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Hello out there! Does anyone know the sources for this entry? Would love to incorporate some of it into the main Hair site but "need back-up" as they say in fact checking land -- Mblaxill 22:00, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
One correction: Gerome Ragni spelled his shortened name Jerry with a J. I just talked to Jim Rado a few minutes ago to clarify that very point, before the profile I just did on him for the Advocate's website goes up. It should be on their website some time later this week. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.83.219.112 ( talk) 21:34, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
This arctile is in desperate need of a clean up & major re-write, indeed it's one of the worse articles I have ever read on Wikipedia. Just a small number of examples:
It was rather difficult to select examples of bad writing as the whole article is shockingly bad - it reads more like a stream of consciousness than an encyclopedia article. If the author does have some useful information perhaps they could ask someone else, a literate individual, to write the article for them - or better still return to school for english lessons. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 119.224.43.24 ( talk) 12:17, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
The opening paragraph (drawing on walls, "tireless") is lifted directly from a 1972 New York Times article, reprinted here: http://www.orlok.com/hair/holding/articles/DudeArticles/D-NYT10-22-72disaster.html 64.81.49.227 ( talk) 17:53, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
He changed the spelling of his name from Jerome to Gerome; I updated the lead format by copying similar such as Bill Clinton. I didn't see an exact example of changed spelling of first names and where to put the middle name in Wikipedia:Naming conventions (people) although an exact answer might be in one of the 13 archives of talk. Fishlandia ( talk) 16:04, 8 January 2016 (UTC)
Will add source later Fishlandia ( talk) 16:06, 8 January 2016 (UTC)
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Hello out there! Does anyone know the sources for this entry? Would love to incorporate some of it into the main Hair site but "need back-up" as they say in fact checking land -- Mblaxill 22:00, 20 October 2007 (UTC)
One correction: Gerome Ragni spelled his shortened name Jerry with a J. I just talked to Jim Rado a few minutes ago to clarify that very point, before the profile I just did on him for the Advocate's website goes up. It should be on their website some time later this week. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 162.83.219.112 ( talk) 21:34, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
This arctile is in desperate need of a clean up & major re-write, indeed it's one of the worse articles I have ever read on Wikipedia. Just a small number of examples:
It was rather difficult to select examples of bad writing as the whole article is shockingly bad - it reads more like a stream of consciousness than an encyclopedia article. If the author does have some useful information perhaps they could ask someone else, a literate individual, to write the article for them - or better still return to school for english lessons. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 119.224.43.24 ( talk) 12:17, 29 April 2009 (UTC)
The opening paragraph (drawing on walls, "tireless") is lifted directly from a 1972 New York Times article, reprinted here: http://www.orlok.com/hair/holding/articles/DudeArticles/D-NYT10-22-72disaster.html 64.81.49.227 ( talk) 17:53, 20 June 2010 (UTC)
He changed the spelling of his name from Jerome to Gerome; I updated the lead format by copying similar such as Bill Clinton. I didn't see an exact example of changed spelling of first names and where to put the middle name in Wikipedia:Naming conventions (people) although an exact answer might be in one of the 13 archives of talk. Fishlandia ( talk) 16:04, 8 January 2016 (UTC)
Will add source later Fishlandia ( talk) 16:06, 8 January 2016 (UTC)