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This article feels a bit like an ad - lots of client names and sales jargon. Not bad enough to warrant a deletion but could use a little TLC.
I'm happy to provide factual information about this company in order to remove any bias. I see that there are entries for Muzak, DMX, Sirius, PlayNetwork, Truesonic, etc. I am reluctant to make many edits myself since I work for the company. Any advice?
Also, why does the link to Retail Media only work with initial caps?
Also, we are now known by InStore Broadcasting Network and secondarily as In-Store Broadcasting Network. Any way to make the unhyphened version the default? John 05:42, 2 November 2006 (UTC)PsychoSLC
PsychoSLC, I have no problem with you editing the article to add factual information, as long as you're comfortable with people (myself included) going over your edits with a fine-toothed comb afterward. The page can be moved to reflect your dropping the hyphen, but I don't know if I should do that unless a couple more folks concur here. JaedenStormes 13:54, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
I recommend that you take the 3 or 4 biggest clients and put them into a paragraph form, similar to the way it's done on Applied Media Technologies Corporation. Once that's done, we can take a serious look at removing the NPOV tag. JaedenStormes 13:58, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
I've made the last few changes that jumped out at me. I've removed the NPOV tag; I'm comfortable with the article as-is. Psycho, add anything else you feel you need to, just be careful not to get too marketing-ey. :)
JaedenStormes
19:02, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
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This article feels a bit like an ad - lots of client names and sales jargon. Not bad enough to warrant a deletion but could use a little TLC.
I'm happy to provide factual information about this company in order to remove any bias. I see that there are entries for Muzak, DMX, Sirius, PlayNetwork, Truesonic, etc. I am reluctant to make many edits myself since I work for the company. Any advice?
Also, why does the link to Retail Media only work with initial caps?
Also, we are now known by InStore Broadcasting Network and secondarily as In-Store Broadcasting Network. Any way to make the unhyphened version the default? John 05:42, 2 November 2006 (UTC)PsychoSLC
PsychoSLC, I have no problem with you editing the article to add factual information, as long as you're comfortable with people (myself included) going over your edits with a fine-toothed comb afterward. The page can be moved to reflect your dropping the hyphen, but I don't know if I should do that unless a couple more folks concur here. JaedenStormes 13:54, 10 November 2006 (UTC)
I recommend that you take the 3 or 4 biggest clients and put them into a paragraph form, similar to the way it's done on Applied Media Technologies Corporation. Once that's done, we can take a serious look at removing the NPOV tag. JaedenStormes 13:58, 13 November 2006 (UTC)
I've made the last few changes that jumped out at me. I've removed the NPOV tag; I'm comfortable with the article as-is. Psycho, add anything else you feel you need to, just be careful not to get too marketing-ey. :)
JaedenStormes
19:02, 13 November 2006 (UTC)