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Reviewer: ProgrammingGeek ( talk · contribs) 17:18, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
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17:18, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
I have an issue with the History section, namely the very small sections for each update of iOS 9. I really don't think it's necessary to have it the way it is. Lots of high-quality articles for software use tables for version histories, which is something you should probably do here, seeing as there's very little to say for each update. You can always have a "Notes" or "Changes" column in the table to retain the information on each version. An alternative course of action would be to leave that information for the article iOS version history, where these changes are already described in much greater detail. Or, perhaps you could copy some of the information from that article into this article, to better justify those headers.
It appears that excessive headers are a problem elsewhere in the article, too. For starters, with so many headers, it may be a good idea to alphabetize the sub-sections under "System features" and "App features". I would look to articles like Windows 10 for how you can potentially consolidate sections under common subjects to create larger, fuller sections with better readability. Bruzer Fox 02:21, 2 December 2017 (UTC)
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I intend to start ASAP. Thanks,
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talktome
17:18, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
I have an issue with the History section, namely the very small sections for each update of iOS 9. I really don't think it's necessary to have it the way it is. Lots of high-quality articles for software use tables for version histories, which is something you should probably do here, seeing as there's very little to say for each update. You can always have a "Notes" or "Changes" column in the table to retain the information on each version. An alternative course of action would be to leave that information for the article iOS version history, where these changes are already described in much greater detail. Or, perhaps you could copy some of the information from that article into this article, to better justify those headers.
It appears that excessive headers are a problem elsewhere in the article, too. For starters, with so many headers, it may be a good idea to alphabetize the sub-sections under "System features" and "App features". I would look to articles like Windows 10 for how you can potentially consolidate sections under common subjects to create larger, fuller sections with better readability. Bruzer Fox 02:21, 2 December 2017 (UTC)