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Elle Leonard was a good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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Created by TonyTheTiger ( talk). Self-nominated at 05:34, 30 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Elle Leonard; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Reviewer: Eurohunter ( talk · contribs) 17:07, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
@ TonyTheTiger: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter ( talk) 17:07, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
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There is a conversation to be had. SlimeSeason5 ( talk) 15:39, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
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@ TonyTheTiger and Eurohunter: this has been stalled for over two months. Is there something preventing it from moving forward?-— Preceding unsigned comment added by RoySmith ( talk • contribs) 15:53, November 6, 2023 (UTC)-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:45, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
How is this person notable under WP:GNG? The lede asserts she is notable as an athlete, but she never competed beyond high school and her highest honor was as a fifth-team, all-state basketball and volleyball player. The article has lots of citations, but none of them qualify as WP:SIGCOV. Articles that simply mention her as the wife of an NBA player don't cut it. And interviews such as this aren't considered WP:INDEPENDENT. Unless someone can point to some actual SIGCOV, this should go to AfD. Cbl62 ( talk) 00:06, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: The Blue Rider ( talk · contribs) 23:39, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Vami IV ( talk · contribs) 23:51, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
If I have demonstrated incompetence or caused offense, please let me know. – ♠Vamí _IV†♠ 23:51, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
I have elected to quick-fail this nomination. In just my prose review - before even doing spot-checks or a copyright check, I found problems with just about every sentence in the article. I now have serious doubts about the notability of the article subject. There are many citations to RS, but as elaborated below much of the article veers away from Leonard and much of the content about Leonard is about for example posts on Twitter about playing recreational basketball with her husband. – ♠Vamí _IV†♠ 09:29, 11 February 2024 (UTC)
[...] she (listed at 5 ft 11 in (1.80 m))Why does it matter how tall she was?
[...] brother, Max Bielfeldt (listed at 6 ft 6 in (1.98 m))Why does it matter how tall her brother was?
[...] for being one of the area's interesting sibling basketball performers.This should use a quotation, rather than saying in Wikipedia's voice that central Illinois is a basketball desert.
On January 14, 2010, Leonard scored 25 points against LaSalle-Peru High School.[16]Is there any consequence to this?
She was a 2010 Peoria Journal StarMissing italicization.
Her younger brother, Max, was highly touted for basketball, but Elle claims that she could beat him at one-on-one until he could dunk.Who asked?
In the March 30, 2010, announcement that the Peoria Times-Observer would cease operations on April 28, 2010, both Elle and Max Bielfeldt were thanked for having lives that made for great content.This should be or use a quotation. It is not encyclopedic.
Her younger (high school class of 2014) sister, Matti (listed at 6 ft 1 in (1.85 m)), excelled in volleyball (179 kills, 87 digs, 79 blocks and 30 aces as a senior) and eventually joined the University of Illinois team.This article is not about Matti.
Their first date was five hours long at the University of Illinois gym. The pair spent two hours of shooting basketball and then three hours of talking, since she refused a dinner date.Do we need to know this?
As Leonard's girlfriend during the 2012 NBA draft ceremony, she was regarded as having notable sex appeal compared to wives and girlfriends in attendance.Why is this, and the quotation from the article in the citation template, included? What value does it add?
After three years of operating solely as a food company, the brand marketed merchandise and then subsequently expanded to female sportswear.This sentence is missing a citation.
Leonard can be seen keeping her basketball skills sharp on social media.[37]What value does this statement add?
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Elle Leonard was a good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. | ||||||||||||||||||||||
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The result was: promoted by
Lightburst (
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21:54, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
Created by TonyTheTiger ( talk). Self-nominated at 05:34, 30 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Elle Leonard; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.
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Reviewer: Eurohunter ( talk · contribs) 17:07, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
@ TonyTheTiger: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter ( talk) 17:07, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
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There is a conversation to be had. SlimeSeason5 ( talk) 15:39, 3 October 2023 (UTC)
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@ TonyTheTiger and Eurohunter: this has been stalled for over two months. Is there something preventing it from moving forward?-— Preceding unsigned comment added by RoySmith ( talk • contribs) 15:53, November 6, 2023 (UTC)-- TonyTheTiger ( T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 06:45, 10 November 2023 (UTC)
How is this person notable under WP:GNG? The lede asserts she is notable as an athlete, but she never competed beyond high school and her highest honor was as a fifth-team, all-state basketball and volleyball player. The article has lots of citations, but none of them qualify as WP:SIGCOV. Articles that simply mention her as the wife of an NBA player don't cut it. And interviews such as this aren't considered WP:INDEPENDENT. Unless someone can point to some actual SIGCOV, this should go to AfD. Cbl62 ( talk) 00:06, 3 December 2023 (UTC)
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Reviewer: The Blue Rider ( talk · contribs) 23:39, 2 December 2023 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Vami IV ( talk · contribs) 23:51, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
If I have demonstrated incompetence or caused offense, please let me know. – ♠Vamí _IV†♠ 23:51, 25 January 2024 (UTC)
I have elected to quick-fail this nomination. In just my prose review - before even doing spot-checks or a copyright check, I found problems with just about every sentence in the article. I now have serious doubts about the notability of the article subject. There are many citations to RS, but as elaborated below much of the article veers away from Leonard and much of the content about Leonard is about for example posts on Twitter about playing recreational basketball with her husband. – ♠Vamí _IV†♠ 09:29, 11 February 2024 (UTC)
[...] she (listed at 5 ft 11 in (1.80 m))Why does it matter how tall she was?
[...] brother, Max Bielfeldt (listed at 6 ft 6 in (1.98 m))Why does it matter how tall her brother was?
[...] for being one of the area's interesting sibling basketball performers.This should use a quotation, rather than saying in Wikipedia's voice that central Illinois is a basketball desert.
On January 14, 2010, Leonard scored 25 points against LaSalle-Peru High School.[16]Is there any consequence to this?
She was a 2010 Peoria Journal StarMissing italicization.
Her younger brother, Max, was highly touted for basketball, but Elle claims that she could beat him at one-on-one until he could dunk.Who asked?
In the March 30, 2010, announcement that the Peoria Times-Observer would cease operations on April 28, 2010, both Elle and Max Bielfeldt were thanked for having lives that made for great content.This should be or use a quotation. It is not encyclopedic.
Her younger (high school class of 2014) sister, Matti (listed at 6 ft 1 in (1.85 m)), excelled in volleyball (179 kills, 87 digs, 79 blocks and 30 aces as a senior) and eventually joined the University of Illinois team.This article is not about Matti.
Their first date was five hours long at the University of Illinois gym. The pair spent two hours of shooting basketball and then three hours of talking, since she refused a dinner date.Do we need to know this?
As Leonard's girlfriend during the 2012 NBA draft ceremony, she was regarded as having notable sex appeal compared to wives and girlfriends in attendance.Why is this, and the quotation from the article in the citation template, included? What value does it add?
After three years of operating solely as a food company, the brand marketed merchandise and then subsequently expanded to female sportswear.This sentence is missing a citation.
Leonard can be seen keeping her basketball skills sharp on social media.[37]What value does this statement add?
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