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I think it would be important to note in the Aftermath section that numerous individuals, particularly federal investigators, that participated in the response and subsequent investigation into Flight 93 have died from 9/11-related illnesses, particularly due to inhalation of carcinogens at the crash site.
These individuals are as follows:
- Special Agent Laurie Fournier, Federal Bureau of Investigation (December 26, 2009)
- Special Agent William Daniel Craig, Federal Bureau of Investigation (April 9, 2012)
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There is a repeating sentence in the introduction.
I am requesting a change from:
"The hijackers planned to crash the plane into a federal government building in the national capital of Washington, D.C. The hijackers planned to crash the plane into a federal government building in Washington, D.C., the U.S. capital."
To:
"The hijackers planned to crash the plane into a federal government building in the city of Washington, D.C., the U.S. capital."
Or:
"The hijackers planned to crash the plane into a federal government building in the national capital of Washington, D.C." Omerhijazi404 ( talk) 23:00, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
I believe the following sentence in the Hijacking > Cockpit transmissions and recordings section makes more sense with the word "time" removed: "Officials believe that at around 09:28, the hijackers killed Mark Rothenberg,[47] assaulted the cockpit, and moved the remaining passengers and crew to the rear of the plane time to minimize any chance that either the crew or the passengers would interfere with the attack". Mcneda ( talk) 19:41, 25 September 2023 (UTC)
Picture box in "Hijackers" section is missing a photo of Ahmed al-Haznawi. So it describes 4 people in the caption, but only has photos for 3 of them. Violarulez ( talk) 18:06, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
At Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/I Missed Flight 93 I noted that there is no summary style paragraph of the various movie or TV dramatizations originating from this event. I would consider a comprehensive article to need at least some mention, in the body rather than hatnotes and "see also"s, of these derivative media. But I don't work in FA land much... am I wrong? Jclemens ( talk) 06:36, 2 March 2024 (UTC)
I Missed Flight 93 was nominated for deletion. The discussion was closed on 8 March 2024 with a consensus to merge. Its contents were merged into United Airlines Flight 93. The original page is now a redirect to this page. For the contribution history and old versions of the redirected article, please see its history; for its talk page, see here. |
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I think it would be important to note in the Aftermath section that numerous individuals, particularly federal investigators, that participated in the response and subsequent investigation into Flight 93 have died from 9/11-related illnesses, particularly due to inhalation of carcinogens at the crash site.
These individuals are as follows:
- Special Agent Laurie Fournier, Federal Bureau of Investigation (December 26, 2009)
- Special Agent William Daniel Craig, Federal Bureau of Investigation (April 9, 2012)
This
edit request has been answered. Set the |answered= or |ans= parameter to no to reactivate your request. |
There is a repeating sentence in the introduction.
I am requesting a change from:
"The hijackers planned to crash the plane into a federal government building in the national capital of Washington, D.C. The hijackers planned to crash the plane into a federal government building in Washington, D.C., the U.S. capital."
To:
"The hijackers planned to crash the plane into a federal government building in the city of Washington, D.C., the U.S. capital."
Or:
"The hijackers planned to crash the plane into a federal government building in the national capital of Washington, D.C." Omerhijazi404 ( talk) 23:00, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
I believe the following sentence in the Hijacking > Cockpit transmissions and recordings section makes more sense with the word "time" removed: "Officials believe that at around 09:28, the hijackers killed Mark Rothenberg,[47] assaulted the cockpit, and moved the remaining passengers and crew to the rear of the plane time to minimize any chance that either the crew or the passengers would interfere with the attack". Mcneda ( talk) 19:41, 25 September 2023 (UTC)
Picture box in "Hijackers" section is missing a photo of Ahmed al-Haznawi. So it describes 4 people in the caption, but only has photos for 3 of them. Violarulez ( talk) 18:06, 9 November 2023 (UTC)
At Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/I Missed Flight 93 I noted that there is no summary style paragraph of the various movie or TV dramatizations originating from this event. I would consider a comprehensive article to need at least some mention, in the body rather than hatnotes and "see also"s, of these derivative media. But I don't work in FA land much... am I wrong? Jclemens ( talk) 06:36, 2 March 2024 (UTC)