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G'day, I've taken a run through the article to copy edit it in preparation for its GA review. One thing I noticed while going through is that the War duty section does not really seem to indicate if the ship was involved in any significant actions. Did the ship sink or attack any U-boats, etc? Is there any information available on this aspect? If so, I think it should be added. The other suggestion that I have is to include the details that are in the infobox in the relevant sections in prose. For instance, the sonar/ASDIC and radar does not seem to be mentioned, nor does the displacement, range, beam or draught. As always, please feel free to adjust any of my copy edits if you don't agree with. Good luck with the GAN. Cheers, AustralianRupert ( talk) 01:59, 24 December 2012 (UTC)
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I'll start this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 21:12, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
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Made one small tweak on the revised design wording, so everything is good.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 03:42, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
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G'day, I've taken a run through the article to copy edit it in preparation for its GA review. One thing I noticed while going through is that the War duty section does not really seem to indicate if the ship was involved in any significant actions. Did the ship sink or attack any U-boats, etc? Is there any information available on this aspect? If so, I think it should be added. The other suggestion that I have is to include the details that are in the infobox in the relevant sections in prose. For instance, the sonar/ASDIC and radar does not seem to be mentioned, nor does the displacement, range, beam or draught. As always, please feel free to adjust any of my copy edits if you don't agree with. Good luck with the GAN. Cheers, AustralianRupert ( talk) 01:59, 24 December 2012 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 ( talk · contribs) 21:12, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
I'll start this shortly.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 21:12, 2 January 2013 (UTC)
As the Government initiated the Common Look and Feel 3.0, the Project Pride website did not conform to the new guidelines and regulations for a government internet site and needed to be taken offline. DNHH will be creating a new website which will probably go online late 2013 or early 2014. The delays are due to the wide sweeping changes that address accessibility to information for those that may have disabilities. They are also looking at implementing a new web development tool that will make loading information on the web easier and faster for the web developers.
Made one small tweak on the revised design wording, so everything is good.-- Sturmvogel 66 ( talk) 03:42, 8 January 2013 (UTC)
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