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@ Bangabandhu: I think it's more appropriate to have this conversation here. At any rate, while I'm open to discussing alternative section titles, I will point out that WP:CRITS which you cited on my talk page is an essay, not a guideline, and I'm not sure I find it entirely persuasive in this context. While I can agree with it for sections on the critical receptions of books, etc. here we're talking about a section whose content is entirely about corrupt business practices. As such, I think that it's misleading to leave it as "Notable contracts", as there are no positive notable contracts to speak of. Perhaps a workable compromise would be to rewrite this section as a subsection of "Operations" (after all, contracts are part of their operations, right?), with a sub-heading along the lines of "Government bribery" or "Overbilling and bribery". signed, Rosguill talk 19:31, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
Parts of this article read like an FMC press release. BHolmes555 ( talk) 02:57, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
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@ Bangabandhu: I think it's more appropriate to have this conversation here. At any rate, while I'm open to discussing alternative section titles, I will point out that WP:CRITS which you cited on my talk page is an essay, not a guideline, and I'm not sure I find it entirely persuasive in this context. While I can agree with it for sections on the critical receptions of books, etc. here we're talking about a section whose content is entirely about corrupt business practices. As such, I think that it's misleading to leave it as "Notable contracts", as there are no positive notable contracts to speak of. Perhaps a workable compromise would be to rewrite this section as a subsection of "Operations" (after all, contracts are part of their operations, right?), with a sub-heading along the lines of "Government bribery" or "Overbilling and bribery". signed, Rosguill talk 19:31, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
Parts of this article read like an FMC press release. BHolmes555 ( talk) 02:57, 25 May 2022 (UTC)