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This article goes through a lot of topics giving the perfect amount of globalization to the issue. However, the introduction can be fixed as it seems to be more of an academic paper beginning rather than for a Wikipedia article. Other than that, simply rewording will be the way to go. Thanks for a great article. Gracieoribamise ( talk) 02:04, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
This article is very thorough and does an exceptional job of providing information clearly. It also has a great deal of sources and academic support for its claims. The addition of the western section really takes the article to the next level. The one consideration would be the addition of a picture. Alison.moscoso ( talk) 01:33, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
This is a very well-cited article on an interesting issue, and it address an area in which Wikipedia is often poor. I just wanted to draw attention to these sentences which could be improved:
Cheers, MartinPoulter ( talk) 12:30, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
The result of the proposal was withdrawn. -- BDD ( talk) 16:21, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
Global perceptions of autism →
Perceptions of autism in the developing world – The article's scope is not global as the current title suggests, it does not discuss Europe, North America or Australasia. The lead explicitly states that the scope is "non-Western nations" so the title should match the content.
Roger (Dodger67) (
talk)
08:39, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
I propose the following addition: "These drugs, such as selective serotonin uptake inhibitors, improve social interaction and self-control by reducing obsessive behavior. When used alongside psychosocial therapies, these drugs can greatly decrease the struggles of social interaction for people on the autism spectrum, although more research is needed before the medications can be safe and effective. [1]" The addition would become the final two sentences of the "Treatment in Western Countries" section, and the current final sentence would be removed. Thanks, Nickyharrington ( talk) 20:16, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
References
Greetings:
This is my first time commenting or attempting to contribute. I am grateful for the existence of this particular page, and have a personal and professional interest in the topic.
The first paragraph gives some possible reasons of the cause of ASD, and there is a citation of a specific study that suggested a 350% rise in ASD with mother's with celiac disease. I am concerned the information is potentially misleading and may give readers an incomplete idea of potential causes of ASD.
That particular study referenced ( http://pediatrics.aappublications.org.mwu.idm.oclc.org/content/124/2/687) from 2009 using data from 1993-2004, was an era in which both ASD and celiac disease were less diagnosed than today.
Several follow up studies have been performed, some suggesting no link between celiac and ASD:
and
https://doaj-org.mwu.idm.oclc.org/article/7db50962c1f34996817082c4151a2bb9
and others continuing to see some link: https://ijponline.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/s13052-016-0308-x
For this article to be most effective, perhaps either altering the first paragraph to discuss the current thought around ASD cause(s) -- the wikipedia page on autism may be an effective place to start /info/en/?search=Autism -- or, if the celiac link is thought to be relevant and important for this article, indicating that the findings are controversial and further studies are being performed.
Thanks
Ideal sources for Wikipedia's health content are defined in the guideline
Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources (medicine) and are typically
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SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 17:51, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
Sun, X., Allison, C., Auyeung, B., Zhang, Z., Matthews, F. E., Baron-Cohen, S., & Brayne, C. (2015). Validation of existing diagnosis of autism in mainland China using standardised diagnostic instruments. Autism, 19(8), 1010-1017. doi: 10.1177/1362361314556785
Tang, L., & Bie, B. (2015). The stigma of autism in china: An analysis of newspaper portrayals of autism between 2003 and 2012. Health Communication, 31(4), 445-452. doi:10.1080/10410236.2014.965381
La Valle, C. (2013). Chinese Cultural Factors Impacting the Educational Schooling of Children with Autism in China. DePaul Discoveries, 2(1), 256-261.
Chang, K. (2017). Applied Behavior Analysis in Autism Spectrum Disorders in China and Hong Kong. Acta Psychopathologica, 03(05). doi:10.4172/2469-6676.100124
Kurasawa, S., Tateyama, K., Iwanaga, R., Taro Ohtoshi, T., Nakatani, K., and Yokoi, K. (2018). The Age at Diagnosis of Autism Spectrum Disorder in Children in Japan. International Journal of Pediatrics, 2018(5374725).
Freeth, M., Sheppard, E., Ramachandran, R., & Milne, E. (2013). A Cross-Cultural Comparison of Autistic Traits in the UK, India and Malaysia. Journal of Autism and Developmental Disorders,43(11), 2569-2583. doi:10.1007/s10803-013-1808-9
Liu, Y., Li, J., Zheng, Q., Zaroff, C. M., Hall, B. J., Li, X., & Hao, Y. (2016). Knowledge, attitudes, and perceptions of autism spectrum disorder in a stratified sampling of preschool teachers in China. BMC Psychiatry, 16(1). doi:10.1186/s12888-016-0845-2
Hahler, Eva-Maria & Elsabbagh, Mayada. (2015). Autism: A Global Perspective. Current Developmental Disorders Reports, 2(10).
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This article was the subject of an educational assignment. Further details were available on the "Education Program:Rice University/Human Development in Global and Local Communities, Section 1 (Spring 2014)" page, which is now unavailable on the wiki. |
This article goes through a lot of topics giving the perfect amount of globalization to the issue. However, the introduction can be fixed as it seems to be more of an academic paper beginning rather than for a Wikipedia article. Other than that, simply rewording will be the way to go. Thanks for a great article. Gracieoribamise ( talk) 02:04, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
This article is very thorough and does an exceptional job of providing information clearly. It also has a great deal of sources and academic support for its claims. The addition of the western section really takes the article to the next level. The one consideration would be the addition of a picture. Alison.moscoso ( talk) 01:33, 1 April 2014 (UTC)
This is a very well-cited article on an interesting issue, and it address an area in which Wikipedia is often poor. I just wanted to draw attention to these sentences which could be improved:
Cheers, MartinPoulter ( talk) 12:30, 15 March 2014 (UTC)
The result of the proposal was withdrawn. -- BDD ( talk) 16:21, 28 March 2014 (UTC)
Global perceptions of autism →
Perceptions of autism in the developing world – The article's scope is not global as the current title suggests, it does not discuss Europe, North America or Australasia. The lead explicitly states that the scope is "non-Western nations" so the title should match the content.
Roger (Dodger67) (
talk)
08:39, 26 March 2014 (UTC)
I propose the following addition: "These drugs, such as selective serotonin uptake inhibitors, improve social interaction and self-control by reducing obsessive behavior. When used alongside psychosocial therapies, these drugs can greatly decrease the struggles of social interaction for people on the autism spectrum, although more research is needed before the medications can be safe and effective. [1]" The addition would become the final two sentences of the "Treatment in Western Countries" section, and the current final sentence would be removed. Thanks, Nickyharrington ( talk) 20:16, 20 March 2015 (UTC)
References
Greetings:
This is my first time commenting or attempting to contribute. I am grateful for the existence of this particular page, and have a personal and professional interest in the topic.
The first paragraph gives some possible reasons of the cause of ASD, and there is a citation of a specific study that suggested a 350% rise in ASD with mother's with celiac disease. I am concerned the information is potentially misleading and may give readers an incomplete idea of potential causes of ASD.
That particular study referenced ( http://pediatrics.aappublications.org.mwu.idm.oclc.org/content/124/2/687) from 2009 using data from 1993-2004, was an era in which both ASD and celiac disease were less diagnosed than today.
Several follow up studies have been performed, some suggesting no link between celiac and ASD:
and
https://doaj-org.mwu.idm.oclc.org/article/7db50962c1f34996817082c4151a2bb9
and others continuing to see some link: https://ijponline.biomedcentral.com/articles/10.1186/s13052-016-0308-x
For this article to be most effective, perhaps either altering the first paragraph to discuss the current thought around ASD cause(s) -- the wikipedia page on autism may be an effective place to start /info/en/?search=Autism -- or, if the celiac link is thought to be relevant and important for this article, indicating that the findings are controversial and further studies are being performed.
Thanks
Ideal sources for Wikipedia's health content are defined in the guideline
Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources (medicine) and are typically
review articles. Here are links to possibly useful sources of information about Global perceptions of autism.
|
SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 17:51, 10 May 2018 (UTC)
Sun, X., Allison, C., Auyeung, B., Zhang, Z., Matthews, F. E., Baron-Cohen, S., & Brayne, C. (2015). Validation of existing diagnosis of autism in mainland China using standardised diagnostic instruments. Autism, 19(8), 1010-1017. doi: 10.1177/1362361314556785
Tang, L., & Bie, B. (2015). The stigma of autism in china: An analysis of newspaper portrayals of autism between 2003 and 2012. Health Communication, 31(4), 445-452. doi:10.1080/10410236.2014.965381
La Valle, C. (2013). Chinese Cultural Factors Impacting the Educational Schooling of Children with Autism in China. DePaul Discoveries, 2(1), 256-261.
Chang, K. (2017). Applied Behavior Analysis in Autism Spectrum Disorders in China and Hong Kong. Acta Psychopathologica, 03(05). doi:10.4172/2469-6676.100124
Kurasawa, S., Tateyama, K., Iwanaga, R., Taro Ohtoshi, T., Nakatani, K., and Yokoi, K. (2018). The Age at Diagnosis of Autism Spectrum Disorder in Children in Japan. International Journal of Pediatrics, 2018(5374725).
Freeth, M., Sheppard, E., Ramachandran, R., & Milne, E. (2013). A Cross-Cultural Comparison of Autistic Traits in the UK, India and Malaysia. Journal of Autism and Developmental Disorders,43(11), 2569-2583. doi:10.1007/s10803-013-1808-9
Liu, Y., Li, J., Zheng, Q., Zaroff, C. M., Hall, B. J., Li, X., & Hao, Y. (2016). Knowledge, attitudes, and perceptions of autism spectrum disorder in a stratified sampling of preschool teachers in China. BMC Psychiatry, 16(1). doi:10.1186/s12888-016-0845-2
Hahler, Eva-Maria & Elsabbagh, Mayada. (2015). Autism: A Global Perspective. Current Developmental Disorders Reports, 2(10).