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It would be better to mention the episodes in order. For example, the Season 4 section discussed "To the Death" before "Homefront" and "Paradise Lost". But to the Death was episode 23 while HF and PL were 11 and 12 respectively. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.198.53.164 ( talk) 07:14, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
In addition some episodes aren't mentioned. One example is Broken Link, from season 4.
Attempts at corrections have been reversed. But these corrections are needed.
Conflict infobox restored. This time it utilizes the FICTIONAL BATTLE infobox. In addition I have also added various information regarding the story arc and it storyline uses in Star Trek Enterprise, especially in the Xindi Crisis. I felt that the page concentrated too much on the critical review and hardly any at all on the actual story itself or its results, most of which can be laid out in an infobox. As it suggests the Fictional Battle Infobox is used for Out-of-Reality occurences and be used to seperate context from the real to the cannonical. Rhatsa26X ( talk) 16:31 27 June 2010 (CDT)
I have to say, the specific reasons this and many ST articles were being refused GA status was a: no reference to the television shows critical reception, b: total lack of sources, c: main text of article written entirely from an in-universe perspective and focusing entirely on narrative, and d: a section on results of the fictional war that involved fan speculation. I like this new Fictional War box, especially the info relating it to other story-arcs. It is a better fit than the original 'real war' box which quite rightly had to be removed until a better idea came along, but GA status will hang on the other changes previously mentioned. If we revert the tone of the main article to focus on story narrative, GA would be automatically denied again. Ethdhelwen ( talk) 17:15, 8 July 2010 (UTC)
Reviewer: Super Mario Man 20:40, 4 July 2010 (UTC)
This initial edit is just to open the review. I will submit comments in due course, after a thorough reading of the subject article. Super Mario Man 20:40, 4 July 2010 (UTC)
How can this article be biased when the subject is sy-fy. I am sorry to alienate all the Trekkers, but when the "truth" of the article doesnt exist due to being fiction, it is hard to be neutal. BTW, go Feds!. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.172.179.96 ( talk) 07:33, 7 February 2011 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs( talk) 15:57, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
Initial comments: Overall, a strong article, and I'm proud about the amount of effort that's gone into it. It also does a fairly good job of being accessible to non-Star Trek fans, which is very important for this kind of article. That said, it has some structural and stylistic issues that need to be addressed.
-- Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs( talk) 17:37, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
This makes no sense to me. Autonomous or no, Section 31 is part of the Federation. It shouldn't, IMHO, be listed as a separate combatant. Famartin ( talk) 02:26, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
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It would be better to mention the episodes in order. For example, the Season 4 section discussed "To the Death" before "Homefront" and "Paradise Lost". But to the Death was episode 23 while HF and PL were 11 and 12 respectively. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.198.53.164 ( talk) 07:14, 8 September 2011 (UTC)
In addition some episodes aren't mentioned. One example is Broken Link, from season 4.
Attempts at corrections have been reversed. But these corrections are needed.
Conflict infobox restored. This time it utilizes the FICTIONAL BATTLE infobox. In addition I have also added various information regarding the story arc and it storyline uses in Star Trek Enterprise, especially in the Xindi Crisis. I felt that the page concentrated too much on the critical review and hardly any at all on the actual story itself or its results, most of which can be laid out in an infobox. As it suggests the Fictional Battle Infobox is used for Out-of-Reality occurences and be used to seperate context from the real to the cannonical. Rhatsa26X ( talk) 16:31 27 June 2010 (CDT)
I have to say, the specific reasons this and many ST articles were being refused GA status was a: no reference to the television shows critical reception, b: total lack of sources, c: main text of article written entirely from an in-universe perspective and focusing entirely on narrative, and d: a section on results of the fictional war that involved fan speculation. I like this new Fictional War box, especially the info relating it to other story-arcs. It is a better fit than the original 'real war' box which quite rightly had to be removed until a better idea came along, but GA status will hang on the other changes previously mentioned. If we revert the tone of the main article to focus on story narrative, GA would be automatically denied again. Ethdhelwen ( talk) 17:15, 8 July 2010 (UTC)
Reviewer: Super Mario Man 20:40, 4 July 2010 (UTC)
This initial edit is just to open the review. I will submit comments in due course, after a thorough reading of the subject article. Super Mario Man 20:40, 4 July 2010 (UTC)
How can this article be biased when the subject is sy-fy. I am sorry to alienate all the Trekkers, but when the "truth" of the article doesnt exist due to being fiction, it is hard to be neutal. BTW, go Feds!. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.172.179.96 ( talk) 07:33, 7 February 2011 (UTC)
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Reviewer: Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs( talk) 15:57, 5 April 2011 (UTC)
Initial comments: Overall, a strong article, and I'm proud about the amount of effort that's gone into it. It also does a fairly good job of being accessible to non-Star Trek fans, which is very important for this kind of article. That said, it has some structural and stylistic issues that need to be addressed.
-- Der Wohltemperierte Fuchs( talk) 17:37, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
This makes no sense to me. Autonomous or no, Section 31 is part of the Federation. It shouldn't, IMHO, be listed as a separate combatant. Famartin ( talk) 02:26, 8 April 2011 (UTC)
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