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This source seems to be a bit "romantic" about the subject. For instance, the line where Detroit had one frame house and some log cabins with cedar roofs when he arrived. In fact Detroit had at that time a population of 1400 served by 3 churches - Catholic, Methodist and "General Protestant"; a fort Fort Shelby, a school with 200 students teaching primary and upper level - including instruction in Greek and Latin and, legally, instituted as the University of Michigan. It was the seat of territorial government and location of one of the main land offices. Streets were already laid out to Woodward's variation of L'Enfant D.C. street plan and Grand Circus Park and Campus Martius were already established. 17:37, Rmhermen ( talk) 8 November 2010 (UTC)
David Ward, E.B.'s cousin and an accomplished man in his own right, provides a detailed account of E.B. in his autobiography ( http://books.google.com/books?id=gE4vAAAAYAAJ&printsec=frontcover&source=gbs_ge_summary_r&cad=0#v=onepage&q=eber&f=false). It isn't pretty. 71.205.175.33 ( talk) 04:46, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | ||
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This is an interesting article. I like Detroit and I like steel! I am glad of you having written it, and enjoyed reading it.
There are a few things in here which get my noggin joggin' and I think some copyediting might be necessary. The sources seem to be mainly books, which I cannot easily check, but I will go over the online sources to the best of my ability. Here are some things I have to say:
He even was one of the promoters of the Soo Locks of which he was one of the first to use, as at first he hauled schooners overland around the Soo Rapids to sail Lake Superior.
He was one of four children. The eldest was Emily, who remained a spinster until her death, Sallie the second, Eber Brock the third, and Abbie the fourth.
His father with the family then changed his plans of moving to Kentucky and went to Ohio instead. Once in Ohio for only a short time his father decided to move to Detroit, which they reached by 1821 when Ward was nine to ten years old.
Detroit had been destroyed 16 years earlier and what Ward saw was a small town of 1,400 but the capital of the Michigan territory.
He noticed young Ward's high energy and enthusiasm for life
among the many steamers and sailing ships he built were the Arctic, Atlantic, B.F. Wade, Detroit, General Harrison, Huron, Montgomery, Ocean, Pacific, Planet, Samuel Ward, The Caspian, The Champion, and The Pearl.
in the 1869 purchased a tract of land which consisting of 70,000 acres in the Fourth Ward of Ludington on Lake Pere Marquette which was accessible by the Pere Marquette River.
thrown in" jail.
With its capabilities to create large amounts of steel for his automobile assembly lines Ford produced his carsseems awkward.
His first wife was Maryellbut then we see that
he married Mary Margaret McQueenand
he married Catherine Lyon. Who's Maryell?
his son Henry, insane from 15, was committed to the Michigan State Hospital
ran off with a Hungarian gypsy
Another thing that seems strange: I don't get why
File:Clara Ward, Post Card1.jpg had to be cropped so close to go in the article (and with a strange circular crop).
Anyway, I am glad to see an article about Michigan history, and I am glad to see an article about a Detroit-area steel mill. Good stuff!
jp×
g 06:23, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
This article is part of Wikipedia:Contributor copyright investigations/20210315 and the Good article (GA) drive to reassess and potentially delist over 200 GAs that might contain copyright and other problems. An AN discussion closed with consensus to delist this group of articles en masse, unless a reviewer opens an independent review and can vouch for/verify content of all sources. Please review Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/February 2023 for further information about the GA status of this article, the timeline and process for delisting, and suggestions for improvements. Questions or comments can be made at the project talk page. MediaWiki message delivery ( talk) 09:36, 9 February 2023 (UTC)
This article has been revised as part of a large-scale clean-up project of multiple article copyright infringement. (See the investigation subpage) Earlier text must not be restored, unless it can be verified to be free of infringement. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material; such additions must be deleted. Contributors may use sources as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences or phrases. Accordingly, the material may be rewritten, but only if it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 22:06, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
See also WP:DCGAR. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 22:06, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
Eber Brock Ward was one of the Engineering and technology good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. | |||||||||||||
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's
Main Page in the "
Did you know?" column on
November 8, 2010. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that
Eber Brock Ward built the first
Bessemer steel mill in the
United States? | |||||||||||||
Current status: Delisted good article |
This article is rated C-class on Wikipedia's
content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||||||||||||||||
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This source seems to be a bit "romantic" about the subject. For instance, the line where Detroit had one frame house and some log cabins with cedar roofs when he arrived. In fact Detroit had at that time a population of 1400 served by 3 churches - Catholic, Methodist and "General Protestant"; a fort Fort Shelby, a school with 200 students teaching primary and upper level - including instruction in Greek and Latin and, legally, instituted as the University of Michigan. It was the seat of territorial government and location of one of the main land offices. Streets were already laid out to Woodward's variation of L'Enfant D.C. street plan and Grand Circus Park and Campus Martius were already established. 17:37, Rmhermen ( talk) 8 November 2010 (UTC)
David Ward, E.B.'s cousin and an accomplished man in his own right, provides a detailed account of E.B. in his autobiography ( http://books.google.com/books?id=gE4vAAAAYAAJ&printsec=frontcover&source=gbs_ge_summary_r&cad=0#v=onepage&q=eber&f=false). It isn't pretty. 71.205.175.33 ( talk) 04:46, 28 December 2011 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. | ||
1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. | ||
2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. | ||
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). | ||
2c. it contains no original research. | ||
2d. it contains no copyright violations or plagiarism. | ||
3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. | ||
3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). | ||
4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. | ||
5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | ||
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. | ||
6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | ||
7. Overall assessment. |
This is an interesting article. I like Detroit and I like steel! I am glad of you having written it, and enjoyed reading it.
There are a few things in here which get my noggin joggin' and I think some copyediting might be necessary. The sources seem to be mainly books, which I cannot easily check, but I will go over the online sources to the best of my ability. Here are some things I have to say:
He even was one of the promoters of the Soo Locks of which he was one of the first to use, as at first he hauled schooners overland around the Soo Rapids to sail Lake Superior.
He was one of four children. The eldest was Emily, who remained a spinster until her death, Sallie the second, Eber Brock the third, and Abbie the fourth.
His father with the family then changed his plans of moving to Kentucky and went to Ohio instead. Once in Ohio for only a short time his father decided to move to Detroit, which they reached by 1821 when Ward was nine to ten years old.
Detroit had been destroyed 16 years earlier and what Ward saw was a small town of 1,400 but the capital of the Michigan territory.
He noticed young Ward's high energy and enthusiasm for life
among the many steamers and sailing ships he built were the Arctic, Atlantic, B.F. Wade, Detroit, General Harrison, Huron, Montgomery, Ocean, Pacific, Planet, Samuel Ward, The Caspian, The Champion, and The Pearl.
in the 1869 purchased a tract of land which consisting of 70,000 acres in the Fourth Ward of Ludington on Lake Pere Marquette which was accessible by the Pere Marquette River.
thrown in" jail.
With its capabilities to create large amounts of steel for his automobile assembly lines Ford produced his carsseems awkward.
His first wife was Maryellbut then we see that
he married Mary Margaret McQueenand
he married Catherine Lyon. Who's Maryell?
his son Henry, insane from 15, was committed to the Michigan State Hospital
ran off with a Hungarian gypsy
Another thing that seems strange: I don't get why
File:Clara Ward, Post Card1.jpg had to be cropped so close to go in the article (and with a strange circular crop).
Anyway, I am glad to see an article about Michigan history, and I am glad to see an article about a Detroit-area steel mill. Good stuff!
jp×
g 06:23, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
This article is part of Wikipedia:Contributor copyright investigations/20210315 and the Good article (GA) drive to reassess and potentially delist over 200 GAs that might contain copyright and other problems. An AN discussion closed with consensus to delist this group of articles en masse, unless a reviewer opens an independent review and can vouch for/verify content of all sources. Please review Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/February 2023 for further information about the GA status of this article, the timeline and process for delisting, and suggestions for improvements. Questions or comments can be made at the project talk page. MediaWiki message delivery ( talk) 09:36, 9 February 2023 (UTC)
This article has been revised as part of a large-scale clean-up project of multiple article copyright infringement. (See the investigation subpage) Earlier text must not be restored, unless it can be verified to be free of infringement. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted text or images borrowed from other web sites or printed material; such additions must be deleted. Contributors may use sources as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences or phrases. Accordingly, the material may be rewritten, but only if it does not infringe on the copyright of the original or plagiarize from that source. Please see our guideline on non-free text for how to properly implement limited quotations of copyrighted text. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 22:06, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
See also WP:DCGAR. SandyGeorgia ( Talk) 22:06, 28 February 2023 (UTC)