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An interview with Sotaro Tojima [1]. James086 Talk 12:39, 28 February 2013 (UTC)
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Hi! I'll review this one. ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 21:53, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
Close paraphrasing concern: "production team have enlisted a 16-person, hand-picked, male tenor/bass choir plus 10 female Bulgarian vocalists, a full 50-piece orchestra, and a host of other performers to work on the soundtrack" Seems to be copied from http://www.halowaypoint.com/halo4/en-us/#!an-epic-universe/soundtrack/59e1db4b-7acc-4572-bd10-523151c0772c Could you please fix this?
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" he kept monitors with interesting visuals" Could you rewrite this? It doesn't quite make sense "album debuted the No. 50" What does this mean?
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The track listings section is unreferenced, please fix this
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Since it's providing information I don't see why it wouldn't need citations. ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 22:39, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
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An interview with Sotaro Tojima [1]. James086 Talk 12:39, 28 February 2013 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Retrolord ( talk · contribs) 21:53, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
Hi! I'll review this one. ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 21:53, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
Close paraphrasing concern: "production team have enlisted a 16-person, hand-picked, male tenor/bass choir plus 10 female Bulgarian vocalists, a full 50-piece orchestra, and a host of other performers to work on the soundtrack" Seems to be copied from http://www.halowaypoint.com/halo4/en-us/#!an-epic-universe/soundtrack/59e1db4b-7acc-4572-bd10-523151c0772c Could you please fix this?
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
" he kept monitors with interesting visuals" Could you rewrite this? It doesn't quite make sense "album debuted the No. 50" What does this mean?
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
The track listings section is unreferenced, please fix this
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Since it's providing information I don't see why it wouldn't need citations. ★ ★ Retro Lord ★★ 22:39, 8 March 2013 (UTC)
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