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This post will be explaining my changes to this by 180.43.140.57 ( talk · contribs · deleted contribs · logs · filter log · block user · block log). That edit itself is copied from this by Daboda 55 ( talk · contribs · deleted contribs · logs · filter log · block user · block log).
First, here is Daboda 55's edit in its entirety:
Here is my edit that replaced the previous one:
Note that I removed the citations for formatting reasons in this post.
I'll go through each sentence to explain my changes:
"According to Choe Wansu ( Hangul:최완수), a general manager of Gansong Art Museum, those theories have strong narrative elements."
"He reinterpreted reasonably and reorganize the situation at that time."
"In his theory, ancestral family of King Uijo of Goryeo was one of wealthy merchants in Kaesong. They made direct trade with Chinese merchants and built huge wealth."
"Therefore, father of King Uijo of Goryeo who interpreted as the royal family of Tang dynasty was actually Chinese merchant who visited Kaesong for commercial transactions."
"So, King Uijo of Goryeo was a child who born between Chinese merchant and Gang Sin-ui."
"In Goryeosa and Goryeosa jeolyo, Emperor Suzong of Tang is father of King Uijo of Goryeo, however, it was probably just an estimation from Goryeo side."
"In any cases, it is certain that King Uijo of Goryeo was a son of Chinese merchant and at Songag County, there are lots of Chinese merchants visited for their business."
"In addition, King Uijo of Goryeo tried to find his father and visited Tang with merchant vessel when he was 16."
"It can be reinterpreted as above."
Bamnamu ( talk) 08:33, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
180.43.140.57 ( talk · contribs · deleted contribs · logs · filter log · block user · block log), do you have any other ideas on how to integrate your edit into the article, or are you dead set on copy-pasting it into the article as it is? I'm open to suggestions.
Bamnamu ( talk) 21:17, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
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This post will be explaining my changes to this by 180.43.140.57 ( talk · contribs · deleted contribs · logs · filter log · block user · block log). That edit itself is copied from this by Daboda 55 ( talk · contribs · deleted contribs · logs · filter log · block user · block log).
First, here is Daboda 55's edit in its entirety:
Here is my edit that replaced the previous one:
Note that I removed the citations for formatting reasons in this post.
I'll go through each sentence to explain my changes:
"According to Choe Wansu ( Hangul:최완수), a general manager of Gansong Art Museum, those theories have strong narrative elements."
"He reinterpreted reasonably and reorganize the situation at that time."
"In his theory, ancestral family of King Uijo of Goryeo was one of wealthy merchants in Kaesong. They made direct trade with Chinese merchants and built huge wealth."
"Therefore, father of King Uijo of Goryeo who interpreted as the royal family of Tang dynasty was actually Chinese merchant who visited Kaesong for commercial transactions."
"So, King Uijo of Goryeo was a child who born between Chinese merchant and Gang Sin-ui."
"In Goryeosa and Goryeosa jeolyo, Emperor Suzong of Tang is father of King Uijo of Goryeo, however, it was probably just an estimation from Goryeo side."
"In any cases, it is certain that King Uijo of Goryeo was a son of Chinese merchant and at Songag County, there are lots of Chinese merchants visited for their business."
"In addition, King Uijo of Goryeo tried to find his father and visited Tang with merchant vessel when he was 16."
"It can be reinterpreted as above."
Bamnamu ( talk) 08:33, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
180.43.140.57 ( talk · contribs · deleted contribs · logs · filter log · block user · block log), do you have any other ideas on how to integrate your edit into the article, or are you dead set on copy-pasting it into the article as it is? I'm open to suggestions.
Bamnamu ( talk) 21:17, 23 May 2018 (UTC)