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Reviewer: Simongraham ( talk · contribs) 15:05, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
This looks like another interesting article nominated by Epicgenius and, cursorily, looks very close to meeting the criteria to be a good article already. I will start a review shortly. simongraham ( talk) 15:05, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
The six good article criteria:
@ Epicgenius: Thank you for all your work on architecture of New York. This is another extensively researched piece and worthy of being a GA. Please take a look at my comments and suggestions, and ping me when you would like me to take another look. simongraham ( talk) 15:17, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Suggest replacing of "to" on in "Commentary of the museum".- I have done this.
Suggest rewording "Frick had acquired some objects from the J. P. Morgan estate specifically to complement the visual art in his collection. Some of the acquisitions from Morgan's estate" to avoid the repeat of "estate".- I have done this.
The following are duplicate links: Charles Carstairs, Duccio, François Boucher, J. P. Morgan, Jean-Baptiste-Camille Corot, Jean-Auguste-Dominique Ingres, Joseph Duveen and Portrait of Comtesse d'Haussonville- I have eliminated the duplicate links in the prose.
The reference section is split into a list of citations and sources. In the main, the books are in the sources but there are exceptions (e.g. Sanger & Garrett 2001). Suggest moving all together for consistency.- I have moved all books down to the sources section. This was done to avoid having to use {{ rp}} for every book, while also keeping other citation templates as footnoted references (which appear in the "Citations" section) per WP:CITEVAR.
As well as the collection, the article extensively covers its location; this is also covered in the article Henry Clay Frick House.- The situation is fairly complex. For the Frick House, there is a lot of history about the house itself prior to its takeover by the museum. I've trimmed whatever redundancies I could (this article used to talk about the house and the museum at length, but I removed more details last month). However, the concept of the museum itself dates to the house's construction, and there necessarily has to be some shared background information.
There is more content on the collection in the sources that could be used instead.- I looked through most of the sources and included pertinent details from these sources. I had to exclude some of the minutiae to comply with WP:SUMMARYSTYLE.
For example, my reading of Skrabec 2014 p.210 is that it has a whole paragraph on a donation from the McKinley Memorial and Presidential Library.- The issue with adding that particular detail is that Frick made a donation to the McKinley Memorial and Presidential Library. The library didn't donate to Frick; it was the other way around.
Turner Mortlake Terrace Early Summer Morning 1826.jpg is lacking a PD rationale.- I have added a rationale.
The license for the images Joseph Mallord William Turner - Cologne, the Arrival of a Packet Boat in the Evening - c 1826 - The Frick Collection.jpg and Hendrik van der Burgh - Drinkers before the Fireplace - c 1660 - The Frick Collection.jpg seem to be CC rather than PD- The CC license for both is a Template:cc-zero license, which is a public domain license.
The infobox image is of the outside of the building.- I've swapped it with an interior picture.
Pass
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18:29, 12 March 2024 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Simongraham ( talk · contribs) 15:05, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
This looks like another interesting article nominated by Epicgenius and, cursorily, looks very close to meeting the criteria to be a good article already. I will start a review shortly. simongraham ( talk) 15:05, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
The six good article criteria:
@ Epicgenius: Thank you for all your work on architecture of New York. This is another extensively researched piece and worthy of being a GA. Please take a look at my comments and suggestions, and ping me when you would like me to take another look. simongraham ( talk) 15:17, 10 March 2024 (UTC)
Suggest replacing of "to" on in "Commentary of the museum".- I have done this.
Suggest rewording "Frick had acquired some objects from the J. P. Morgan estate specifically to complement the visual art in his collection. Some of the acquisitions from Morgan's estate" to avoid the repeat of "estate".- I have done this.
The following are duplicate links: Charles Carstairs, Duccio, François Boucher, J. P. Morgan, Jean-Baptiste-Camille Corot, Jean-Auguste-Dominique Ingres, Joseph Duveen and Portrait of Comtesse d'Haussonville- I have eliminated the duplicate links in the prose.
The reference section is split into a list of citations and sources. In the main, the books are in the sources but there are exceptions (e.g. Sanger & Garrett 2001). Suggest moving all together for consistency.- I have moved all books down to the sources section. This was done to avoid having to use {{ rp}} for every book, while also keeping other citation templates as footnoted references (which appear in the "Citations" section) per WP:CITEVAR.
As well as the collection, the article extensively covers its location; this is also covered in the article Henry Clay Frick House.- The situation is fairly complex. For the Frick House, there is a lot of history about the house itself prior to its takeover by the museum. I've trimmed whatever redundancies I could (this article used to talk about the house and the museum at length, but I removed more details last month). However, the concept of the museum itself dates to the house's construction, and there necessarily has to be some shared background information.
There is more content on the collection in the sources that could be used instead.- I looked through most of the sources and included pertinent details from these sources. I had to exclude some of the minutiae to comply with WP:SUMMARYSTYLE.
For example, my reading of Skrabec 2014 p.210 is that it has a whole paragraph on a donation from the McKinley Memorial and Presidential Library.- The issue with adding that particular detail is that Frick made a donation to the McKinley Memorial and Presidential Library. The library didn't donate to Frick; it was the other way around.
Turner Mortlake Terrace Early Summer Morning 1826.jpg is lacking a PD rationale.- I have added a rationale.
The license for the images Joseph Mallord William Turner - Cologne, the Arrival of a Packet Boat in the Evening - c 1826 - The Frick Collection.jpg and Hendrik van der Burgh - Drinkers before the Fireplace - c 1660 - The Frick Collection.jpg seem to be CC rather than PD- The CC license for both is a Template:cc-zero license, which is a public domain license.
The infobox image is of the outside of the building.- I've swapped it with an interior picture.
Pass
simongraham (
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18:29, 12 March 2024 (UTC)