This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the lead, it would be best to add the first names of Presidents' Coolidge and Roosevelt, for your reader. In the History section, "last major Classical style memorial" constructed in the United States[5]," the comma should come before the source. In the Structures section, "A concrete floodwall built in Classical style to protect the memorial and Vincennes", is "Classical" supposed to be capitalize? In the Currently section, "In Late July 2008", "Late" is not supposed to be capitalized.
Dates need to be unlinked, per
here. In the lead, spell out ---> "Lt. Col.", I mean I know what it is, but how 'bout your reader. In the Structures section, wouldn't this ---> "4' by 9' by 11'" have to be converted in measurements? The article tends to have "red links", if they don't have articles, it would be best to un-link them, per
here.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
References 2, 3, 4, and 9 are missing Publisher info. In the Currently section, "This is a once-in-a-lifetime restoration project, and is critically needed for the long-term preservation of the Clark Memorial", the source should be mentioned after the quote has concluded, per
here and
here. Also, Reference 8 is a dead link.
Done
Check.
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Does Reference 2 cover all this ---> "The memorial is placed where Fort Sackville is believed to have been established; no archeological evidence has shown the exact location, but it is undoubtedly within the park's boundaries. The episode being commemorated marked the finest moment in General George Rogers Clark's life. He was sent by the state of Virginia to protect their interest in the Old Northwest. His 1778-1779 campaign included the founding of Louisville, Kentucky and the capture of British forts in the lower Ohio and Mississippi valleys. Forces under Clark's command had captured Fort Sackville months before, but when notified that British forces under Henry Hamilton had retaken the fort, Clark led a desperate march to retake the fort again for the American cause, succeeding on February 25, 1779. This led to the newly United States being able to claim control of what would become the modern day states of Ohio, Illinois, Indiana, Michigan, and Wisconsin in the Treaty of Paris (1783)"? In the Structures section, is there a source for this ---> "The interior includes a full complement of murals by Ezra Winter"?
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
In the lead, it would be best to add the first names of Presidents' Coolidge and Roosevelt, for your reader. In the History section, "last major Classical style memorial" constructed in the United States[5]," the comma should come before the source. In the Structures section, "A concrete floodwall built in Classical style to protect the memorial and Vincennes", is "Classical" supposed to be capitalize? In the Currently section, "In Late July 2008", "Late" is not supposed to be capitalized.
Dates need to be unlinked, per
here. In the lead, spell out ---> "Lt. Col.", I mean I know what it is, but how 'bout your reader. In the Structures section, wouldn't this ---> "4' by 9' by 11'" have to be converted in measurements? The article tends to have "red links", if they don't have articles, it would be best to un-link them, per
here.
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with
the layout style guideline:
References 2, 3, 4, and 9 are missing Publisher info. In the Currently section, "This is a once-in-a-lifetime restoration project, and is critically needed for the long-term preservation of the Clark Memorial", the source should be mentioned after the quote has concluded, per
here and
here. Also, Reference 8 is a dead link.
Done
Check.
B.
Reliable sources are
cited inline. All content that
could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
Does Reference 2 cover all this ---> "The memorial is placed where Fort Sackville is believed to have been established; no archeological evidence has shown the exact location, but it is undoubtedly within the park's boundaries. The episode being commemorated marked the finest moment in General George Rogers Clark's life. He was sent by the state of Virginia to protect their interest in the Old Northwest. His 1778-1779 campaign included the founding of Louisville, Kentucky and the capture of British forts in the lower Ohio and Mississippi valleys. Forces under Clark's command had captured Fort Sackville months before, but when notified that British forces under Henry Hamilton had retaken the fort, Clark led a desperate march to retake the fort again for the American cause, succeeding on February 25, 1779. This led to the newly United States being able to claim control of what would become the modern day states of Ohio, Illinois, Indiana, Michigan, and Wisconsin in the Treaty of Paris (1783)"? In the Structures section, is there a source for this ---> "The interior includes a full complement of murals by Ezra Winter"?