in the Prelude, tense issue ("would be held", and "provided") "would be held in reserve and also provided a battalion to each of the other brigades as reinforcements";
"while undoubtedly a large number had also been wounded" (not sure about this, perhaps it would be better to use more subtle language, e.g. "while the Australians believed that a large number of Chinese had also been wounded");
in the Aftermath, this is confusing: "with 283 killed by body count alone and another 50 captured" (it implies that someone can be killed by body count, when what you mean is that it was a method used to determine how many were killed);
in the Aftermath, "during which Private Bill Speakman was awarded the Victoria Cross" (I suggest rewording this slightly. Speakman probably wasn't awarded the VC during the fighting, but for the fighting);
a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
No issues.
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
No issues.
It contains
images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
a (tagged and captioned): b (Is illustrated with appropriate images): c (non-free images have
fair use rationales): d public domain pictures appropriately demonstrate why they are public domain:
"File:Korean porters Nov 1951 (AWM HOBJ2563).jpg" - is missing description information on the image description page,
"File:Australian casualties Operation Commando Oct 1951 (AWM HOBJ2443).jpg" - same as above (this is on Commons), so you will need to edit the Commons page, or I can do this for you (I have a Commons account), if you tell me what you want added;
if you are considering taking this to FA, I would suggest replacing the non-free map if possible, although it seems okay for GA and the searches I did, didn't locate any free maps to replace it with.
in the Prelude, tense issue ("would be held", and "provided") "would be held in reserve and also provided a battalion to each of the other brigades as reinforcements";
"while undoubtedly a large number had also been wounded" (not sure about this, perhaps it would be better to use more subtle language, e.g. "while the Australians believed that a large number of Chinese had also been wounded");
in the Aftermath, this is confusing: "with 283 killed by body count alone and another 50 captured" (it implies that someone can be killed by body count, when what you mean is that it was a method used to determine how many were killed);
in the Aftermath, "during which Private Bill Speakman was awarded the Victoria Cross" (I suggest rewording this slightly. Speakman probably wasn't awarded the VC during the fighting, but for the fighting);
a (fair representation): b (all significant views):
No issues.
It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:
No issues.
It contains
images, where possible, to illustrate the topic.
a (tagged and captioned): b (Is illustrated with appropriate images): c (non-free images have
fair use rationales): d public domain pictures appropriately demonstrate why they are public domain:
"File:Korean porters Nov 1951 (AWM HOBJ2563).jpg" - is missing description information on the image description page,
"File:Australian casualties Operation Commando Oct 1951 (AWM HOBJ2443).jpg" - same as above (this is on Commons), so you will need to edit the Commons page, or I can do this for you (I have a Commons account), if you tell me what you want added;
if you are considering taking this to FA, I would suggest replacing the non-free map if possible, although it seems okay for GA and the searches I did, didn't locate any free maps to replace it with.