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"It was released as a digital single" → "The song was released as a digital
single" with the pipe Done
Remove the instrumental mention from the lead, as that is not notable Done
To expand the short lead, you should add the producers and writers; do this by writing them out in the body too though Done
Swap the commercial performance sentences because South Korea should come first due to it being the group's native country Done
"charted at 21 on the" → "charted at number 21 on the" Done
Background and composition
Done
Start this section by mentioning the writers and producers per the credits source(s); the producers should be moved from the second para to this one since there's background info next to them anyway and writers will need to be moved too to avoid separation Done
You should add a comma after what's currently of the Vlending sentence and mention "revealing "Future" would be released at 6pm on October 17, 2020.", per the source Done
"released on October 17, 2020, as a digital single" → "released on the planned date as a digital
single" with the target Done
Audio sample looks good! Done
""Future" was described" → "Musically, "Future" was described" Done
Cite Gaon Music Chart as publisher instead for refs 8, 9, 10 and 11 Done
WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on ref 13 Done
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but this article is quite short so it shouldn't take long! --
K. Peake 15:45, 14 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: All comments on the review regarding the article have all been resolved. Thank you so much for continuously reviewing the articles I nominate! I do always appreciate the effort you're giving in making these reviews! Hope to work with you soon once again! :) --
LipaCityPH 07:15, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
LipaCityPH: Mostly a good job and your welcome, but the only issues are that you not only placed the writers and producers in the wrong area but also wrote the latter out twice in the body, you did not keep the revealing section separate from the actual release as I instructed, you did not mention the guitar (unless there's a reason why) and you forgot to pipe Billboard. --
K. Peake 08:07, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: I forgot the guitar part. I'm sorry my mistake. I'll try to fix other issues as well. --
LipaCityPH 08:11, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: I managed to fix other issues. However I'm unsure whether they were correct. I'm sorry. --
LipaCityPH 08:23, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
LipaCityPH: The only mistakes that still remain are that you have not fixed the repetition of the writing credits, plus the production info should be moved to being next to them alongside the background from previous productions, also the sentence should end with "revealing "Future" would be released at 6pm on October 17, 2020." then add one afterwards about it being released as a digital single on the planned date as I previously instructed. --
K. Peake 11:00, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: I hope I managed to fix the mistakes by now. I'm sorry if I keep our conversations long for this short article. If I still have mistakes, please bear with me. I'll be doing my best to improve my skills towars editing. I'm really sorry. --
LipaCityPH 11:47, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
LipaCityPH: You have still made the mistakes with the production credits, but I have fixed that for you since it's one thing and the other changes were implemented correctly. ✓Pass now and it is fine to have long conversations as long as they are productive! --
K. Peake 12:10, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Just one minor thing – source #3 (
link) does not confirm that Yesy produced the song like its stated in the sentence "Future was produced by Taibian, Bark, and Yesy, who had previously produced the soundtracks for television series such as Itaewon Class, Stranger Season 2, Extraordinary You, and Hell Is Other People", the source says that only Taibian and Bark produced it.
Snowflake91 (
talk) 12:21, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Snowflake91 Thank you for pointing that out, must have missed it and @
LipaCityPH:, either add a ref that backs up Yesy or remove that producer altogether. --
K. Peake 12:35, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: I've separated Yesy from the two producers who were mentioned on the reference. I just don't know whether that was correct. Thank you for your time as always. :) --
LipaCityPH 11:47, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
This article was nominated for
deletion on 24 June 2021. The result of
the discussion was redirect.
Future (Red Velvet song) was one of the Music good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the
good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be
renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
This redirect is within the scope of WikiProject Electronic music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Electronic music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Electronic musicWikipedia:WikiProject Electronic musicTemplate:WikiProject Electronic musicelectronic music articles
This redirect is within the scope of WikiProject Korea, a collaborative effort to build and improve articles related to Korea. All interested editors are invited to
join the project and contribute to the
discussion. For instructions on how use this banner, please refer to the
documentation.KoreaWikipedia:WikiProject KoreaTemplate:WikiProject KoreaKorea-related articles
This redirect is within the scope of WikiProject Songs, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
songs on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.SongsWikipedia:WikiProject SongsTemplate:WikiProject Songssong articles
This redirect is within the scope of WikiProject Women in Music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Women in music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Women in MusicWikipedia:WikiProject Women in MusicTemplate:WikiProject Women in MusicWomen in music articles
"It was released as a digital single" → "The song was released as a digital
single" with the pipe Done
Remove the instrumental mention from the lead, as that is not notable Done
To expand the short lead, you should add the producers and writers; do this by writing them out in the body too though Done
Swap the commercial performance sentences because South Korea should come first due to it being the group's native country Done
"charted at 21 on the" → "charted at number 21 on the" Done
Background and composition
Done
Start this section by mentioning the writers and producers per the credits source(s); the producers should be moved from the second para to this one since there's background info next to them anyway and writers will need to be moved too to avoid separation Done
You should add a comma after what's currently of the Vlending sentence and mention "revealing "Future" would be released at 6pm on October 17, 2020.", per the source Done
"released on October 17, 2020, as a digital single" → "released on the planned date as a digital
single" with the target Done
Audio sample looks good! Done
""Future" was described" → "Musically, "Future" was described" Done
Cite Gaon Music Chart as publisher instead for refs 8, 9, 10 and 11 Done
WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on ref 13 Done
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but this article is quite short so it shouldn't take long! --
K. Peake 15:45, 14 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: All comments on the review regarding the article have all been resolved. Thank you so much for continuously reviewing the articles I nominate! I do always appreciate the effort you're giving in making these reviews! Hope to work with you soon once again! :) --
LipaCityPH 07:15, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
LipaCityPH: Mostly a good job and your welcome, but the only issues are that you not only placed the writers and producers in the wrong area but also wrote the latter out twice in the body, you did not keep the revealing section separate from the actual release as I instructed, you did not mention the guitar (unless there's a reason why) and you forgot to pipe Billboard. --
K. Peake 08:07, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: I forgot the guitar part. I'm sorry my mistake. I'll try to fix other issues as well. --
LipaCityPH 08:11, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: I managed to fix other issues. However I'm unsure whether they were correct. I'm sorry. --
LipaCityPH 08:23, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
LipaCityPH: The only mistakes that still remain are that you have not fixed the repetition of the writing credits, plus the production info should be moved to being next to them alongside the background from previous productions, also the sentence should end with "revealing "Future" would be released at 6pm on October 17, 2020." then add one afterwards about it being released as a digital single on the planned date as I previously instructed. --
K. Peake 11:00, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: I hope I managed to fix the mistakes by now. I'm sorry if I keep our conversations long for this short article. If I still have mistakes, please bear with me. I'll be doing my best to improve my skills towars editing. I'm really sorry. --
LipaCityPH 11:47, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
LipaCityPH: You have still made the mistakes with the production credits, but I have fixed that for you since it's one thing and the other changes were implemented correctly. ✓Pass now and it is fine to have long conversations as long as they are productive! --
K. Peake 12:10, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Just one minor thing – source #3 (
link) does not confirm that Yesy produced the song like its stated in the sentence "Future was produced by Taibian, Bark, and Yesy, who had previously produced the soundtracks for television series such as Itaewon Class, Stranger Season 2, Extraordinary You, and Hell Is Other People", the source says that only Taibian and Bark produced it.
Snowflake91 (
talk) 12:21, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
Snowflake91 Thank you for pointing that out, must have missed it and @
LipaCityPH:, either add a ref that backs up Yesy or remove that producer altogether. --
K. Peake 12:35, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: I've separated Yesy from the two producers who were mentioned on the reference. I just don't know whether that was correct. Thank you for your time as always. :) --
LipaCityPH 11:47, 15 March 2021 (UTC)reply