I'm not at all sure that
File:Alpino A5384.jpg is properly licensed. Contact the uploader to see if he took the photograph.
I have contacted them. However, as they have not been active since 2018, I am not certain I will get a reply quickly. What would you suggest I do not get a response please?
In the infobox, link standard, full load,
Menon (weapon) and all the various types of radars
Added. Also linked VDS.
In the infobox readers don't need the manufacturers for the turbines and diesels, nor the 76mm guns. And abbreviate anti-aircraft gun with a link
Done.
Add a |1 to the conversion template for the torpedo tubes to get a more accurate conversion
Amended.
Not sure that we need to know the models of helicopters in the lede, nor the exact mileage
Amended the mileage. The model of helicopter seems very important in the sources.
Hyphenate variable depth and provide the abbreviation in the lede
Amended.
Link hangar, Menon, pendant number, laid down, lead ship, launched
Added.
"the" Centauro class
Added.
Design used too frequently in the first paragraph of the design section; in the last sentence replace designed with intended and rephrase appopriately
Amended.
I'd suggest shortening the second infobox by noting only the changes made
I'm afraid not. I'd suggest deep searches of Google Books, Google Scholar and journals like Navy International, etc., and whatever you might find through the WikiLibrary. That's the main reason why I've not worked on hardly any post-WWII ships.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
01:04, 20 August 2023 (UTC)reply
I'm not at all sure that
File:Alpino A5384.jpg is properly licensed. Contact the uploader to see if he took the photograph.
I have contacted them. However, as they have not been active since 2018, I am not certain I will get a reply quickly. What would you suggest I do not get a response please?
In the infobox, link standard, full load,
Menon (weapon) and all the various types of radars
Added. Also linked VDS.
In the infobox readers don't need the manufacturers for the turbines and diesels, nor the 76mm guns. And abbreviate anti-aircraft gun with a link
Done.
Add a |1 to the conversion template for the torpedo tubes to get a more accurate conversion
Amended.
Not sure that we need to know the models of helicopters in the lede, nor the exact mileage
Amended the mileage. The model of helicopter seems very important in the sources.
Hyphenate variable depth and provide the abbreviation in the lede
Amended.
Link hangar, Menon, pendant number, laid down, lead ship, launched
Added.
"the" Centauro class
Added.
Design used too frequently in the first paragraph of the design section; in the last sentence replace designed with intended and rephrase appopriately
Amended.
I'd suggest shortening the second infobox by noting only the changes made
I'm afraid not. I'd suggest deep searches of Google Books, Google Scholar and journals like Navy International, etc., and whatever you might find through the WikiLibrary. That's the main reason why I've not worked on hardly any post-WWII ships.--
Sturmvogel 66 (
talk)
01:04, 20 August 2023 (UTC)reply