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Is this article's tone or style not acceptable?

@ 49ersBelongInSanFrancisco: Why does the article have these cleanup tags? Jarble ( talk) 14:25, 21 December 2023 (UTC) reply

An issue I immediately see is usage of things like calling it "important [to the person infodumping]" without that language in the source. Or calling it an "issue". These are not neutral presentations. The "Engaging with infodumping" is particularly bad with it's presentation. Moreover, there is not a single high quality source here, and those being used are all low and questionable quality. The template regarding it being written like a guide is likely targeted at the sort of wording used in the "Engaging with infodumping" section. The article does have multiple issues and does need work. Kimen8 ( talk) 15:19, 21 December 2023 (UTC) reply
Exactly. I think there's a plausible article about "infodumping" but this version suffers from the problems described above. 49ersBelongInSanFrancisco ( talk) 06:23, 22 December 2023 (UTC) reply

Feedback from New Page Review process

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Good start. Infodump is a very generic widely used term. This is an article about infodumping with respect to autistic/neurodivergent people. This article really needs a more specific title. I would have renamed except I think it can better be done by and editor with more expertise/sources in this area. Happy editing!

North8000 ( talk) 17:40, 30 March 2024 (UTC) reply

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Is this article's tone or style not acceptable?

@ 49ersBelongInSanFrancisco: Why does the article have these cleanup tags? Jarble ( talk) 14:25, 21 December 2023 (UTC) reply

An issue I immediately see is usage of things like calling it "important [to the person infodumping]" without that language in the source. Or calling it an "issue". These are not neutral presentations. The "Engaging with infodumping" is particularly bad with it's presentation. Moreover, there is not a single high quality source here, and those being used are all low and questionable quality. The template regarding it being written like a guide is likely targeted at the sort of wording used in the "Engaging with infodumping" section. The article does have multiple issues and does need work. Kimen8 ( talk) 15:19, 21 December 2023 (UTC) reply
Exactly. I think there's a plausible article about "infodumping" but this version suffers from the problems described above. 49ersBelongInSanFrancisco ( talk) 06:23, 22 December 2023 (UTC) reply

Feedback from New Page Review process

I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Good start. Infodump is a very generic widely used term. This is an article about infodumping with respect to autistic/neurodivergent people. This article really needs a more specific title. I would have renamed except I think it can better be done by and editor with more expertise/sources in this area. Happy editing!

North8000 ( talk) 17:40, 30 March 2024 (UTC) reply


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