Golf Club: Wasteland ( final version) received a peer review by Wikipedia editors, which on 2 March 2022 was archived. It may contain ideas you can use to improve this article. |
Golf Club: Wasteland has been listed as one of the
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please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
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The result was: promoted by
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Moved to mainspace by Eviolite ( talk). Self-nominated at 18:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC).
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Overall: Epicgenius ( talk) 14:39, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV ( talk · contribs) 03:49, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
I will be doing this one.-- Alexandra IDV 03:49, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
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Gameplay and synopsis
There are three "modes" of gameplay- the quotation marks seem unnecessary, as if the modes were "sort of, but not quite" modes.
Development and release
Golf Club: Wasteland was developed by Igor Simić [...]also works much better as a topic sentence than
The game was released for iOS [...]does).
In an interview with Game World Observer,- unless what publication he was interview for is important somehow, I would just remove this bit and just focus on what he said.
in order tocan almost always be simplified to
to.
Reception
though Ollie Reynolds of Nintendo Life noted that their reviewers found some of the neon signs [...]- is Reynolds not the single person at NL reviewing the game? Unless I'm missing something, I believe this should be written as "though Ollie Reynolds of Nintendo Life found [...]".
Loades also thought that the level design was uninspired, with the "puzzle" elements- like with the "modes" earlier, this makes me wonder if they're "kind of but not really" puzzles - you can probably remove the quotation marks.
he wished the game doubled down on- comes across as too casual wording
Other
Igor Simic realised the potential of video games as art. I have re-added a bit into the first paragraph of "Development and release" about that, though it might not flow well - what do you think? I might remove it again.
Looks good overall! I left a few notes for you, but they are all fairly minor. I will put this review on hold for the usual seven days - {{ ping}} me when you have addressed the above or if you have any questions, and I will be with you as soon as possible! (although I will move this upcoming weekend, so there's a risk I won't be able to respond during Friday-Sunday).-- Alexandra IDV 02:33, 29 November 2021 (UTC)
Golf Club: Wasteland ( final version) received a peer review by Wikipedia editors, which on 2 March 2022 was archived. It may contain ideas you can use to improve this article. |
Golf Club: Wasteland has been listed as one of the
Video games good articles under the
good article criteria. If you can improve it further,
please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can
reassess it. Review: November 30, 2021. ( Reviewed version). |
A fact from Golf Club: Wasteland appeared on Wikipedia's
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The result was: promoted by
SL93 (
talk) 01:09, 13 November 2021 (UTC)
Moved to mainspace by Eviolite ( talk). Self-nominated at 18:11, 31 October 2021 (UTC).
General: Article is new enough and long enough |
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Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems |
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|
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation |
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|
QPQ: None required. |
Overall: Epicgenius ( talk) 14:39, 6 November 2021 (UTC)
GA toolbox |
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Reviewing |
Reviewer: Alexandra IDV ( talk · contribs) 03:49, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
I will be doing this one.-- Alexandra IDV 03:49, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
Images
References
Infobox
Lead
Gameplay and synopsis
There are three "modes" of gameplay- the quotation marks seem unnecessary, as if the modes were "sort of, but not quite" modes.
Development and release
Golf Club: Wasteland was developed by Igor Simić [...]also works much better as a topic sentence than
The game was released for iOS [...]does).
In an interview with Game World Observer,- unless what publication he was interview for is important somehow, I would just remove this bit and just focus on what he said.
in order tocan almost always be simplified to
to.
Reception
though Ollie Reynolds of Nintendo Life noted that their reviewers found some of the neon signs [...]- is Reynolds not the single person at NL reviewing the game? Unless I'm missing something, I believe this should be written as "though Ollie Reynolds of Nintendo Life found [...]".
Loades also thought that the level design was uninspired, with the "puzzle" elements- like with the "modes" earlier, this makes me wonder if they're "kind of but not really" puzzles - you can probably remove the quotation marks.
he wished the game doubled down on- comes across as too casual wording
Other
Igor Simic realised the potential of video games as art. I have re-added a bit into the first paragraph of "Development and release" about that, though it might not flow well - what do you think? I might remove it again.
Looks good overall! I left a few notes for you, but they are all fairly minor. I will put this review on hold for the usual seven days - {{ ping}} me when you have addressed the above or if you have any questions, and I will be with you as soon as possible! (although I will move this upcoming weekend, so there's a risk I won't be able to respond during Friday-Sunday).-- Alexandra IDV 02:33, 29 November 2021 (UTC)