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Reviewer: Thurgate ( talk) 16:33, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
1. should brigadier be General brigadier?
2. The Pentagon. Suggest - A link for this.
3. served as. Suggest - he served as
4. with seniority from October 1975. As in command of the unit?
5. [ISAF]. Does ISAF need to be brackets?
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Anyway, nice article and good luck taking it further. Passed. Thurgate ( talk) 17:22, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Thurgate ( talk) 16:33, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
1. should brigadier be General brigadier?
2. The Pentagon. Suggest - A link for this.
3. served as. Suggest - he served as
4. with seniority from October 1975. As in command of the unit?
5. [ISAF]. Does ISAF need to be brackets?
I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow you to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns.
Thurgate (
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16:33, 4 March 2011 (UTC)
Anyway, nice article and good luck taking it further. Passed. Thurgate ( talk) 17:22, 4 March 2011 (UTC)