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Removed tone of essay language, colloquial usage, and philosophical questions.

Went to teahouse chat, discussed problematic areas (see edit history) like removing essay tone by taking out essay-like "conclusion", adding citations and editing out remainder of majority of questionable parts using their critiques (MSJapan, primefac) John Brosin ( talk) 04:21, 8 September 2015 (UTC) reply