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@ Georgeeliotismybae:

1. For consistency, the article should be titled Frances Finch, Countess of Winchilsea and Nottingham, not Frances, Countess of Winchilsea and Nottingham.
2. thepeerage.com is not acceptable as a reference.
3. "eighteenth century" is superfluous, because her birth and death dates are in the intro, but nationality ("English") should be included in the opening sentence.
4. For clarity, "She was married to ... in 1729" should read "She married ... in 1729", which is what I think you meant.
5. "Few details of her life are known, however, she was notable ..." For clarity, "however", when used as a conjunction, should be preceded by a full stop or semi-colon; otherwise, it means something else entirely.

I hope you find these pointers helpful. Deb ( talk) 13:50, 19 November 2018 (UTC) reply