying. Anyway, I've added it back with sources. — HunterKahn03:37, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Correct me if I'm wrong, but FN2 does not include any information about his date of birth
The first two sentences in Junior Career doesn't belong in that section.
This might be a little
WP:IAR, but I think it should stay here. It obviously belongs in the article, but probably belongs in an "Early life" section or something like that. But I think it would be sort of ridiculous to make such a section for only two sentences. But that being said, if that's the solution required for this GAN to pass, I'll do it. — HunterKahn03:37, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"who play in Sweden" - mentioning the league would be helpful
There actually already was a caption written in the infobox, but it wasn't showing up because it was mistakenly written as "image_caption" rather than just "caption." That's fixed now. — HunterKahn03:37, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Overall
@
Hunter Kahn:. I don't actually know about five in Well Written section, and I was referring to an older revision of the page for six in the Well Writen section. I've had one more read through for the lead. Passing the article. Congrats!
ΤheQ Editor Talk?15:11, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Jesper Fast was one of the Sports and recreation good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the
good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be
renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that a Swedish
New York Ranger was Fast(pictured)?
Current status: Delisted good article
This article must adhere to the biographies of living persons (BLP) policy, even if it is not a biography, because it contains material about living persons. Contentious material about living persons that is unsourced or
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There should be a non-breaking space - between a number and the unit of measurement.
Are you referring to the references to weight (like 20 pounds)? I've added it to those. Or would this also apply to such things as number of goals, assists, points, etc.? Let me know and I can add them wherever necessary. — HunterKahn03:37, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"In 2009–10, Fast recorded 49 points (23 goals, 26 assists), SuperElit" - this sentence doesn't make sense.
I'm not very familiar with the citation format, but why does every reference contain the "|archiveurl=" parameter?
In just about every article I edit, I use
WebCite to created an archived version of the article. That way in the future, if the original website for the source were to disappear (
WP:LINKROT) there will be a backup archived version. — HunterKahn02:04, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"exceeded most observers' expectations" - I don't see a FN which cites that
The Swedish language source in the next citation that follows the next sentence makes multiple references to Fast exceeding expectations in that season. I didn't think an inline citation at the end of that sentence was necessary because I thought the citation at the end of the last sentence covered it, but I added it to both sentences to clarify. — HunterKahn02:04, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
I really don't understand why someone would simply delete a whole section of an article with accurate and easy-to-verify information rather than add sources, add a "sources needed" tag or seek someone to update it. Really annoying. Anyway, I've added it back with sources. — HunterKahn03:37, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Correct me if I'm wrong, but FN2 does not include any information about his date of birth
The first two sentences in Junior Career doesn't belong in that section.
This might be a little
WP:IAR, but I think it should stay here. It obviously belongs in the article, but probably belongs in an "Early life" section or something like that. But I think it would be sort of ridiculous to make such a section for only two sentences. But that being said, if that's the solution required for this GAN to pass, I'll do it. — HunterKahn03:37, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
"who play in Sweden" - mentioning the league would be helpful
There actually already was a caption written in the infobox, but it wasn't showing up because it was mistakenly written as "image_caption" rather than just "caption." That's fixed now. — HunterKahn03:37, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply
Overall
@
Hunter Kahn:. I don't actually know about five in Well Written section, and I was referring to an older revision of the page for six in the Well Writen section. I've had one more read through for the lead. Passing the article. Congrats!
ΤheQ Editor Talk?15:11, 28 January 2015 (UTC)reply