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NATALIA OR NATASHA? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Chueyjoo ( talk • contribs) 19:13, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
Remember that psycho patient that almost killed Dr. Sciarello in Issue 1? Well, according to the print version of Issue 3, that guy's name was Harris, and he plays a very large role in the actual game. He's mentioned in several logs throughout Dead Space, although the best example has to be the following log from Chapter 2 [1].
Interesting Results
MEDICAL LOG
DR. WARWICK, B. (CHIEF PSYCH OFFICER)
REPORT OF PSYCHIATRIC OBSERVATION
PATIENT: HARRIS, B. (Employee #PM-19026-EH)
Harris is asleep, after another strong sedative. He seems literally unable to sleep without chemical aid. Most people succumb to exhaustion after 50+ hours of waking, regardless of any desire to stay awake. Not Harris. His explanation of events on the colony is also odd, and points to the same paranoia we've seen elsewhere planetside. His guilt is not in doubt--two planetside security officers were present when he took Dr. Sciarello hostage and murdered Nurse Evans--and he doesn't deny his actions. But he insists there was no crime, nor does he feel guilt.
This is classic sociopathic behavior, but Harris exhibits no other symptoms. He is affable and friendly, able to empathize and offer original opinions. When questioned about the murder, however, he becomes withdrawn and intransigent, displaying schizophrenic behavior. He also undergoes intermittent hallucinatory periods, again similar to those experienced by other colonists.
Harris claims he threatened the Doctor because he "had to stop the dreams and the faces," and that he'll kill again to "Make it whole again". What that means, I haven't determined yet. A most intriguing case.
I probably went overboard with this explanation. I just thought it was cool how this tidbit proves the relevance and importance of the Dead Space comics.
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Overall, this article looks to be in pretty good shape. Just a few things need to be addressed. Some of it's probably nitpicky.
the game's development team acted as overall controller→ maybe add "the" before overall.
A graphic novel compilation of all six issues ... The graphic novel included exclusive art by Templesmith ... The graphic novel version was re-released→ Some slight rewording is needed to avoid repetition. There are three straight sentences starting almost the same way.
safeguard the Marker until their ship the Ishimura arrives.→ Add a comma after ship
Between its discovery and the Ishimura{{'}}s→ and the Ishimura{{'s}}
after the Marker video leak→ is it supposed to be leaks? Just ignore if it's already correct
Marker into the colony preparatory to sending both it and→ remove "to" and replace it with a comma after preparatory
The Ishimura captain Benjamin Mathius refuses→ The Ishimura's captain, Benjamin Mathius refuses
The Necromorphs attack the colony, killing many including Carthusia and Sciarello and converting the suicides.→ Need an extra comma or two
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NATALIA OR NATASHA? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Chueyjoo ( talk • contribs) 19:13, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
Remember that psycho patient that almost killed Dr. Sciarello in Issue 1? Well, according to the print version of Issue 3, that guy's name was Harris, and he plays a very large role in the actual game. He's mentioned in several logs throughout Dead Space, although the best example has to be the following log from Chapter 2 [1].
Interesting Results
MEDICAL LOG
DR. WARWICK, B. (CHIEF PSYCH OFFICER)
REPORT OF PSYCHIATRIC OBSERVATION
PATIENT: HARRIS, B. (Employee #PM-19026-EH)
Harris is asleep, after another strong sedative. He seems literally unable to sleep without chemical aid. Most people succumb to exhaustion after 50+ hours of waking, regardless of any desire to stay awake. Not Harris. His explanation of events on the colony is also odd, and points to the same paranoia we've seen elsewhere planetside. His guilt is not in doubt--two planetside security officers were present when he took Dr. Sciarello hostage and murdered Nurse Evans--and he doesn't deny his actions. But he insists there was no crime, nor does he feel guilt.
This is classic sociopathic behavior, but Harris exhibits no other symptoms. He is affable and friendly, able to empathize and offer original opinions. When questioned about the murder, however, he becomes withdrawn and intransigent, displaying schizophrenic behavior. He also undergoes intermittent hallucinatory periods, again similar to those experienced by other colonists.
Harris claims he threatened the Doctor because he "had to stop the dreams and the faces," and that he'll kill again to "Make it whole again". What that means, I haven't determined yet. A most intriguing case.
I probably went overboard with this explanation. I just thought it was cool how this tidbit proves the relevance and importance of the Dead Space comics.
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Reviewer: ZooBlazer ( talk · contribs) 07:16, 24 March 2023 (UTC)
Hey, I'd be happy to take this review. I've already gone through it some, so I should have more to say pretty quickly.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
Overall, this article looks to be in pretty good shape. Just a few things need to be addressed. Some of it's probably nitpicky.
the game's development team acted as overall controller→ maybe add "the" before overall.
A graphic novel compilation of all six issues ... The graphic novel included exclusive art by Templesmith ... The graphic novel version was re-released→ Some slight rewording is needed to avoid repetition. There are three straight sentences starting almost the same way.
safeguard the Marker until their ship the Ishimura arrives.→ Add a comma after ship
Between its discovery and the Ishimura{{'}}s→ and the Ishimura{{'s}}
after the Marker video leak→ is it supposed to be leaks? Just ignore if it's already correct
Marker into the colony preparatory to sending both it and→ remove "to" and replace it with a comma after preparatory
The Ishimura captain Benjamin Mathius refuses→ The Ishimura's captain, Benjamin Mathius refuses
The Necromorphs attack the colony, killing many including Carthusia and Sciarello and converting the suicides.→ Need an extra comma or two
Good job overall on this. I think once you address the minor issues above, then the article should be good to go. -- Zoo ( talk) 07:39, 24 March 2023 (UTC)