Well I do wish that who ever put the article into Clean Up had left some clues around why they were affronted, so I could work to resolve them... Adrius42 21:49, 15 August 2005 (UTC)
My apologies for not giving information about the cleanup. I added the tag because I found the article really hard to understand, especially when it came to working out the context of the article (and I'm a computer professional). I managed to work out that the context was internet security, but it took me quite a while and at least one other article to do that. It's a good thing to remember that a reader may be coming to an article simply to look up a word with no idea of what the general subject is.
You might also like to think about that last paragraph some more. It doesn't read much like an encyclopedia.
Remember please don't take criticism of articles personally. We're all working in this together to improve the quality of articles.
Also, you can sign your name and date after any talk page entries by putting four tildes in a row, like this ~~~~. DJ Clayworth 19:04, 3 August 2005 (UTC)
Thanks as a newbie I am learning on the run, with that insight I reread and fully agree I need to frame moe effectively.. Adrius42 21:49, 15 August 2005 (UTC)
Well I do wish that who ever put the article into Clean Up had left some clues around why they were affronted, so I could work to resolve them... Adrius42 21:49, 15 August 2005 (UTC)
My apologies for not giving information about the cleanup. I added the tag because I found the article really hard to understand, especially when it came to working out the context of the article (and I'm a computer professional). I managed to work out that the context was internet security, but it took me quite a while and at least one other article to do that. It's a good thing to remember that a reader may be coming to an article simply to look up a word with no idea of what the general subject is.
You might also like to think about that last paragraph some more. It doesn't read much like an encyclopedia.
Remember please don't take criticism of articles personally. We're all working in this together to improve the quality of articles.
Also, you can sign your name and date after any talk page entries by putting four tildes in a row, like this ~~~~. DJ Clayworth 19:04, 3 August 2005 (UTC)
Thanks as a newbie I am learning on the run, with that insight I reread and fully agree I need to frame moe effectively.. Adrius42 21:49, 15 August 2005 (UTC)