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Relevant information to be found on the corporate website of Hunkemöller which could be a relevant addition to this Wikipedia page: https://www.hkmi.com/ Suggested changes:Bold text
Company history/company structure: [1]
in 2003 the company made the step to start their first online webshop in the Netherlands. In 2009 the German webshop followed which is now the biggest market. Nowadays Hunkemöller has country specific webshops in: the Netherlands, Germany, Belgium, the U.K., Luxemburg, Switzerland, Austria, France, Denmark, Sweden & in Spain.
"Since August the 31, the Dutch model Doutzen Kroes represents Hunkemöller as the new face of the brand.[2] Previously, the model and moderator Sylvie Meis was the face of the company."
--> There is no year mentioned with "August 31". Doutzen Kroes became the face of the brand in 2016. [3]
"Hunkemöller runs an omni-channel operation, which contains own-operated stores, shop-in-shops, e-commerce and international franchise units. Hunkemöller began its franchise program in 1979. These days the lingerie company contains more than 800 stores, with more than 6,200 employers.[3] 2015 Hunkemöller recorded a turnover of 440 Million Euros.[4] The company was acquired by The Carlyle Group in the beginning of 2016.[5] Since the end of 2010 the company belonged to PAI Partners, a European private equity group.[6] Before it was part of Maxeda, a retail business from the Netherlands. Hunkemöller’s headquarter is in Hilversum."
--> the company has over 850 stores now. --> in 2011 Hunkemöller opened its 500th store and PAI partners acquired the company from its previous owner Maxeda. That year the company recorded a turnover of 440 Million Euros. In 2016 the 800th store was opened and acquired by current owner: The Carlyle Group. In 2017 Hunkemöller started "buying back" franchise stores in the Netherlands. [4]
Global expansion:
Europe In 2001 the first Hunkemöller stores were opened in Denmark and France. In 2007 Hunkemöller firstly entered the Southern European market with their first store in Spain. The last years expansion in Spain has intensified since Hunkemöller is planning to open 140 stores. Besides Spain Hunkemöller opened it's first store in Switzerland in 2017 and is planning on entering multiple countries in Europe. Hunkemöller will expand to multiple Nordic countries, including to Norway (the first in 2018) and in Finland (the first in 2021). And in 2018 Hunkemöller will also open their first stores in Poland. The first store in Portugal is planned for 2020. [5]
China By the end of 2018 Hunkemöller will open its first stores in China as well. The company is planning on opening 40 stores in China by 2022. The main cities to target first are likely to be Shanghai and Beijing. [6]
Russia Hunkemöller has opened its first three stores in Russia in 2018 and is planning on having opened 12 stores by the end of 2018. The lingerie retailer should have 66 stores opened in Russia by the end of 2022. The focus will lie on Moscow and St Petersburgh, along with other key cities in western Russia. [7]
Supply chain Hunkemöller collections are designed at the Hunkemöller Headquarter in Hilversum. The design, production and selling all happens in-house. Hunkemöller works with suppliers across the globe, but doesn't own any of the factories that produce their products. Hunkemöller is a member of the BSCI (Business Social Compliance Initiative), which works to improve working conditions in the supply chain. [8]
HKM-EN ( talk) 13:20, 5 September 2018 (UTC)
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Relevant information to be found on the corporate website of Hunkemöller which could be a relevant addition to this Wikipedia page: https://www.hkmi.com/ Suggested changes:Bold text
Company history/company structure: [9]
in 2003 the company made the step to start their first online webshop in the Netherlands. In 2009 the German webshop followed which is now the biggest market. Nowadays Hunkemöller has country specific webshops in: the Netherlands, Germany, Belgium, the U.K., Luxemburg, Switzerland, Austria, France, Denmark, Sweden & in Spain.
"Since August the 31, the Dutch model Doutzen Kroes represents Hunkemöller as the new face of the brand.[2] Previously, the model and moderator Sylvie Meis was the face of the company."
--> There is no year mentioned with "August 31". Doutzen Kroes became the face of the brand in 2016. [11]
"Hunkemöller runs an omni-channel operation, which contains own-operated stores, shop-in-shops, e-commerce and international franchise units. Hunkemöller began its franchise program in 1979. These days the lingerie company contains more than 800 stores, with more than 6,200 employers.[3] 2015 Hunkemöller recorded a turnover of 440 Million Euros.[4] The company was acquired by The Carlyle Group in the beginning of 2016.[5] Since the end of 2010 the company belonged to PAI Partners, a European private equity group.[6] Before it was part of Maxeda, a retail business from the Netherlands. Hunkemöller’s headquarter is in Hilversum."
--> the company has over 850 stores now. --> in 2011 Hunkemöller opened its 500th store and PAI partners acquired the company from its previous owner Maxeda. That year the company recorded a turnover of 440 Million Euros. In 2016 the 800th store was opened and acquired by current owner: The Carlyle Group. In 2017 Hunkemöller started "buying back" franchise stores in the Netherlands. [12]
Global expansion:
Europe In 2001 the first Hunkemöller stores were opened in Denmark and France. In 2007 Hunkemöller firstly entered the Southern European market with their first store in Spain. The last years expansion in Spain has intensified since Hunkemöller is planning to open 140 stores. Besides Spain Hunkemöller opened it's first store in Switzerland in 2017 and is planning on entering multiple countries in Europe. Hunkemöller will expand to multiple Nordic countries, including to Norway (the first in 2018) and in Finland (the first in 2021). And in 2018 Hunkemöller will also open their first stores in Poland. The first store in Portugal is planned for 2020. [13]
China By the end of 2018 Hunkemöller will open its first stores in China as well. The company is planning on opening 40 stores in China by 2022. The main cities to target first are likely to be Shanghai and Beijing. [14]
Russia Hunkemöller has opened its first three stores in Russia in 2018 and is planning on having opened 12 stores by the end of 2018. The lingerie retailer should have 66 stores opened in Russia by the end of 2022. The focus will lie on Moscow and St Petersburgh, along with other key cities in western Russia. [15]
Supply chain Hunkemöller collections are designed at the Hunkemöller Headquarter in Hilversum. The design, production and selling all happens in-house. Hunkemöller works with suppliers across the globe, but doesn't own any of the factories that produce their products. Hunkemöller is a member of the BSCI (Business Social Compliance Initiative), which works to improve working conditions in the supply chain. [16]
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HKM-EN ( talk) 09:23, 20 September 2018 (UTC)
Could this page be added to a few categories? Therefore, could following categories be added in the correct way at the bottom of the article?
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Is it just me or is the ending of the "Diversity & Inclusion" section with "However this is very hypocritical of course." (no source) clearly inconsistent with Wikipedia style? Anacoid ( talk) 12:38, 8 December 2022 (UTC)
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This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. The requested text's references are not formatted according to the citation style predominantly in use with the subject article ( WP:CITEVAR). Any additions made to the article must have references formatted according to the style already in use with the article. Please see the Reply section below for more information about this issue. |
Relevant information to be found on the corporate website of Hunkemöller which could be a relevant addition to this Wikipedia page: https://www.hkmi.com/ Suggested changes:Bold text
Company history/company structure: [1]
in 2003 the company made the step to start their first online webshop in the Netherlands. In 2009 the German webshop followed which is now the biggest market. Nowadays Hunkemöller has country specific webshops in: the Netherlands, Germany, Belgium, the U.K., Luxemburg, Switzerland, Austria, France, Denmark, Sweden & in Spain.
"Since August the 31, the Dutch model Doutzen Kroes represents Hunkemöller as the new face of the brand.[2] Previously, the model and moderator Sylvie Meis was the face of the company."
--> There is no year mentioned with "August 31". Doutzen Kroes became the face of the brand in 2016. [3]
"Hunkemöller runs an omni-channel operation, which contains own-operated stores, shop-in-shops, e-commerce and international franchise units. Hunkemöller began its franchise program in 1979. These days the lingerie company contains more than 800 stores, with more than 6,200 employers.[3] 2015 Hunkemöller recorded a turnover of 440 Million Euros.[4] The company was acquired by The Carlyle Group in the beginning of 2016.[5] Since the end of 2010 the company belonged to PAI Partners, a European private equity group.[6] Before it was part of Maxeda, a retail business from the Netherlands. Hunkemöller’s headquarter is in Hilversum."
--> the company has over 850 stores now. --> in 2011 Hunkemöller opened its 500th store and PAI partners acquired the company from its previous owner Maxeda. That year the company recorded a turnover of 440 Million Euros. In 2016 the 800th store was opened and acquired by current owner: The Carlyle Group. In 2017 Hunkemöller started "buying back" franchise stores in the Netherlands. [4]
Global expansion:
Europe In 2001 the first Hunkemöller stores were opened in Denmark and France. In 2007 Hunkemöller firstly entered the Southern European market with their first store in Spain. The last years expansion in Spain has intensified since Hunkemöller is planning to open 140 stores. Besides Spain Hunkemöller opened it's first store in Switzerland in 2017 and is planning on entering multiple countries in Europe. Hunkemöller will expand to multiple Nordic countries, including to Norway (the first in 2018) and in Finland (the first in 2021). And in 2018 Hunkemöller will also open their first stores in Poland. The first store in Portugal is planned for 2020. [5]
China By the end of 2018 Hunkemöller will open its first stores in China as well. The company is planning on opening 40 stores in China by 2022. The main cities to target first are likely to be Shanghai and Beijing. [6]
Russia Hunkemöller has opened its first three stores in Russia in 2018 and is planning on having opened 12 stores by the end of 2018. The lingerie retailer should have 66 stores opened in Russia by the end of 2022. The focus will lie on Moscow and St Petersburgh, along with other key cities in western Russia. [7]
Supply chain Hunkemöller collections are designed at the Hunkemöller Headquarter in Hilversum. The design, production and selling all happens in-house. Hunkemöller works with suppliers across the globe, but doesn't own any of the factories that produce their products. Hunkemöller is a member of the BSCI (Business Social Compliance Initiative), which works to improve working conditions in the supply chain. [8]
HKM-EN ( talk) 13:20, 5 September 2018 (UTC)
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In the example above there are three URL's provided with the claim statements, but these URL's have not been placed using Citation Style 1, which is the style predominantly used by the Hunkemöller article. Using this style, the WikiFormatted text would resemble the following:
In the example above the references have been formatted according to Citation Style 1, which shows the author, the source's name, date, etc., all information which is lost when only the links are provided. As I indicated above, since Wikipedia is a volunteer project, larger edit requests such yours are generally expected to have this formatting done before the request is submitted for review. |
Kindly rewrite your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example shown in the collapsed section above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request at your earliest convenience. If you have any questions about this formatting please don't hesitate to ask myself or another editor. Regards, spintendo 11:12, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
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Thank you for your feedback. I've rewritten the suggested edit with I believe the right formatting. Is this the correct way? -- HKM-EN ( talk) 13:14, 14 September 2018 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. Please see the Reply section below for more information about this request. |
Relevant information to be found on the corporate website of Hunkemöller which could be a relevant addition to this Wikipedia page: https://www.hkmi.com/ Suggested changes:Bold text
Company history/company structure: [9]
in 2003 the company made the step to start their first online webshop in the Netherlands. In 2009 the German webshop followed which is now the biggest market. Nowadays Hunkemöller has country specific webshops in: the Netherlands, Germany, Belgium, the U.K., Luxemburg, Switzerland, Austria, France, Denmark, Sweden & in Spain.
"Since August the 31, the Dutch model Doutzen Kroes represents Hunkemöller as the new face of the brand.[2] Previously, the model and moderator Sylvie Meis was the face of the company."
--> There is no year mentioned with "August 31". Doutzen Kroes became the face of the brand in 2016. [11]
"Hunkemöller runs an omni-channel operation, which contains own-operated stores, shop-in-shops, e-commerce and international franchise units. Hunkemöller began its franchise program in 1979. These days the lingerie company contains more than 800 stores, with more than 6,200 employers.[3] 2015 Hunkemöller recorded a turnover of 440 Million Euros.[4] The company was acquired by The Carlyle Group in the beginning of 2016.[5] Since the end of 2010 the company belonged to PAI Partners, a European private equity group.[6] Before it was part of Maxeda, a retail business from the Netherlands. Hunkemöller’s headquarter is in Hilversum."
--> the company has over 850 stores now. --> in 2011 Hunkemöller opened its 500th store and PAI partners acquired the company from its previous owner Maxeda. That year the company recorded a turnover of 440 Million Euros. In 2016 the 800th store was opened and acquired by current owner: The Carlyle Group. In 2017 Hunkemöller started "buying back" franchise stores in the Netherlands. [12]
Global expansion:
Europe In 2001 the first Hunkemöller stores were opened in Denmark and France. In 2007 Hunkemöller firstly entered the Southern European market with their first store in Spain. The last years expansion in Spain has intensified since Hunkemöller is planning to open 140 stores. Besides Spain Hunkemöller opened it's first store in Switzerland in 2017 and is planning on entering multiple countries in Europe. Hunkemöller will expand to multiple Nordic countries, including to Norway (the first in 2018) and in Finland (the first in 2021). And in 2018 Hunkemöller will also open their first stores in Poland. The first store in Portugal is planned for 2020. [13]
China By the end of 2018 Hunkemöller will open its first stores in China as well. The company is planning on opening 40 stores in China by 2022. The main cities to target first are likely to be Shanghai and Beijing. [14]
Russia Hunkemöller has opened its first three stores in Russia in 2018 and is planning on having opened 12 stores by the end of 2018. The lingerie retailer should have 66 stores opened in Russia by the end of 2022. The focus will lie on Moscow and St Petersburgh, along with other key cities in western Russia. [15]
Supply chain Hunkemöller collections are designed at the Hunkemöller Headquarter in Hilversum. The design, production and selling all happens in-house. Hunkemöller works with suppliers across the globe, but doesn't own any of the factories that produce their products. Hunkemöller is a member of the BSCI (Business Social Compliance Initiative), which works to improve working conditions in the supply chain. [16]
HKM-EN ( talk) 13:19, 19 September 2018 (UTC)
References
Unable to approve edit request
There remains two issues which are affecting this request:
Self-published and questionable sources may be used as sources of information about themselves, usually in articles about themselves or their activities, without the self-published source requirement that they be published experts in the field, so long as: #5: The article is not based primarily on such sources. [1] [a]
Adding the references from the request would make the article predominantly sourced by the company itself (which in fact it largely already is). This would invoke the requirement above that they be published experts in the field. In order to verify that requirement, references from other sources outside of the company must be provided stating that the company is an expert in the areas these claims are addressing. To that end, please provide sources from outside of the company to reference these claims.
Notes
References
Nonetheless, would you agree that information on the page could benefit from rephrasing and a few additions? Would there be interest, please consider including the following facts in several sections of the article suggestions including CS1 reference formatting of independent sources.
HKM-EN ( talk) 09:23, 20 September 2018 (UTC)
Could this page be added to a few categories? Therefore, could following categories be added in the correct way at the bottom of the article?
HKM-EN ( talk) 09:01, 4 October 2018 (UTC)
The following Wikimedia Commons file used on this page has been nominated for speedy deletion:
You can see the reason for deletion at the file description page linked above. — Community Tech bot ( talk) 14:52, 25 May 2019 (UTC)
Is it just me or is the ending of the "Diversity & Inclusion" section with "However this is very hypocritical of course." (no source) clearly inconsistent with Wikipedia style? Anacoid ( talk) 12:38, 8 December 2022 (UTC)