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Reviewer: Strafpeloton2 ( talk · contribs) 03:03, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
I have started the review with an incomplete readthrough. The article passes the quick fail criteria: 1) all references are reliable, 2) there is NPOV, 3) no cleanup banners or tags, 4) no edit wars, 5) not a current event that will change quickly. I also spotchecked 2, 6, 8, 10, 11, 12, 17, 20, 22, 24, 28, 29, 30, 32 and 36 and there appear to be no copyright violations. All references seemed accurate.
I had a few comments/questions on the first time through:
I will go through and read in more detail this weekend. Strafpeloton2 ( talk) 03:03, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
I think the article is pretty much meets all the GA criteria. There are a few minor things that would improve it:
There were a few cases where a comma should be removed or a subject inserted in the second half because it’s currently not a compound sentence:
I will put this on hold for now. It's only a whisker away for me with the unreferenced quote being the most important. Strafpeloton2 ( talk) 16:04, 15 October 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Strafpeloton2 ( talk · contribs) 03:03, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
I have started the review with an incomplete readthrough. The article passes the quick fail criteria: 1) all references are reliable, 2) there is NPOV, 3) no cleanup banners or tags, 4) no edit wars, 5) not a current event that will change quickly. I also spotchecked 2, 6, 8, 10, 11, 12, 17, 20, 22, 24, 28, 29, 30, 32 and 36 and there appear to be no copyright violations. All references seemed accurate.
I had a few comments/questions on the first time through:
I will go through and read in more detail this weekend. Strafpeloton2 ( talk) 03:03, 14 October 2011 (UTC)
I think the article is pretty much meets all the GA criteria. There are a few minor things that would improve it:
There were a few cases where a comma should be removed or a subject inserted in the second half because it’s currently not a compound sentence:
I will put this on hold for now. It's only a whisker away for me with the unreferenced quote being the most important. Strafpeloton2 ( talk) 16:04, 15 October 2011 (UTC)