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Hello WPSamson. After completing my preliminary copyedit I always ask questions about the article to ensure that my edit reflects the intended meaning and is clear in doing so. Please reply to each point by indenting below each one like you would a conversation; items will be struck out once they have been answered. Please ping me with {{ U}}, {{ ping}}, or {{ re}} as I have a lot of items on my watchlist. My copyediting process can be found here. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 20:02, 14 August 2020 (UTC) |
The village was first settled by three Bentong villagers in 1930 who moved when the city was flooded in 1926.Slightly edited. Currently using the word "city" to describe Bentong? Is that accurate or is there a better word for it?
Although the village originally only focused on the agricultural industry, Janda Baik also focuses on the electronics and tourism industries today. The location is popular among families, corporations, and associations who choose the location for its tranquil setting. It is also popular among cyclists and trail runners due to good scenic views and the hills' challenging terrain.This paragraph teeters on promotion. I think with the exception of the first sentence, the rest should stay further down the article.
Residents then told the Sultan that Orang Asli tribes had previously settled here and doing agriculture activity by planting paddy and fruits.How is this relevant to the village being renamed?
The name was accepted by the Sultan of Pahang. Janda refers to divorcee, while Baik refers to the word balik which refers to the divorcee returns to this village.Balik needs to be explained better: what does it have to do with the divorcee returning to the village? Doesn't janda describe that already?
The news about their reunion prompted the Orang Asli to rename the village to Janda Baik. The name was accepted by the Sultan of Pahang. Janda refers to divorcee, while Baik refers to the word balik which refers to the divorcee returns to this village.
The news about their reunion prompted the Orang Asli to rename the village to Janda Balik. Janda refers to divorcee in Malay language, while Balik refers to "return" in Malay language which refers to divorcee returns to this village. The name was accepted by the Sultan of Pahang.
Four weeks later after their reconcile, Sir Henry Peacock, Bentong district officer suggests that the name should be renamed to Janda Baik, as "baik" word in Malay refers to the relationship between Orang Asli chief Tok Batin Wok and his wife Siah has improved since the reconcile, hence the village was officially renamed to Janda Baik on 19 September 1936.
<ref>{{cite news
| last = Mohd Noor
| first = Halina
| date = 2019-07-07
| title = Janda Baik, Janda Balik
| trans-title =
| url = https://www.bharian.com.my/hujung-minggu/santai/2019/07/582008/janda-baik-janda-balik
| language = ms
| work = [[Berita Harian]]
| location =
| access-date = 2020-08-15
}}</ref>
Those vegetables were then sold not just to customers, but also restaurants in Janda Baik.This sentence came out of nowhere. Is it supposed to connect to the previous sentence, and if so, how?
Cyclists often ride to Janda Baik for the challenging terrain of the hills, scenic views, and plenty of great cuisines provided at variety restaurants in this village.I edited this a little already but there's some "puffy" words that act more to promote the area that give that information neutrally. Does this need to be included? It might be more appropriate at another Wikimedia project like WikiVoyage. this extends to the sentences after.
The Malaysian government feared that a Federal Government's Minister may have been captured by communist guerillas.Somewhat edited already; what's the relevance to the plane crash?
...due to he previously took part in a fight against Japanese Red Army in the past from 1973 until 1981.From the same citation that cited in this sentence. WPSamson ( talk) 02:41, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
@ WPSamson: Looking forward to your responses. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 20:02, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
@ WPSamson: Alright, my work is done here. Good luck with the GAN! — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 16:51, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: S Marshall ( talk · contribs) 10:43, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
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The earliest founder for this village are Haji Deris, Haji Kadir, and Haji Yasir, "founder" should be plural) and correct inflection in verbs (i.e. in phrases like
who built a hut and stayed in the area for almost a week before others start populated the area, use the infinitive after "start"). After this has been done, I'll make a further copyediting pass myself before making a decision on whether to pass or fail on this point.
Thank you. I have made some tweaks and I'm content to pass the article on this point.— S Marshall T/ C 12:12, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
Haji Yasir (in black suit) are one of the three founders of Kampung Tiga Haji, the previous name for Janda Baik.)
@ WPSamson: I'm pinging you to prompt you to read this GA review.— S Marshall T/ C 15:51, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
The weather table lists average days of rain, but the values from the source are daily chance of rain in %. Thus, the table says November averages 59 days of rain. The Weather Box template doesn't support daily chance of rain. I don't know enough about meteorology to know if it's a matter of simply multiplying the number of days in the month by the daily % chance of rain for the month. SESteve ( talk) 11:00, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
Janda Baik has been listed as one of the
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good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: July 8, 2021. ( Reviewed version). |
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Janda Baik article. This is not a forum for general discussion of the article's subject. |
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Hello WPSamson. After completing my preliminary copyedit I always ask questions about the article to ensure that my edit reflects the intended meaning and is clear in doing so. Please reply to each point by indenting below each one like you would a conversation; items will be struck out once they have been answered. Please ping me with {{ U}}, {{ ping}}, or {{ re}} as I have a lot of items on my watchlist. My copyediting process can be found here. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 20:02, 14 August 2020 (UTC) |
The village was first settled by three Bentong villagers in 1930 who moved when the city was flooded in 1926.Slightly edited. Currently using the word "city" to describe Bentong? Is that accurate or is there a better word for it?
Although the village originally only focused on the agricultural industry, Janda Baik also focuses on the electronics and tourism industries today. The location is popular among families, corporations, and associations who choose the location for its tranquil setting. It is also popular among cyclists and trail runners due to good scenic views and the hills' challenging terrain.This paragraph teeters on promotion. I think with the exception of the first sentence, the rest should stay further down the article.
Residents then told the Sultan that Orang Asli tribes had previously settled here and doing agriculture activity by planting paddy and fruits.How is this relevant to the village being renamed?
The name was accepted by the Sultan of Pahang. Janda refers to divorcee, while Baik refers to the word balik which refers to the divorcee returns to this village.Balik needs to be explained better: what does it have to do with the divorcee returning to the village? Doesn't janda describe that already?
The news about their reunion prompted the Orang Asli to rename the village to Janda Baik. The name was accepted by the Sultan of Pahang. Janda refers to divorcee, while Baik refers to the word balik which refers to the divorcee returns to this village.
The news about their reunion prompted the Orang Asli to rename the village to Janda Balik. Janda refers to divorcee in Malay language, while Balik refers to "return" in Malay language which refers to divorcee returns to this village. The name was accepted by the Sultan of Pahang.
Four weeks later after their reconcile, Sir Henry Peacock, Bentong district officer suggests that the name should be renamed to Janda Baik, as "baik" word in Malay refers to the relationship between Orang Asli chief Tok Batin Wok and his wife Siah has improved since the reconcile, hence the village was officially renamed to Janda Baik on 19 September 1936.
<ref>{{cite news
| last = Mohd Noor
| first = Halina
| date = 2019-07-07
| title = Janda Baik, Janda Balik
| trans-title =
| url = https://www.bharian.com.my/hujung-minggu/santai/2019/07/582008/janda-baik-janda-balik
| language = ms
| work = [[Berita Harian]]
| location =
| access-date = 2020-08-15
}}</ref>
Those vegetables were then sold not just to customers, but also restaurants in Janda Baik.This sentence came out of nowhere. Is it supposed to connect to the previous sentence, and if so, how?
Cyclists often ride to Janda Baik for the challenging terrain of the hills, scenic views, and plenty of great cuisines provided at variety restaurants in this village.I edited this a little already but there's some "puffy" words that act more to promote the area that give that information neutrally. Does this need to be included? It might be more appropriate at another Wikimedia project like WikiVoyage. this extends to the sentences after.
The Malaysian government feared that a Federal Government's Minister may have been captured by communist guerillas.Somewhat edited already; what's the relevance to the plane crash?
...due to he previously took part in a fight against Japanese Red Army in the past from 1973 until 1981.From the same citation that cited in this sentence. WPSamson ( talk) 02:41, 15 August 2020 (UTC)
@ WPSamson: Looking forward to your responses. — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 20:02, 14 August 2020 (UTC)
@ WPSamson: Alright, my work is done here. Good luck with the GAN! — Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 16:51, 16 August 2020 (UTC)
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Reviewer: S Marshall ( talk · contribs) 10:43, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
The earliest founder for this village are Haji Deris, Haji Kadir, and Haji Yasir, "founder" should be plural) and correct inflection in verbs (i.e. in phrases like
who built a hut and stayed in the area for almost a week before others start populated the area, use the infinitive after "start"). After this has been done, I'll make a further copyediting pass myself before making a decision on whether to pass or fail on this point.
Thank you. I have made some tweaks and I'm content to pass the article on this point.— S Marshall T/ C 12:12, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
Haji Yasir (in black suit) are one of the three founders of Kampung Tiga Haji, the previous name for Janda Baik.)
@ WPSamson: I'm pinging you to prompt you to read this GA review.— S Marshall T/ C 15:51, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
The weather table lists average days of rain, but the values from the source are daily chance of rain in %. Thus, the table says November averages 59 days of rain. The Weather Box template doesn't support daily chance of rain. I don't know enough about meteorology to know if it's a matter of simply multiplying the number of days in the month by the daily % chance of rain for the month. SESteve ( talk) 11:00, 17 September 2021 (UTC)