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The talk page for Suffrajitsu has discussion that editors may find useful for this article. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 15:15, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
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Before starting the review, one question: Is Edith Margaret Garrud the best article title? I just picked a random ref, the Islington Tribune, and it writes about her as Edith Garrud. As per WP:MIDDLENAME and MOS:NAME we should use the most common format of a name used in reliable sources as the article title and then give the full name in the first line of the article. So it comes down to: is she generally known as Edith Garrud or Edith Margaret Garrud? Edwininlondon ( talk) 08:40, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
I'll have a look at the references and all the criteria tomorrow but this looks promising. Edwininlondon ( talk) 22:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
Images: rights are all fine. Broad coverage is fine, no omissions as far as I can tell. Neutral PoV.
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Final point: I'm not so sure about the panel at the bottom of the page about Physical culture. Perhaps better to show it closed rather than open? And I would definitely add a second panel about suffragetes or something women's rights. That's all from me. Let me know if something is not clear or anything else I can help with. Edwininlondon ( talk) 11:15, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
According to scholar Emelyne Godfrey, a year after the Garruds took over Uyenishi’s dojo, she divorced William and opened a different School.
link Is there another source for Edith and William Garrud continued to work as self-defence and jujutsu instructors until 1925, when they sold their school
? not sure Vice is
WP:RELIABLE here
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Hello BennyOnTheLoose what do you think about switching to sfn? Lewolka ( talk) 14:14, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
I find the title of this section misleading as she did not train bodyguards but members of the WSPU's bodyguard unit. I'd like to change it to "Training the WSPU's bodyguard". In My Own Story Emmeline Pankhurst's Autobiography she writes: "The bodyguard and members of the audience vigorously repelled the attack, wielding clubs, batons, poles, planks, or anything they could seize, while the police laid about right and left with their batons" and "I had been surrounded by members of the bodyguard, who hurried me towards the stairs from the platform. The police, however, overtook us, and in spite of the resistance of the bodyguard, they seized me and dragged me down the narrow stair at the back of the hall." Lewolka ( talk) 12:31, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
I have quite expanded the Life section.... it may be worth breaking that content into:
this way it may be easier to work on specific sections but I leave it up to you BennyOnTheLoose, stepping back now! :) Lewolka ( talk) 10:40, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
Hello BennyOnTheLoose The only mention of her date of birth I could find so far is: "On her ninety-fourth birthday, a man named Godfrey Winn came to visit her." here and also: "It was June, 1965. to celebrate her birthday, he brought her a sugary lemon gâteau and his equally saccharine interview with her was printed in the popular magazine, Woman." (Godfrey 2012, p. 99) also: " it was not until June 1965, on Edith Garrud's 93rd birthday, that journalist Godfrey Winn, writing for Woman magazine, approached Edith for an interview " (Kelly, p. 18) "She regaled the journalist, Godfrey Wynn, who brought her a birthday cake" here (Photograph: in Woman, 19 June 1965;). So we only know the month, maybe the original article in Woman has the day if accessible in archives? Regards Lewolka ( talk) 14:06, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
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The talk page for Suffrajitsu has discussion that editors may find useful for this article. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose ( talk) 15:15, 15 September 2021 (UTC)
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Happy to review this against the GA criteria in the next few days. Edwininlondon ( talk) 13:17, 20 October 2021 (UTC)
Before starting the review, one question: Is Edith Margaret Garrud the best article title? I just picked a random ref, the Islington Tribune, and it writes about her as Edith Garrud. As per WP:MIDDLENAME and MOS:NAME we should use the most common format of a name used in reliable sources as the article title and then give the full name in the first line of the article. So it comes down to: is she generally known as Edith Garrud or Edith Margaret Garrud? Edwininlondon ( talk) 08:40, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
I'll have a look at the references and all the criteria tomorrow but this looks promising. Edwininlondon ( talk) 22:18, 21 October 2021 (UTC)
Images: rights are all fine. Broad coverage is fine, no omissions as far as I can tell. Neutral PoV.
References:
Final point: I'm not so sure about the panel at the bottom of the page about Physical culture. Perhaps better to show it closed rather than open? And I would definitely add a second panel about suffragetes or something women's rights. That's all from me. Let me know if something is not clear or anything else I can help with. Edwininlondon ( talk) 11:15, 23 October 2021 (UTC)
According to scholar Emelyne Godfrey, a year after the Garruds took over Uyenishi’s dojo, she divorced William and opened a different School.
link Is there another source for Edith and William Garrud continued to work as self-defence and jujutsu instructors until 1925, when they sold their school
? not sure Vice is
WP:RELIABLE here
Lewolka (
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13:51, 28 October 2021 (UTC)
Hello BennyOnTheLoose what do you think about switching to sfn? Lewolka ( talk) 14:14, 29 October 2021 (UTC)
I find the title of this section misleading as she did not train bodyguards but members of the WSPU's bodyguard unit. I'd like to change it to "Training the WSPU's bodyguard". In My Own Story Emmeline Pankhurst's Autobiography she writes: "The bodyguard and members of the audience vigorously repelled the attack, wielding clubs, batons, poles, planks, or anything they could seize, while the police laid about right and left with their batons" and "I had been surrounded by members of the bodyguard, who hurried me towards the stairs from the platform. The police, however, overtook us, and in spite of the resistance of the bodyguard, they seized me and dragged me down the narrow stair at the back of the hall." Lewolka ( talk) 12:31, 30 October 2021 (UTC)
I have quite expanded the Life section.... it may be worth breaking that content into:
this way it may be easier to work on specific sections but I leave it up to you BennyOnTheLoose, stepping back now! :) Lewolka ( talk) 10:40, 3 November 2021 (UTC)
Hello BennyOnTheLoose The only mention of her date of birth I could find so far is: "On her ninety-fourth birthday, a man named Godfrey Winn came to visit her." here and also: "It was June, 1965. to celebrate her birthday, he brought her a sugary lemon gâteau and his equally saccharine interview with her was printed in the popular magazine, Woman." (Godfrey 2012, p. 99) also: " it was not until June 1965, on Edith Garrud's 93rd birthday, that journalist Godfrey Winn, writing for Woman magazine, approached Edith for an interview " (Kelly, p. 18) "She regaled the journalist, Godfrey Wynn, who brought her a birthday cake" here (Photograph: in Woman, 19 June 1965;). So we only know the month, maybe the original article in Woman has the day if accessible in archives? Regards Lewolka ( talk) 14:06, 15 November 2021 (UTC)