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Isn't it a little weird that "In 1996, Honeywell acquired Duracraft and began marketing its products in the home comfort sector. Today, Kaz Incorporated owns both Duracraft and Honeywell's home comfort lines." is under the heading "Defense"? While I would like to be both comfortable and safe, I am not sure Honeywell's defense line is used in the home.
Also, there is little information on their control technology, which I suspect is their main business. 216.255.104.61 ( talk) 16:03, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
Open request to the Wikipedian who is managing this article. I work for Honeywell and would like to make the Honeywell entry more robust, and accurate of the business and history of Honeywell. Having made that comment, I first became involved with Wikipedia back in 2006 and even attended Wikimania that year. I don't want to run afoul of Wikipedia rules, but I do note that your discussion states you would like to upgrade corporate entries. Thanks ... Rich Hoeg ... the [Northstar Nerd | http://www.northstarnerd.org]. Sorry my code is not perfect; I'm a bit rusty.
I would be very happy to post suggested updates on this page for review and acceptance or rejection.
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Lots of companies have their own vehicles with labels on them but I'm not sure that Honeywell has them as major parts of its brand or identity. The labels shown in the photos aren't even legible.-- Hooperbloob ( talk) 17:15, 11 November 2009 (UTC)
I think the proliferation of articles on Honeywell is confusing. There's this article on Honeywell (Honeywell International, Inc.) as well as separate articles on Honeywell Aerospace and Honeywell Turbo Technologies. Yet this parent Honeywell International page is missing something that's badly needed: a diagram outlining the structure of the conglomerate, which could explain where some of the "parts" (Aerospace and Turbo Technologies) fit into the whole. In fact, I think Turbo Technologies is itself a part (or a set of products) of the Honeywell Aerospace. As things now stand, there is redundancy among the three articles as well as confusion about their relationships.~Mack2~
I suggest we have a section under the today area of the page that explains more about the heating controls area. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jessica Clamp ( talk • contribs) 12:26, 23 December 2010 (UTC)
I work for a division of Honeywell Technology Solutions (HTSI to be exact, Honeywell Technology Solutions, Inc.) and it's located in Colorado Springs, Colorado. It's not a "research" division "dedicated to innovative product research"; it's pretty much all development (it's Defense). I notice the section has no references, but I don't want to add to the mediocrity. But, just FYI, as it stands, it's misleading. There may be an HTSI division in India, but it is no manner the only one. — Frεcklεfσσt | Talk 01:45, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
There were no citations for the original acquisition section. I changed the bullet list to a readable table format. I am also working to find citations for this section. Lgkkitkat ( talk) 22:27, 28 September 2014 (UTC)
Hello BilCat - in order for me to improve my contributions to articles I seek the protocol of editing from more experienced community members. Please explain why you classified my edit as unproductive since no content was removed - I am really confused. It is my belief that our primary goal is to keep all information current. I have added citations to support my updated information. I respectfully request you to review the first paragraph to see that no information was removed but rather placed in a readable place. Please share your thoughts on this...it would be very much appreciated. Lgkkitkat ( talk) 03:05, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
I don't get this:
If the practices are only superficially similar, why is Toyota's system relevant to the article?
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I'm currently working on a new draft of the Honeywell article here, aiming to improve the organizational structure, update figures and information, and expand on the history. I kept most of the existing content intact and I think I've done a pretty good job maintaining NPOV and making sure everything has quality references, but I'd appreciate any help from the community in ensuring that's the case. Feel free to edit it or leave me comments on my sandbox, and/or publish any content you think is suitable and relevant. -- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 00:01, 23 January 2015 (UTC)
To respond to GeorgeLouis's concerns, these are the specific changes I'm proposing:
Again, my draft can be found here. If anyone would be so kind as to review it, in full or in part, I would sincerely appreciate the help. FacultiesIntact ( talk) 00:18, 12 March 2015 (UTC)
I went ahead and took screenshots of the relevant pages of Honeywell's Annual Report, if that helps. Here is page 42 with figures for revenue, operating income, and net income, and here is page 44 with figures for total assets and total equity. -- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 00:46, 9 June 2015 (UTC)
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Can someone review just the updated infobox and acquisitions sections? Thanks! -- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 17:02, 15 June 2015 (UTC)
Because I've worked with COI editors in the past I was asked to go over the draft at User:FacultiesIntact/sandbox/Honeywell, and barring some minor content and aesthetic details (that second thermostat picture needs to go) I have no problem with replacing the current article with that. It preserves the existing material, rearranges it more logically and greatly improves our coverage of the company. I can see how the list of products might need to possibly be trimmed, although I'm not sure how exactly. The Company Culture section is also a bit awkward. But overall I think it's better than what we have at the moment. It certainly preserves all the controversial material, which is always concern with COI edits. @ GeorgeLouis: Are you OK with this? § FreeRangeFrog croak 23:19, 23 July 2015 (UTC)
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Requesting the article be updated via the draft linked here and commented upon by FreeRangeFrog above. The history section is improved and reads chronologically, and the article overall is more comprehensive.-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 18:14, 19 September 2015 (UTC)
Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented. [History and finances updated. Structure information added. Did not add first two photos (as would create clutter), remove WSJ criticism, or add the section 'Company culture', as it tended towards advertising. Section 'Business Units' needs to be trimmed, but have no idea how. Dschslava ( talk) 00:52, 29 December 2015 (UTC)] |
I just noticed an anonymous IP had changed the CEO and Chairman in the Corporate Governance section, and have since reverted it. My cursory investigation suggested that the IP address came from Honeywell India, and as I do work for Honeywell here, I'll be doing my best to get to the bottom of it. Feel free to leave me any comments or concerns.-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 18:44, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Added a section on Trend Controls and redirected the page to here. The company's not notable enough to merit their own page. CerealKillerYum ( talk) 07:52, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
In July, Honeywell split one of their strategic business units, Automation and Control Solutions, into two new units: Home and Building Technologies (HBT) and Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS). I made adjustments to the lead and Business Units in my sandbox to reflect the change. The relevant reference is in the opening of their Form 8-K filed with the SEC last month, found here. Could someone without a COI review this and make the updates?-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 22:50, 10 August 2016 (UTC)
I've drafted some edits to the criticism section of the article to put everything in chronological order to clarify the actual events which occurred. I also clarified that the division specifically responsible for the cluster bombs was spun off from Honeywell in 1990. Can someone review these suggestions? I think they're all clear improvements to the article.-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 01:28, 25 January 2017 (UTC)
Honeywell filed their latest 10-K in February. I've got the current figures, along with the referenced 10-K, drafted up in my sandbox. Can someone update the numbers in the infobox?-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 01:00, 18 March 2017 (UTC)
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The Recent history section is reading more like a timeline and less like a narrative, so I went ahead and tried to reorganize the content into a more cohesive section ( sandbox here). It's largely just collecting the information and breaking them into relevant paragraphs, but I also added the news about Adamczyk's succession, as well as changed "The expansion will create more than 800 jobs" in regards to the Atlanta relocation to "The expansion will add more than 800 jobs" as no new roles were actually being created, as originally reported in the new citation from The Atlanta Journal-Constitution. Would someone mind taking a look at my proposed changes?-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 23:48, 18 January 2018 (UTC)
The Products and services section has been flagged for expansion since 2015. I've been working on an expanded version, with the section organized by SBG rather than the disparate "Aircraft," "Missiles and rockets," and "Honeywell Scanning and Mobility." Does anyone want to collaborate on improving my list? I want to make the section more comprehensive than its current state, but I don't want to overreach to the point of promotion.-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 03:14, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
Under "Expansion: 1927–1985" the article states that Honeywell distributed this camera from Ricoh. However, Ricoh only acquired the Pentax camera line in 2011. The Japanese producer of this camera at the time was Asahi Optical Company, Ltd. ( http://www.aohc.it/testi.php?id_testi=50 , http://camera-wiki.org/wiki/Pentax) — Preceding unsigned comment added by MrShoggoth ( talk • contribs) 05:54, 20 June 2018 (UTC)
Datamatic, Automatic Error-Correction, Newton Highlands, Massachusetts -- 89.25.210.104 ( talk) 01:11, 29 June 2018 (UTC)
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As I mentioned above, the Products and services section has been flagged for expansion for three years now. I drafted expanded version, with the section organized by business groups rather than the disparate "Aircraft," "Missiles and rockets," and "Honeywell Scanning and Mobility." I received differing feedback from other editors, one supporting the content but requesting references (which have since been added), one wanting a change into prose format, and another suggesting I pursue more "official" channels for COI edits. Given that, I thought a formal edit request would be a suitable path forward.-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 23:59, 9 July 2018 (UTC)
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"I'm going to start working on a list article"but I've only seen these changes proposed here which involve
"Adding Honeywell HTF7000, Honeywell HTS900, and Honeywell TPE331 to the new Aerospace subsection"does this mean you want to add a subsection to the Aerospace section (and if so, which one) or does this mean you want to add a new Aerospace Subsection to some other location? This was unclear. It's also unclear how re-titling the "Honeywell Scanning and Mobility" subsection as "Safety and Productivity Solutions" brings about a "cohesive sorting schema". Because the company titles them that way rings truer as a reason. If this is the case, then that should just be stated. The company's choice of nomenclature can be used as a guide. But don't forget that real change would be creating pages where this information can be moved to, because the main page has gotten too crowded. It's not clear that these changes do that. If there are any other areas where I was not clear please let me know so I can clarify. spintendo 20:06, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
"This draft creates these new subsections, and could eliminate the discrepancy on the main article."
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The information contained within the Honeywell#Environmental_record section is outdated. Regarding the cleanup of Onondaga Lake, there have been a few updates since 2014. Additionally, I'm proposing an added clarification that the waste site was a former Allied Corporation property.
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Current Content: For the fiscal year 2017, Honeywell reported earnings of US$1.933 billion, with an annual revenue of US$40.534 billion, an increase of 3.1% over the previous fiscal cycle. Honeywell's shares traded at over $131 per share, and its market capitalization was valued at over US$108.1 billion in October 2018.
Proposed Content update: For the fiscal year 2018, Honeywell reported earnings of US$6.765 billion, with an annual revenue of US$41.802 billion, an increase of 3.13% over the previous fiscal cycle. Honeywell's shares traded at over $134 per share, and its market capitalization was valued at over US$120.26 billion in September 2019. [1]
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Current Content: 2017 financial data in the Infobox and Finances section
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Who has time to review these updates? I would appreciate any feedback or assistance.-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 04:16, 10 September 2019 (UTC)
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Spintendo, Thank you for updating the Honeywell financial data in the infobox. As for the Financials section, @ Afus199620: added that and after some thought I can understand why. To a reader, historical financial data is helpful to study in its numeric form, especially for a reader who is searching online for that information. This is historical data. It is beneficial to the reader for convenience and access to the secondary source for further study. Would you consider this? Or shall we also invite Afus199620 for his/her input?-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 01:25, 18 September 2019 (UTC)
@ Mean as custard:I noticed you recently added a promotional content warning banner to Honeywell. My former colleague User:FacultiesIntact collaborated with other editors to help contribute to the article. Company articles can be challenging to navigate between the fine line of promotion and education. Were there any sections in particular that stood out to you as overly promotional?
I think there’s still a lot of good content there and I wouldn’t want the reader to conflate that with advertising. I have a COI with Honeywell too. In the spirit of collaboration, how about we open the conversation to others for feedback on the offending content. Would you be open to collaborating?-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 00:19, 6 September 2019 (UTC)
The lead section of the article needs some updates based on organizational changes at Honeywell International. The revisions are below. I included the references. I proposed changes in that section in edit request format. Here is my suggested lead section in my sandbox. Chefmikesf ( talk) 21:21, 14 November 2019 (UTC) #1 Current Content: Honeywell International Inc. is an American multinational conglomerate company that produces commercial and consumer products, engineering services and aerospace systems. Proposed Content: Honeywell International Inc. is an American multinational conglomerate company that offers industrial products, software, engineering services.
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Cite error: The Reason: updating this sentence to clarify what Honeywell does and remove descriptors that no longer represent what the company produces. #2 Current Content: The company operates four business units, known as Strategic Business Units – Honeywell Aerospace, Home and Building Technologies (HBT), Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies. Proposed Content: The company operates four business units–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). [1] Reason: Honeywell International's 2018 10-K reflects new names for the business units. Honeywell no longer publicly uses "Strategic Business Units" in company information. References: page 55 of the 2018 10-K [1] #3 Request: update global workforce to “110,000” and “44,000” are employed in the United States. Current Content: Honeywell has a global workforce of approximately 130,000, of whom approximately 58,000 are employed in the United States. Proposed Content: Honeywell has a global workforce of approximately 110,000, of whom approximately 44,000 are employed in the United States. [1] Reason: updating out of date information References: page 4 of the 2018 10-K [1] #4 Current Content: Honeywell has many brands that commercial and retail consumers may recognize, including its line of home thermostats (particularly the iconic round type) and Garrett turbochargers. In addition to consumer home products, Honeywell produces thermostats, sensors, security alarm systems, and air cleaners and dehumidifiers. The company also licenses its brand name for use in various retail products made by other manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders. Proposed Content: In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett turbochargers Cite error: The
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Hi! I'm posting here on behalf of Honeywell, a client of mine. I'd like to request some updates to this article. Some of the edits below are drafted up in my sandbox, here.
The article needs some updates based on organizational changes at Honeywell International, and suggestions from editors over the past year. My edits should address and improve the article compliant to WP: COI, WP:NPOV, and WP:LEAD. I included the references in the Ref-talk box.
I see on the current article:
Feel free to ping me for any clarifications. Thanks! -- Chefmikesf ( talk) 18:23, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
Current Content: The company operates four business units–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). Proposed Content: The company operates four business units–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). Within business groups are business units. Request and Reason: Update the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018 Aerospace1. Request: Remove “Honeywell Transportation Systems”. Current Content:
Honeywell Transportation Systems produces engine boosting turbochargers for passenger cars and commercial vehicles. Proposed Content:
2. Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in each sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here.
Building Technologies1. Request: Remove "SBGs" and “Home and” from Home and Building Technologies Current Content: Home and Building Technologies Honeywell HBT was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio. Proposed Content: Building Technologies Honeywell HBT was created when Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new groups, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio. It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo. [1] Reason: Updated the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018.
2. Request: Rewrite section to reflect Resideo spinoff, remove promotional content, add content reflecting spin-off into Resideo. Current Content: Honeywell Building Solutions (HBS) products and services provide energy efficiency and security in buildings and communities. Smart grid, microgrid and on-site power generation, integrated security, building controls, automation, and management, system service, maintenance and optimization, and smart building are examples of the technologies produced by the HBS business unit. HBS optimizes automation technology, designs and delivers microgrids that provide energy security, and delivers demand response and energy-efficiency programs to help utilities and the electrical grid operate optimally. In June 2016, Honeywell announced a new release of its building management system, Enterprise Buildings Integrator (EBI) to support the Middle East region's smart building and cities ambitions. In a statement, Honeywell said that EBI R500 leverages the connectivity of today's buildings to help make them more strategic assets that are green, safe and productive. Honeywell Smarthomes serve customers worldwide to control technologies for buildings, homes and industry; turbochargers; and performance materials. We are building a smarter, safer, and more sustainable world. Proposed Content: Honeywell Building Solutions (HBS) products and services provide energy efficiency and security in buildings and communities. Smart grid, microgrid and on-site power generation, integrated security, building controls, automation, and management, system service, maintenance and optimization, and smart building are examples of the technologies produced by the HBS business unit. HBS optimizes automation technology, designs and delivers microgrids that provide energy security, and delivers demand response and energy-efficiency programs to help utilities and the electrical grid operate optimally.It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo. [2]
Current Content: Honeywell Environmental and Energy Solutions serves industrial and consumer customers. Products include air quality, commercial combustion, commercial components, industrial components, home thermostats (including smart and wi-fi thermostats), residential combustion, whole house air quality, whole house water treatment and control, HVAC zoning, and hydronic heating. Proposed Content: Honeywell Environmental and Energy Solutions serves industrial customers. Products include air quality, commercial combustion, commercial components, industrial components, HVAC zoning, and hydronic heating. [3] Reason: Homes products are no longer offered by Honeywell. Safety and Productivity Solutions1. Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in this sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here.
2. Request: Remove all mentions of SBG for WP:NPOV Current Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, Home and Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. Proposed Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the Automation and Control Solutions Business Group was split into two new BGs, Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs. Performance Materials and Technologies1. Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in this sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here.
2. Request: Remove all mentions of SBG for WP:NPOV Current Content: The Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group is divided into six business units. Products include process technology for oil and gas processing, fuels, films and additives, special chemicals, electronic materials, and renewable transport fuels. Honeywell UOP Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries. Proposed Content: The Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies Business Group is divided into six business units. Products include process technology for oil and gas processing, fuels, films and additives, special chemicals, electronic materials, and renewable transport fuels. Honeywell UOP Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies Business Group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries. Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs Current Content Honeywell has many brands that commercial and retail consumers may recognize, including its line of home thermostats (particularly the iconic round type) and Garrett turbochargers. In addition to consumer home products, Honeywell produces thermostats, sensors, security alarm systems, and air cleaners and dehumidifiers. The company also licenses its brand name for use in various retail products made by other manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders. Proposed Content In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett Advancing Motion [4] and consumer products business as Resideo. [1] Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange. Honeywell continues to license its name to Resideo, which creates residential thermostats and security systems as Honeywell Home. The company also licenses its brand name to for use in other retail products made by partner manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders. [5]
These statements inform the reader that two of Honeywell's business units are separate and no longer Honeywell business units. Respectively, they are now known as Garrett and Resideo.
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1. Please remove the last sentence of the first paragraph: On September 12, 2016, Morris Plain, N.J.-based Honeywell announced that it would invest $20 million in the first-of-its-kind software development center and relocate the headquarters of its nearly $10 billion home and building technologies division from suburban Minneapolis to Atlanta. The expansion will add more than 800 jobs. [1] [2] Please replace with: On September 12, 2016, Morris Plain, N.J.-based Honeywell announced that it would relocate the headquarters of its building technologies division from suburban Minneapolis to Atlanta. In 2017, Honeywell opened the software center in Atlanta, Georgia. The expansion added more than 800 jobs. [3] [2] [4] 2. Please remove the third paragraph: In early 2019 Honeywell launched its home spinoff under the brand Resideo, focusing mostly on programmable and remotely operated thermostats. In October 2019, the company announced the establishment of an advanced technology center called Honeywell Robotics, which will be focused on innovating and developing artificial intelligence, machine learning, computer vision and advanced robotics to be used across supply chains. [5] Please replace with: In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett and consumer products business as Resideo. [6] [7] Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange (NYSE). In May 2019, Honeywell launched Honeywell Forge, an Industrial internet of things analytics platform. [8] [9] On June 5, 2019, Honeywell moved their headquarters to Charlotte, North Carolina. October 2019, the company established Honeywell Robotics. [10] [11] Reason To remove content to make the article WP:NPOV compliant and added some historical milestones to the section with references.
1. Please replace the word units with groups in the first sentence 2. Add this as the second sentence: Within business groups are business units.
The company operates four business groups–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). Within business groups are business units. Request and Reason: Update the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018.
3. Request: Remove “Honeywell Transportation Systems” and the sentence in its section. Honeywell Transportation Systems is no longer part of the company.
Honeywell Transportation Systems produces engine boosting turbochargers for passenger cars and commercial vehicles.
Request and Reason: Remove service solutions from the Aerospace sentence and replace with services. Per talk page NPOV request here.
5. Request and Reason: Remove air traffic management solutions from the Commercial Aviation sentence and replace with air traffic management. Per talk page NPOV request here.
6. Request: Remove “Home and” from Home and Building Technologies New Subtitle: Building Technologies 7. Request:Remove the first sentences from the section. Honeywell HBT was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio. Request: Replace with these proposed sentences: Honeywell HBT was created when Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new groups, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio. It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo. [7] Reason: Updated the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018. Add content reflecting spin-off into Resideo. Honeywell Building Solutions 8. Request: Please remove the second and third paragraph; Wikipedia:NOTPROMOTION: "In June 2016, Honeywell announced a new release of its building management system, Enterprise Buildings Integrator (EBI) to support the Middle East region's smart building and cities ambitions. In a statement, Honeywell said that EBI R500 leverages the connectivity of today's buildings to help make them more strategic assets that are green, safe and productive. Honeywell Smarthomes serve customers worldwide to control technologies for buildings, homes and industry; turbochargers; and performance materials. We are building a smarter, safer, and more sustainable world." Request:Please add this sentence to the end of the first paragraph: It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo. [12]
Environmental and Energy Solutions 9. Request: in Environmental Energy Solutions section, rewrite section to remove “home”
Proposed Content: Honeywell Environmental and Energy Solutions serves industrial customers. Products include air quality, commercial combustion, commercial components, industrial components, HVAC zoning, and hydronic heating. [13] Reason: Homes products are no longer offered by Honeywell.
Safety and Productivity Solutions 10. Request and Reason: remove "mobile computers and bar code scanners, radio frequency identification solutions" from Honeywell Process Solutions And replace with "radio frequency identification products such as readers and antennas, voice-enabled workflow and printers." per talk page NPOV request here. Request and Reason: Replace with "radio frequency identification products such as readers and antennas, voice-enabled workflow and printers."
Request: Remove all mentions of SBG in Safety and Productivity Solutions first sentence for WP:NPOV Current Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, Home and Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. Proposed Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the Automation and Control Solutions Business Group was split into two new BGs, Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs.
Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in this sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here. Honeywell Process Solutions offers automation controls to customers internationally. 13. Request: Remove all mentions of SBG for WP:NPOV Current Content: The Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group is divided into six business units. Products include process technology for oil and gas processing, fuels, films and additives, special chemicals, electronic materials, and renewable transport fuels. Honeywell UOP Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries.
Honeywell UOP Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies Business Group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries. Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs
1. Request: Please remove current content. Honeywell has many brands that commercial and retail consumers may recognize, including its line of home thermostats (particularly the iconic round type) and Garrett turbochargers. In addition to consumer home products, Honeywell produces thermostats, sensors, security alarm systems, and air cleaners and dehumidifiers. The company also licenses its brand name for use in various retail products made by other manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders. Request: Please replace with proposed content. In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett Advancing Motion [6] and consumer products business as Resideo. [7] Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange. Honeywell continues to license its name to Resideo, which creates residential thermostats and security systems as Honeywell Home. The company also licenses its brand name to for use in other retail products made by partner manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders. [14] Reason These statements inform the reader that two of Honeywell's business units are separate and no longer Honeywell business units. Respectively, they are now known as Garrett and Resideo. 1. Please remove Honeywell Turbo Technologies [14] from the See also section
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First, I want to address the COI edit from IP ADDRESS 199.64.7.231 on January 10, 2020. I am not associated with the editor and their edits.
Second, I can see you're busy with many edit requests. Your edit to the Honeywell article took place at 05:24, January 4, 2020. Then at 05:30, January 4, 2020 you posted to the Honeywell talk page in response to my request edit. Which happened first, can you recall the order of events? As I am reviewing each of your notes to the declined and unimplemented edit requests, many of the answers you seek clarification can be answered in this version of the Wikipedia article. For example, in Note 12, you said there are no mentions of SBGs. This version of the article includes four mentions of SBG in the Business unit section.-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 01:17, 15 January 2020 (UTC)
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1. Please remove the bulleted list of business units from the Business groups section:
2. Please add the correct bulleted list of business units to the Business groups section:
3. Using these references: [1] [2] [3] [4]
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Thank you-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 20:36, 28 January 2020 (UTC)
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Hello Indefensible,
I've moved our conversation from your talk page here. I see the article needs improvements in a few places, specifically the Lead, History, and the see also sections. The suggested edits are outlined below as a concept to improve the article. What are your thoughts? -- Chefmikesf ( talk) 00:42, 18 February 2020 (UTC)
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1. Please replace the current lead with a new proposed lead Honeywell International Inc. is an American multinational conglomerate company that offers industrial products, software, engineering services. The company operates four business units–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). [1] [2] Honeywell is a Fortune 100 company. In 2018, Honeywell ranked 77th in the Fortune 500. [3] Honeywell has a global workforce of approximately 110,000, of whom approximately 44,000 are employed in the United States. The company is headquartered in Charlotte, North Carolina. Its current chief executive officer is Darius Adamczyk. [4] [5] The company and its corporate predecessors were part of the Dow Jones Industrial Average Index from December 7, 1925, until February 9, 2008. The company's current name, Honeywell International Inc., is the product of a merger in which Honeywell Inc. was acquired by the much larger AlliedSignal in 1999. The company headquarters were consolidated with AlliedSignal's headquarters in Morristown, New Jersey; however the combined company chose the name "Honeywell" because of its brand recognition. Reason:The current lead is to succinct for the length of the article. In the Manual of style ,section seven, the appropriate lead length for an article of this size is 3-4 paragraphs. The new proposed lead section above incorporates everything in the current lead with more details to inform the reader about the company. 1. Please add these sentences to the third paragraph: Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange (NYSE). In May 2019, Honeywell launched Honeywell Forge, an Industrial internet of things analytics platform. [6] [7] On June 5, 2019, Honeywell moved their headquarters to Charlotte, North Carolina. October 2019, the company established Honeywell Robotics. [8] [9] Reason:Sentence one gives context to the existing sentence. The other two sentences provide context about two important recent events for the company, one the launch of Honeywell Forge and second the relocation of their headquarters. 1. Please remove Honeywell Turbo Technologies [10] from the See also section Reason: Honeywell Turbo Technologies no longer exists. This business unit was sold, is publicly traded, and now known as Garrett Advancing Motion. References
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Regarding the first item, do you have a ref for the AlliedSignal merger? I see there is a NYTimes article currently being used in the body of the article. - Indefensible ( talk) 06:43, 20 February 2020 (UTC)
Hi Indefensible, I'm open to using the NYTimes article to support the content. I left that reference and a few others out in the lead section because it was repetitive and already sourced in the article. Here is the link to the policy section used to make that decision: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Lead_section I'm happy to answer any more questions here. Thanks!--- Chefmikesf ( talk) 21:57, 20 February 2020 (UTC)
Here is the name progression I see in the first reference.
What are your thoughts?-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 17:09, 27 February 2020 (UTC)
Hi Chefmikesf, I believe that the points have been addressed (although not with the exact same wording), please review and provide any feedback as applicable. - Indefensible ( talk) 22:32, 2 March 2020 (UTC)
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Isn't it a little weird that "In 1996, Honeywell acquired Duracraft and began marketing its products in the home comfort sector. Today, Kaz Incorporated owns both Duracraft and Honeywell's home comfort lines." is under the heading "Defense"? While I would like to be both comfortable and safe, I am not sure Honeywell's defense line is used in the home.
Also, there is little information on their control technology, which I suspect is their main business. 216.255.104.61 ( talk) 16:03, 9 June 2009 (UTC)
Open request to the Wikipedian who is managing this article. I work for Honeywell and would like to make the Honeywell entry more robust, and accurate of the business and history of Honeywell. Having made that comment, I first became involved with Wikipedia back in 2006 and even attended Wikimania that year. I don't want to run afoul of Wikipedia rules, but I do note that your discussion states you would like to upgrade corporate entries. Thanks ... Rich Hoeg ... the [Northstar Nerd | http://www.northstarnerd.org]. Sorry my code is not perfect; I'm a bit rusty.
I would be very happy to post suggested updates on this page for review and acceptance or rejection.
[Rich Hoeg, 2009-08-18]
Lots of companies have their own vehicles with labels on them but I'm not sure that Honeywell has them as major parts of its brand or identity. The labels shown in the photos aren't even legible.-- Hooperbloob ( talk) 17:15, 11 November 2009 (UTC)
I think the proliferation of articles on Honeywell is confusing. There's this article on Honeywell (Honeywell International, Inc.) as well as separate articles on Honeywell Aerospace and Honeywell Turbo Technologies. Yet this parent Honeywell International page is missing something that's badly needed: a diagram outlining the structure of the conglomerate, which could explain where some of the "parts" (Aerospace and Turbo Technologies) fit into the whole. In fact, I think Turbo Technologies is itself a part (or a set of products) of the Honeywell Aerospace. As things now stand, there is redundancy among the three articles as well as confusion about their relationships.~Mack2~
I suggest we have a section under the today area of the page that explains more about the heating controls area. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jessica Clamp ( talk • contribs) 12:26, 23 December 2010 (UTC)
I work for a division of Honeywell Technology Solutions (HTSI to be exact, Honeywell Technology Solutions, Inc.) and it's located in Colorado Springs, Colorado. It's not a "research" division "dedicated to innovative product research"; it's pretty much all development (it's Defense). I notice the section has no references, but I don't want to add to the mediocrity. But, just FYI, as it stands, it's misleading. There may be an HTSI division in India, but it is no manner the only one. — Frεcklεfσσt | Talk 01:45, 20 February 2013 (UTC)
There were no citations for the original acquisition section. I changed the bullet list to a readable table format. I am also working to find citations for this section. Lgkkitkat ( talk) 22:27, 28 September 2014 (UTC)
Hello BilCat - in order for me to improve my contributions to articles I seek the protocol of editing from more experienced community members. Please explain why you classified my edit as unproductive since no content was removed - I am really confused. It is my belief that our primary goal is to keep all information current. I have added citations to support my updated information. I respectfully request you to review the first paragraph to see that no information was removed but rather placed in a readable place. Please share your thoughts on this...it would be very much appreciated. Lgkkitkat ( talk) 03:05, 15 October 2014 (UTC)
I don't get this:
If the practices are only superficially similar, why is Toyota's system relevant to the article?
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I'm currently working on a new draft of the Honeywell article here, aiming to improve the organizational structure, update figures and information, and expand on the history. I kept most of the existing content intact and I think I've done a pretty good job maintaining NPOV and making sure everything has quality references, but I'd appreciate any help from the community in ensuring that's the case. Feel free to edit it or leave me comments on my sandbox, and/or publish any content you think is suitable and relevant. -- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 00:01, 23 January 2015 (UTC)
To respond to GeorgeLouis's concerns, these are the specific changes I'm proposing:
Again, my draft can be found here. If anyone would be so kind as to review it, in full or in part, I would sincerely appreciate the help. FacultiesIntact ( talk) 00:18, 12 March 2015 (UTC)
I went ahead and took screenshots of the relevant pages of Honeywell's Annual Report, if that helps. Here is page 42 with figures for revenue, operating income, and net income, and here is page 44 with figures for total assets and total equity. -- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 00:46, 9 June 2015 (UTC)
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Can someone review just the updated infobox and acquisitions sections? Thanks! -- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 17:02, 15 June 2015 (UTC)
Because I've worked with COI editors in the past I was asked to go over the draft at User:FacultiesIntact/sandbox/Honeywell, and barring some minor content and aesthetic details (that second thermostat picture needs to go) I have no problem with replacing the current article with that. It preserves the existing material, rearranges it more logically and greatly improves our coverage of the company. I can see how the list of products might need to possibly be trimmed, although I'm not sure how exactly. The Company Culture section is also a bit awkward. But overall I think it's better than what we have at the moment. It certainly preserves all the controversial material, which is always concern with COI edits. @ GeorgeLouis: Are you OK with this? § FreeRangeFrog croak 23:19, 23 July 2015 (UTC)
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Requesting the article be updated via the draft linked here and commented upon by FreeRangeFrog above. The history section is improved and reads chronologically, and the article overall is more comprehensive.-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 18:14, 19 September 2015 (UTC)
Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented. [History and finances updated. Structure information added. Did not add first two photos (as would create clutter), remove WSJ criticism, or add the section 'Company culture', as it tended towards advertising. Section 'Business Units' needs to be trimmed, but have no idea how. Dschslava ( talk) 00:52, 29 December 2015 (UTC)] |
I just noticed an anonymous IP had changed the CEO and Chairman in the Corporate Governance section, and have since reverted it. My cursory investigation suggested that the IP address came from Honeywell India, and as I do work for Honeywell here, I'll be doing my best to get to the bottom of it. Feel free to leave me any comments or concerns.-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 18:44, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
Added a section on Trend Controls and redirected the page to here. The company's not notable enough to merit their own page. CerealKillerYum ( talk) 07:52, 12 July 2016 (UTC)
In July, Honeywell split one of their strategic business units, Automation and Control Solutions, into two new units: Home and Building Technologies (HBT) and Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS). I made adjustments to the lead and Business Units in my sandbox to reflect the change. The relevant reference is in the opening of their Form 8-K filed with the SEC last month, found here. Could someone without a COI review this and make the updates?-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 22:50, 10 August 2016 (UTC)
I've drafted some edits to the criticism section of the article to put everything in chronological order to clarify the actual events which occurred. I also clarified that the division specifically responsible for the cluster bombs was spun off from Honeywell in 1990. Can someone review these suggestions? I think they're all clear improvements to the article.-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 01:28, 25 January 2017 (UTC)
Honeywell filed their latest 10-K in February. I've got the current figures, along with the referenced 10-K, drafted up in my sandbox. Can someone update the numbers in the infobox?-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 01:00, 18 March 2017 (UTC)
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The Recent history section is reading more like a timeline and less like a narrative, so I went ahead and tried to reorganize the content into a more cohesive section ( sandbox here). It's largely just collecting the information and breaking them into relevant paragraphs, but I also added the news about Adamczyk's succession, as well as changed "The expansion will create more than 800 jobs" in regards to the Atlanta relocation to "The expansion will add more than 800 jobs" as no new roles were actually being created, as originally reported in the new citation from The Atlanta Journal-Constitution. Would someone mind taking a look at my proposed changes?-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 23:48, 18 January 2018 (UTC)
The Products and services section has been flagged for expansion since 2015. I've been working on an expanded version, with the section organized by SBG rather than the disparate "Aircraft," "Missiles and rockets," and "Honeywell Scanning and Mobility." Does anyone want to collaborate on improving my list? I want to make the section more comprehensive than its current state, but I don't want to overreach to the point of promotion.-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 03:14, 26 April 2018 (UTC)
Under "Expansion: 1927–1985" the article states that Honeywell distributed this camera from Ricoh. However, Ricoh only acquired the Pentax camera line in 2011. The Japanese producer of this camera at the time was Asahi Optical Company, Ltd. ( http://www.aohc.it/testi.php?id_testi=50 , http://camera-wiki.org/wiki/Pentax) — Preceding unsigned comment added by MrShoggoth ( talk • contribs) 05:54, 20 June 2018 (UTC)
Datamatic, Automatic Error-Correction, Newton Highlands, Massachusetts -- 89.25.210.104 ( talk) 01:11, 29 June 2018 (UTC)
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As I mentioned above, the Products and services section has been flagged for expansion for three years now. I drafted expanded version, with the section organized by business groups rather than the disparate "Aircraft," "Missiles and rockets," and "Honeywell Scanning and Mobility." I received differing feedback from other editors, one supporting the content but requesting references (which have since been added), one wanting a change into prose format, and another suggesting I pursue more "official" channels for COI edits. Given that, I thought a formal edit request would be a suitable path forward.-- FacultiesIntact ( talk) 23:59, 9 July 2018 (UTC)
The majority of the products listed in the proposal are given self-published references. Since the article (or at least the look of the article in your proposal) has become unwieldy, these should be given references to reliable secondary sources after having as many as possible converted into prose or siphoned off into other articles. spintendo 02:05, 10 July 2018 (UTC)When discussion of products and services would make the article unwieldy, some editorial judgment is called for. If the products and services are considered notable enough on their own, one option is to break out the discussion of them into a separate article following WP:Summary style. If the products and services are not notable enough for their own article, the discussion of them should be trimmed and summarized into a shorter format, or even cut entirely if the products are not significantly mentioned in reliable secondary sources. If a non-notable product or service has its own article, be bold and merge it into an article with a broader scope (for example, an article about the type of product) or follow one of the deletion processes.
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"I'm going to start working on a list article"but I've only seen these changes proposed here which involve
"Adding Honeywell HTF7000, Honeywell HTS900, and Honeywell TPE331 to the new Aerospace subsection"does this mean you want to add a subsection to the Aerospace section (and if so, which one) or does this mean you want to add a new Aerospace Subsection to some other location? This was unclear. It's also unclear how re-titling the "Honeywell Scanning and Mobility" subsection as "Safety and Productivity Solutions" brings about a "cohesive sorting schema". Because the company titles them that way rings truer as a reason. If this is the case, then that should just be stated. The company's choice of nomenclature can be used as a guide. But don't forget that real change would be creating pages where this information can be moved to, because the main page has gotten too crowded. It's not clear that these changes do that. If there are any other areas where I was not clear please let me know so I can clarify. spintendo 20:06, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
"This draft creates these new subsections, and could eliminate the discrepancy on the main article."
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The information contained within the Honeywell#Environmental_record section is outdated. Regarding the cleanup of Onondaga Lake, there have been a few updates since 2014. Additionally, I'm proposing an added clarification that the waste site was a former Allied Corporation property.
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Current Content: For the fiscal year 2017, Honeywell reported earnings of US$1.933 billion, with an annual revenue of US$40.534 billion, an increase of 3.1% over the previous fiscal cycle. Honeywell's shares traded at over $131 per share, and its market capitalization was valued at over US$108.1 billion in October 2018.
Proposed Content update: For the fiscal year 2018, Honeywell reported earnings of US$6.765 billion, with an annual revenue of US$41.802 billion, an increase of 3.13% over the previous fiscal cycle. Honeywell's shares traded at over $134 per share, and its market capitalization was valued at over US$120.26 billion in September 2019. [1]
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Who has time to review these updates? I would appreciate any feedback or assistance.-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 04:16, 10 September 2019 (UTC)
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Spintendo, Thank you for updating the Honeywell financial data in the infobox. As for the Financials section, @ Afus199620: added that and after some thought I can understand why. To a reader, historical financial data is helpful to study in its numeric form, especially for a reader who is searching online for that information. This is historical data. It is beneficial to the reader for convenience and access to the secondary source for further study. Would you consider this? Or shall we also invite Afus199620 for his/her input?-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 01:25, 18 September 2019 (UTC)
@ Mean as custard:I noticed you recently added a promotional content warning banner to Honeywell. My former colleague User:FacultiesIntact collaborated with other editors to help contribute to the article. Company articles can be challenging to navigate between the fine line of promotion and education. Were there any sections in particular that stood out to you as overly promotional?
I think there’s still a lot of good content there and I wouldn’t want the reader to conflate that with advertising. I have a COI with Honeywell too. In the spirit of collaboration, how about we open the conversation to others for feedback on the offending content. Would you be open to collaborating?-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 00:19, 6 September 2019 (UTC)
The lead section of the article needs some updates based on organizational changes at Honeywell International. The revisions are below. I included the references. I proposed changes in that section in edit request format. Here is my suggested lead section in my sandbox. Chefmikesf ( talk) 21:21, 14 November 2019 (UTC) #1 Current Content: Honeywell International Inc. is an American multinational conglomerate company that produces commercial and consumer products, engineering services and aerospace systems. Proposed Content: Honeywell International Inc. is an American multinational conglomerate company that offers industrial products, software, engineering services.
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Cite error: The Reason: updating this sentence to clarify what Honeywell does and remove descriptors that no longer represent what the company produces. #2 Current Content: The company operates four business units, known as Strategic Business Units – Honeywell Aerospace, Home and Building Technologies (HBT), Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies. Proposed Content: The company operates four business units–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). [1] Reason: Honeywell International's 2018 10-K reflects new names for the business units. Honeywell no longer publicly uses "Strategic Business Units" in company information. References: page 55 of the 2018 10-K [1] #3 Request: update global workforce to “110,000” and “44,000” are employed in the United States. Current Content: Honeywell has a global workforce of approximately 130,000, of whom approximately 58,000 are employed in the United States. Proposed Content: Honeywell has a global workforce of approximately 110,000, of whom approximately 44,000 are employed in the United States. [1] Reason: updating out of date information References: page 4 of the 2018 10-K [1] #4 Current Content: Honeywell has many brands that commercial and retail consumers may recognize, including its line of home thermostats (particularly the iconic round type) and Garrett turbochargers. In addition to consumer home products, Honeywell produces thermostats, sensors, security alarm systems, and air cleaners and dehumidifiers. The company also licenses its brand name for use in various retail products made by other manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders. Proposed Content: In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett turbochargers Cite error: The
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Hi! I'm posting here on behalf of Honeywell, a client of mine. I'd like to request some updates to this article. Some of the edits below are drafted up in my sandbox, here.
The article needs some updates based on organizational changes at Honeywell International, and suggestions from editors over the past year. My edits should address and improve the article compliant to WP: COI, WP:NPOV, and WP:LEAD. I included the references in the Ref-talk box.
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Feel free to ping me for any clarifications. Thanks! -- Chefmikesf ( talk) 18:23, 10 December 2019 (UTC)
Current Content: The company operates four business units–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). Proposed Content: The company operates four business units–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). Within business groups are business units. Request and Reason: Update the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018 Aerospace1. Request: Remove “Honeywell Transportation Systems”. Current Content:
Honeywell Transportation Systems produces engine boosting turbochargers for passenger cars and commercial vehicles. Proposed Content:
2. Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in each sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here.
Building Technologies1. Request: Remove "SBGs" and “Home and” from Home and Building Technologies Current Content: Home and Building Technologies Honeywell HBT was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio. Proposed Content: Building Technologies Honeywell HBT was created when Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new groups, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio. It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo. [1] Reason: Updated the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018.
2. Request: Rewrite section to reflect Resideo spinoff, remove promotional content, add content reflecting spin-off into Resideo. Current Content: Honeywell Building Solutions (HBS) products and services provide energy efficiency and security in buildings and communities. Smart grid, microgrid and on-site power generation, integrated security, building controls, automation, and management, system service, maintenance and optimization, and smart building are examples of the technologies produced by the HBS business unit. HBS optimizes automation technology, designs and delivers microgrids that provide energy security, and delivers demand response and energy-efficiency programs to help utilities and the electrical grid operate optimally. In June 2016, Honeywell announced a new release of its building management system, Enterprise Buildings Integrator (EBI) to support the Middle East region's smart building and cities ambitions. In a statement, Honeywell said that EBI R500 leverages the connectivity of today's buildings to help make them more strategic assets that are green, safe and productive. Honeywell Smarthomes serve customers worldwide to control technologies for buildings, homes and industry; turbochargers; and performance materials. We are building a smarter, safer, and more sustainable world. Proposed Content: Honeywell Building Solutions (HBS) products and services provide energy efficiency and security in buildings and communities. Smart grid, microgrid and on-site power generation, integrated security, building controls, automation, and management, system service, maintenance and optimization, and smart building are examples of the technologies produced by the HBS business unit. HBS optimizes automation technology, designs and delivers microgrids that provide energy security, and delivers demand response and energy-efficiency programs to help utilities and the electrical grid operate optimally.It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo. [2]
Current Content: Honeywell Environmental and Energy Solutions serves industrial and consumer customers. Products include air quality, commercial combustion, commercial components, industrial components, home thermostats (including smart and wi-fi thermostats), residential combustion, whole house air quality, whole house water treatment and control, HVAC zoning, and hydronic heating. Proposed Content: Honeywell Environmental and Energy Solutions serves industrial customers. Products include air quality, commercial combustion, commercial components, industrial components, HVAC zoning, and hydronic heating. [3] Reason: Homes products are no longer offered by Honeywell. Safety and Productivity Solutions1. Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in this sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here.
2. Request: Remove all mentions of SBG for WP:NPOV Current Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, Home and Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. Proposed Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the Automation and Control Solutions Business Group was split into two new BGs, Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs. Performance Materials and Technologies1. Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in this sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here.
2. Request: Remove all mentions of SBG for WP:NPOV Current Content: The Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group is divided into six business units. Products include process technology for oil and gas processing, fuels, films and additives, special chemicals, electronic materials, and renewable transport fuels. Honeywell UOP Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries. Proposed Content: The Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies Business Group is divided into six business units. Products include process technology for oil and gas processing, fuels, films and additives, special chemicals, electronic materials, and renewable transport fuels. Honeywell UOP Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies Business Group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries. Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs Current Content Honeywell has many brands that commercial and retail consumers may recognize, including its line of home thermostats (particularly the iconic round type) and Garrett turbochargers. In addition to consumer home products, Honeywell produces thermostats, sensors, security alarm systems, and air cleaners and dehumidifiers. The company also licenses its brand name for use in various retail products made by other manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders. Proposed Content In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett Advancing Motion [4] and consumer products business as Resideo. [1] Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange. Honeywell continues to license its name to Resideo, which creates residential thermostats and security systems as Honeywell Home. The company also licenses its brand name to for use in other retail products made by partner manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders. [5]
These statements inform the reader that two of Honeywell's business units are separate and no longer Honeywell business units. Respectively, they are now known as Garrett and Resideo.
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1. Please remove the last sentence of the first paragraph: On September 12, 2016, Morris Plain, N.J.-based Honeywell announced that it would invest $20 million in the first-of-its-kind software development center and relocate the headquarters of its nearly $10 billion home and building technologies division from suburban Minneapolis to Atlanta. The expansion will add more than 800 jobs. [1] [2] Please replace with: On September 12, 2016, Morris Plain, N.J.-based Honeywell announced that it would relocate the headquarters of its building technologies division from suburban Minneapolis to Atlanta. In 2017, Honeywell opened the software center in Atlanta, Georgia. The expansion added more than 800 jobs. [3] [2] [4] 2. Please remove the third paragraph: In early 2019 Honeywell launched its home spinoff under the brand Resideo, focusing mostly on programmable and remotely operated thermostats. In October 2019, the company announced the establishment of an advanced technology center called Honeywell Robotics, which will be focused on innovating and developing artificial intelligence, machine learning, computer vision and advanced robotics to be used across supply chains. [5] Please replace with: In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett and consumer products business as Resideo. [6] [7] Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange (NYSE). In May 2019, Honeywell launched Honeywell Forge, an Industrial internet of things analytics platform. [8] [9] On June 5, 2019, Honeywell moved their headquarters to Charlotte, North Carolina. October 2019, the company established Honeywell Robotics. [10] [11] Reason To remove content to make the article WP:NPOV compliant and added some historical milestones to the section with references.
1. Please replace the word units with groups in the first sentence 2. Add this as the second sentence: Within business groups are business units.
The company operates four business groups–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). Within business groups are business units. Request and Reason: Update the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018.
3. Request: Remove “Honeywell Transportation Systems” and the sentence in its section. Honeywell Transportation Systems is no longer part of the company.
Honeywell Transportation Systems produces engine boosting turbochargers for passenger cars and commercial vehicles.
Request and Reason: Remove service solutions from the Aerospace sentence and replace with services. Per talk page NPOV request here.
5. Request and Reason: Remove air traffic management solutions from the Commercial Aviation sentence and replace with air traffic management. Per talk page NPOV request here.
6. Request: Remove “Home and” from Home and Building Technologies New Subtitle: Building Technologies 7. Request:Remove the first sentences from the section. Honeywell HBT was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio. Request: Replace with these proposed sentences: Honeywell HBT was created when Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new groups, HBT and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. On December 7, 2017, Honeywell announced that it has acquired SCAME, an Italy-based company, to add new fire and gas safety capabilities to its portfolio. It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo. [7] Reason: Updated the first sentence. Honeywell completed the spinoff of several businesses, including its Homes business, in October 2018. Add content reflecting spin-off into Resideo. Honeywell Building Solutions 8. Request: Please remove the second and third paragraph; Wikipedia:NOTPROMOTION: "In June 2016, Honeywell announced a new release of its building management system, Enterprise Buildings Integrator (EBI) to support the Middle East region's smart building and cities ambitions. In a statement, Honeywell said that EBI R500 leverages the connectivity of today's buildings to help make them more strategic assets that are green, safe and productive. Honeywell Smarthomes serve customers worldwide to control technologies for buildings, homes and industry; turbochargers; and performance materials. We are building a smarter, safer, and more sustainable world." Request:Please add this sentence to the end of the first paragraph: It became Honeywell Building Technologies (HBT) in October 2018, when the homes products spun off into a separate publicly traded company, Resideo. [12]
Environmental and Energy Solutions 9. Request: in Environmental Energy Solutions section, rewrite section to remove “home”
Proposed Content: Honeywell Environmental and Energy Solutions serves industrial customers. Products include air quality, commercial combustion, commercial components, industrial components, HVAC zoning, and hydronic heating. [13] Reason: Homes products are no longer offered by Honeywell.
Safety and Productivity Solutions 10. Request and Reason: remove "mobile computers and bar code scanners, radio frequency identification solutions" from Honeywell Process Solutions And replace with "radio frequency identification products such as readers and antennas, voice-enabled workflow and printers." per talk page NPOV request here. Request and Reason: Replace with "radio frequency identification products such as readers and antennas, voice-enabled workflow and printers."
Request: Remove all mentions of SBG in Safety and Productivity Solutions first sentence for WP:NPOV Current Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the SBG Automation and Control Solutions was split into two new SBGs, Home and Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. Proposed Content: Honeywell SPS was created when the Automation and Control Solutions Business Group was split into two new BGs, Building Technologies and Safety and Productivity Solutions, in July 2016. Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs.
Request and Reason: Updates to the bold words in this sentence. Per talk page NPOV request here. Honeywell Process Solutions offers automation controls to customers internationally. 13. Request: Remove all mentions of SBG for WP:NPOV Current Content: The Honeywell Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group is divided into six business units. Products include process technology for oil and gas processing, fuels, films and additives, special chemicals, electronic materials, and renewable transport fuels. Honeywell UOP Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies strategic business group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries.
Honeywell UOP Honeywell UOP is a wholly owned subsidiary of Honeywell International Inc. and is part of Honeywell's Performance Materials and Technologies Business Group. Honeywell UOP is an international supplier and licensor of process technology, catalysts, adsorbents, process plants, and consulting services to the petroleum refining, petrochemical, and gas processing industries. Reason: Honeywell no longer refers to its larger business groups as SBGs
1. Request: Please remove current content. Honeywell has many brands that commercial and retail consumers may recognize, including its line of home thermostats (particularly the iconic round type) and Garrett turbochargers. In addition to consumer home products, Honeywell produces thermostats, sensors, security alarm systems, and air cleaners and dehumidifiers. The company also licenses its brand name for use in various retail products made by other manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders. Request: Please replace with proposed content. In 2018, Honeywell spun off its turbocharger business as Garrett Advancing Motion [6] and consumer products business as Resideo. [7] Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange. Honeywell continues to license its name to Resideo, which creates residential thermostats and security systems as Honeywell Home. The company also licenses its brand name to for use in other retail products made by partner manufacturers, including air conditioners, heaters, fans, security safes, home generators, and paper shredders. [14] Reason These statements inform the reader that two of Honeywell's business units are separate and no longer Honeywell business units. Respectively, they are now known as Garrett and Resideo. 1. Please remove Honeywell Turbo Technologies [14] from the See also section
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Hello @ Spintendo:
First, I want to address the COI edit from IP ADDRESS 199.64.7.231 on January 10, 2020. I am not associated with the editor and their edits.
Second, I can see you're busy with many edit requests. Your edit to the Honeywell article took place at 05:24, January 4, 2020. Then at 05:30, January 4, 2020 you posted to the Honeywell talk page in response to my request edit. Which happened first, can you recall the order of events? As I am reviewing each of your notes to the declined and unimplemented edit requests, many of the answers you seek clarification can be answered in this version of the Wikipedia article. For example, in Note 12, you said there are no mentions of SBGs. This version of the article includes four mentions of SBG in the Business unit section.-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 01:17, 15 January 2020 (UTC)
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1. Please remove the bulleted list of business units from the Business groups section:
2. Please add the correct bulleted list of business units to the Business groups section:
3. Using these references: [1] [2] [3] [4]
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Thank you-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 20:36, 28 January 2020 (UTC)
Regards, Spintendo 05:23, 3 February 2020 (UTC)
Hello Indefensible,
I've moved our conversation from your talk page here. I see the article needs improvements in a few places, specifically the Lead, History, and the see also sections. The suggested edits are outlined below as a concept to improve the article. What are your thoughts? -- Chefmikesf ( talk) 00:42, 18 February 2020 (UTC)
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1. Please replace the current lead with a new proposed lead Honeywell International Inc. is an American multinational conglomerate company that offers industrial products, software, engineering services. The company operates four business units–Honeywell Aerospace, Honeywell Building Technologies, Safety and Productivity Solutions (SPS), and Performance Materials and Technologies (PMT). [1] [2] Honeywell is a Fortune 100 company. In 2018, Honeywell ranked 77th in the Fortune 500. [3] Honeywell has a global workforce of approximately 110,000, of whom approximately 44,000 are employed in the United States. The company is headquartered in Charlotte, North Carolina. Its current chief executive officer is Darius Adamczyk. [4] [5] The company and its corporate predecessors were part of the Dow Jones Industrial Average Index from December 7, 1925, until February 9, 2008. The company's current name, Honeywell International Inc., is the product of a merger in which Honeywell Inc. was acquired by the much larger AlliedSignal in 1999. The company headquarters were consolidated with AlliedSignal's headquarters in Morristown, New Jersey; however the combined company chose the name "Honeywell" because of its brand recognition. Reason:The current lead is to succinct for the length of the article. In the Manual of style ,section seven, the appropriate lead length for an article of this size is 3-4 paragraphs. The new proposed lead section above incorporates everything in the current lead with more details to inform the reader about the company. 1. Please add these sentences to the third paragraph: Both companies are now publicly traded on the New York Stock Exchange (NYSE). In May 2019, Honeywell launched Honeywell Forge, an Industrial internet of things analytics platform. [6] [7] On June 5, 2019, Honeywell moved their headquarters to Charlotte, North Carolina. October 2019, the company established Honeywell Robotics. [8] [9] Reason:Sentence one gives context to the existing sentence. The other two sentences provide context about two important recent events for the company, one the launch of Honeywell Forge and second the relocation of their headquarters. 1. Please remove Honeywell Turbo Technologies [10] from the See also section Reason: Honeywell Turbo Technologies no longer exists. This business unit was sold, is publicly traded, and now known as Garrett Advancing Motion. References
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Regarding the first item, do you have a ref for the AlliedSignal merger? I see there is a NYTimes article currently being used in the body of the article. - Indefensible ( talk) 06:43, 20 February 2020 (UTC)
Hi Indefensible, I'm open to using the NYTimes article to support the content. I left that reference and a few others out in the lead section because it was repetitive and already sourced in the article. Here is the link to the policy section used to make that decision: /info/en/?search=Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style/Lead_section I'm happy to answer any more questions here. Thanks!--- Chefmikesf ( talk) 21:57, 20 February 2020 (UTC)
Here is the name progression I see in the first reference.
What are your thoughts?-- Chefmikesf ( talk) 17:09, 27 February 2020 (UTC)
Hi Chefmikesf, I believe that the points have been addressed (although not with the exact same wording), please review and provide any feedback as applicable. - Indefensible ( talk) 22:32, 2 March 2020 (UTC)
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