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This article seems properly documented but still reads like a hagiography. Can someone who knows something, describe his career and, possibly, cut down on the adulation? Tapered ( talk) 23:55, 26 March 2015 (UTC)
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Can we please add the missing citations in this article?
Under Philanthropy: Plattner donated six million euros towards the prevention of HIV/AIDS. [1]
Under Philanthropy: Plattner signed The Giving Pledge in February 2013. [2]
Under Commitment to Education: The same university named him an honorary senator in 1998. [3]
Under Commitment to Education: It might be more clear if the term “lion’s share” were omitted. Instead, please consider the following:
Starting in 2015, Hasso Plattner Ventures became the “umbrella brand” for all direct investments made by Hasso Plattner. [4]
Harper70 ( talk) 21:49, 3 November 2015 (UTC)Harper70
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In 2015, Hasso Plattner published a book, co-written with Bernd Leukert, member of the Executive Board of SAP SE, called “The In-Memory Revolution: How SAP HANA Enables Business of the Future,” which describes the capabilities of the SAP HANA technology. [1] Harper70 ( talk) 14:56, 9 September 2015 (UTC)Harper70
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Since this article requires better sources and citations, I’ve provided the below:
Under Philanthropy, could we please add these citations in regards to his work for HIV/AIDS charities: [1] and [2]
Also under Philanthropy, could we please add this citation regarding The Giving Pledge: [3]
Under Commitment to Education, in reference to the HPV Africa Fund, please consider either or both of these citations: [4] and [5]
Thank you. Harper70 ( talk) 19:18, 21 December 2015 (UTC)Harper70
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This article seems properly documented but still reads like a hagiography. Can someone who knows something, describe his career and, possibly, cut down on the adulation? Tapered ( talk) 23:55, 26 March 2015 (UTC)
![]() | Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented. See comment about other sources. |
Can we please add the missing citations in this article?
Under Philanthropy: Plattner donated six million euros towards the prevention of HIV/AIDS. [1]
Under Philanthropy: Plattner signed The Giving Pledge in February 2013. [2]
Under Commitment to Education: The same university named him an honorary senator in 1998. [3]
Under Commitment to Education: It might be more clear if the term “lion’s share” were omitted. Instead, please consider the following:
Starting in 2015, Hasso Plattner Ventures became the “umbrella brand” for all direct investments made by Hasso Plattner. [4]
Harper70 ( talk) 21:49, 3 November 2015 (UTC)Harper70
References
In 2015, Hasso Plattner published a book, co-written with Bernd Leukert, member of the Executive Board of SAP SE, called “The In-Memory Revolution: How SAP HANA Enables Business of the Future,” which describes the capabilities of the SAP HANA technology. [1] Harper70 ( talk) 14:56, 9 September 2015 (UTC)Harper70
References
![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. |
![]() | Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented. See comment about refs 4-5 and WP:WEIGHT concerns. |
Since this article requires better sources and citations, I’ve provided the below:
Under Philanthropy, could we please add these citations in regards to his work for HIV/AIDS charities: [1] and [2]
Also under Philanthropy, could we please add this citation regarding The Giving Pledge: [3]
Under Commitment to Education, in reference to the HPV Africa Fund, please consider either or both of these citations: [4] and [5]
Thank you. Harper70 ( talk) 19:18, 21 December 2015 (UTC)Harper70
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