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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Gordon Roberts (ice hockey)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Taylor Trescott ( talk · contribs) 04:04, 17 December 2013 (UTC) reply

Hi Resolute, I will review this article. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 04:04, 17 December 2013 (UTC) reply

This is short, but I think it's close to meeting the GA criteria. I have a few nitpicks to make.

  • In the infobox, delink Canada and USA (you should also spell them out) per WP:OVERLINK
  • "Roberts moved Montreal." moved to?
  • "Renowned for his stamina on the ice," I think you accidentally forgot to finish this sentence
  • The personal life section - use the full dates of his birth and death

On hold. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 23:40, 17 December 2013 (UTC) reply

All should be addressed. Thanks for the review! Reso lute 01:07, 18 December 2013 (UTC) reply
You're very welcome; promoted. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 01:15, 18 December 2013 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Gordon Roberts (ice hockey)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Taylor Trescott ( talk · contribs) 04:04, 17 December 2013 (UTC) reply

Hi Resolute, I will review this article. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 04:04, 17 December 2013 (UTC) reply

This is short, but I think it's close to meeting the GA criteria. I have a few nitpicks to make.

  • In the infobox, delink Canada and USA (you should also spell them out) per WP:OVERLINK
  • "Roberts moved Montreal." moved to?
  • "Renowned for his stamina on the ice," I think you accidentally forgot to finish this sentence
  • The personal life section - use the full dates of his birth and death

On hold. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 23:40, 17 December 2013 (UTC) reply

All should be addressed. Thanks for the review! Reso lute 01:07, 18 December 2013 (UTC) reply
You're very welcome; promoted. Taylor Trescott - my talk + my edits 01:15, 18 December 2013 (UTC) reply

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