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http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:D7f.jpg shows a Fokker D.VII such as Buchner flew. If someone with the skills could dub it in, it would be a great addition to the article.
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17:30, 19 July 2009 (UTC) Done
I have assessed this article for the Military History project and believe that it is very close to B class. If the following issues could be addressed, I feel it could be promoted from a Start:
I've done some formating of the citations so that they are more in line with the Manual of Style, too. Anyway, hope this helps. If you would like a re-assessment after you've made these changes, please don't hesitate to ask. Cheers. Good work so far, by the way. — AustralianRupert ( talk) 03:19, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
"With the introduction of the Fokker D.VII in 1918, Büchner came into his own". This sentence appears in para 2 of the 'Service as a fighter pilot' section.
My question is: what type(s) of aircraft did Brüchner fly before 1918?
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http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:D7f.jpg shows a Fokker D.VII such as Buchner flew. If someone with the skills could dub it in, it would be a great addition to the article.
Georgejdorner (
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17:30, 19 July 2009 (UTC) Done
I have assessed this article for the Military History project and believe that it is very close to B class. If the following issues could be addressed, I feel it could be promoted from a Start:
I've done some formating of the citations so that they are more in line with the Manual of Style, too. Anyway, hope this helps. If you would like a re-assessment after you've made these changes, please don't hesitate to ask. Cheers. Good work so far, by the way. — AustralianRupert ( talk) 03:19, 25 July 2009 (UTC)
"With the introduction of the Fokker D.VII in 1918, Büchner came into his own". This sentence appears in para 2 of the 'Service as a fighter pilot' section.
My question is: what type(s) of aircraft did Brüchner fly before 1918?