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![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hello editors,
Per my original request on Talk:Insight Partners, I am employed by Insight Partners and have a COI regarding this draft for one of our executives. I am hoping to get assistance to address the concerns that this page currently reads like an advertisement. Any improvements that can be made by editors who have contributed to this and/or the Insight Partners article in the past would be much appreciated: Hatchens, FeldBum, Nomadicghumakkad, Jehochman, Scruss, Salsakesh, Metromemo.
I have some thoughts on edits that may accomplish this, but would very much appreciate validation and any other feedback from neutral editors before resubmitting:
Thanks again.
Sincerely,
MollyInsight ( talk) 20:55, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
Also want to check with other tagged other editors if they feel that the topic is surely notable or not. Nomadicghumakkad ( talk) 00:42, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
Hi everyone, as this is currently a draft, an edit request is not necessary. I am closing this request as answered so that it does not appear in the edit request queue. I suggest that editors continue this conversation and submitted to WP:AfC when it is ready. Thanks. Z1720 ( talk) 23:53, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
Hi everyone,
As noted previously, I am employed by Insight Partners and have a COI regarding this draft.
I have taken some time and outside input to revisit the article, and I am now asking for additional feedback and suggestions from editors who have contributed in the past before resubmitting: Nomadicghumakkad, FeldBum, Z1720, Mrmctorso, Hatchens, Eternal_Shadow.
The most significant edits compared to the previous version highlight Deven Parekh's philanthropic recognition, as recognized via his 2021 RFK Human Rights award (see: /info/en/?search=Robert_F._Kennedy_Human_Rights_Award#Ripple_of_Hope_Award) - and in particular the founding of the Parekh Center for Interdisciplinary Neurology at NYU Langone ( https://med.nyu.edu/centers-programs/parekh-interdisciplinary-neurology/). Sources that discuss this include https://www.crainsnewyork.com/technology/insight-partners-investor-deven-parekh-talks-new-yorks-growing-tech-scene.
I welcome any additional feedback as I continue to aim to make this page Wikipedia-ready.
Thanks very much, MollyInsight ( talk) 19:50, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
Thanks to all the editors who have helped me improve this page to the point of publication ( FeldBum, Nomadicghumakkad, Mrmctorso, Missvain). I understand that our improved references were able to help allay the previous editorial concerns about Deven Parekh's notability.
Since we were able to meet that bar to get this page published, is it now possible to also remove the notability tag at the top of the page? This dates back to June 2021, before the article references were improved to address these concerns. I am hoping to achieve consensus that this tag is no longer necessary.
Much appreciated, MollyInsight ( talk) 16:59, 10 August 2022 (UTC)
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![]() | This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hello editors,
Per my original request on Talk:Insight Partners, I am employed by Insight Partners and have a COI regarding this draft for one of our executives. I am hoping to get assistance to address the concerns that this page currently reads like an advertisement. Any improvements that can be made by editors who have contributed to this and/or the Insight Partners article in the past would be much appreciated: Hatchens, FeldBum, Nomadicghumakkad, Jehochman, Scruss, Salsakesh, Metromemo.
I have some thoughts on edits that may accomplish this, but would very much appreciate validation and any other feedback from neutral editors before resubmitting:
Thanks again.
Sincerely,
MollyInsight ( talk) 20:55, 1 September 2021 (UTC)
Also want to check with other tagged other editors if they feel that the topic is surely notable or not. Nomadicghumakkad ( talk) 00:42, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
Hi everyone, as this is currently a draft, an edit request is not necessary. I am closing this request as answered so that it does not appear in the edit request queue. I suggest that editors continue this conversation and submitted to WP:AfC when it is ready. Thanks. Z1720 ( talk) 23:53, 5 September 2021 (UTC)
Hi everyone,
As noted previously, I am employed by Insight Partners and have a COI regarding this draft.
I have taken some time and outside input to revisit the article, and I am now asking for additional feedback and suggestions from editors who have contributed in the past before resubmitting: Nomadicghumakkad, FeldBum, Z1720, Mrmctorso, Hatchens, Eternal_Shadow.
The most significant edits compared to the previous version highlight Deven Parekh's philanthropic recognition, as recognized via his 2021 RFK Human Rights award (see: /info/en/?search=Robert_F._Kennedy_Human_Rights_Award#Ripple_of_Hope_Award) - and in particular the founding of the Parekh Center for Interdisciplinary Neurology at NYU Langone ( https://med.nyu.edu/centers-programs/parekh-interdisciplinary-neurology/). Sources that discuss this include https://www.crainsnewyork.com/technology/insight-partners-investor-deven-parekh-talks-new-yorks-growing-tech-scene.
I welcome any additional feedback as I continue to aim to make this page Wikipedia-ready.
Thanks very much, MollyInsight ( talk) 19:50, 1 June 2022 (UTC)
Thanks to all the editors who have helped me improve this page to the point of publication ( FeldBum, Nomadicghumakkad, Mrmctorso, Missvain). I understand that our improved references were able to help allay the previous editorial concerns about Deven Parekh's notability.
Since we were able to meet that bar to get this page published, is it now possible to also remove the notability tag at the top of the page? This dates back to June 2021, before the article references were improved to address these concerns. I am hoping to achieve consensus that this tag is no longer necessary.
Much appreciated, MollyInsight ( talk) 16:59, 10 August 2022 (UTC)