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I removed that sentence "Levy has been hailed as a 'heroic journalist' by some" because in order to use the quote "heroic journalist" and attribute it to "some," it can't just be that one person wrote it. See WP:WEASEL. The revision is slightly better, but I am wondering if having the quote "heroic journalist" is NPOV. After all, it was said by one person and it is being used in the intro to make a generalizing statement. This belong in the "Praise" section, not the intro.
My suggested revsion: "Levy has won prizes for his articles on human rights in the Israeli occupied territories and has been received praise for his work." Eym174 ( talk) 06:09, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
The article says "During its journey, the ship was strafed by Royal Air Force planes, killing two passengers". I believe this is taken from here, which says "His Majesty’s planes flew threateningly overhead. At one point the British shot and killed two passengers." He doesn't say that the planes shot, only that the British shot, and "at one point" is too imprecise to place the incident in time. A more likely version is in this German source, which says (rough translation):
The author Jürgen Rohwer is highly reliable. Zero talk 14:51, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
Ah, I see we have Tiger Hill (ship) which confirms it was a patrol boat that fired. Zero talk 14:55, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
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The article talks about the emigration of his father to Palestine, while at the time he did, it must be referred to the British mandate of Palestine. 2A00:A041:28E2:1E00:30F5:229:357B:C7EC ( talk) 16:15, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
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I removed that sentence "Levy has been hailed as a 'heroic journalist' by some" because in order to use the quote "heroic journalist" and attribute it to "some," it can't just be that one person wrote it. See WP:WEASEL. The revision is slightly better, but I am wondering if having the quote "heroic journalist" is NPOV. After all, it was said by one person and it is being used in the intro to make a generalizing statement. This belong in the "Praise" section, not the intro.
My suggested revsion: "Levy has won prizes for his articles on human rights in the Israeli occupied territories and has been received praise for his work." Eym174 ( talk) 06:09, 22 June 2016 (UTC)
The article says "During its journey, the ship was strafed by Royal Air Force planes, killing two passengers". I believe this is taken from here, which says "His Majesty’s planes flew threateningly overhead. At one point the British shot and killed two passengers." He doesn't say that the planes shot, only that the British shot, and "at one point" is too imprecise to place the incident in time. A more likely version is in this German source, which says (rough translation):
The author Jürgen Rohwer is highly reliable. Zero talk 14:51, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
Ah, I see we have Tiger Hill (ship) which confirms it was a patrol boat that fired. Zero talk 14:55, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
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The article talks about the emigration of his father to Palestine, while at the time he did, it must be referred to the British mandate of Palestine. 2A00:A041:28E2:1E00:30F5:229:357B:C7EC ( talk) 16:15, 28 June 2024 (UTC)