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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 January 2020 and 25 April 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Hrasmussen16.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 19:06, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
Is there eople need to daydream..." Article text should not be written with informal "you". -- Mgreenbe 09:02, 8 February 2006 (UTC)
This article needs a lot of cleaning up. Very badly written and sourced in parts — Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.129.163.253 ( talk) 04:14, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
The human activity strikes me as a far more definite subject matter than the mysterious mental content that transpires, and the present page title seems inconsistent with my instincts regarding similar topics (edit: e.g. mind-wandering). — MaxEnt 03:57, 20 July 2015 (UTC)
Society and the negative vs. positive aspects: First sentence of third paragraph needs fixing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.180.1.46 ( talk) 01:12, 18 June 2019 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 17 January 2024 and 7 May 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Editingenchilada ( article contribs).
— Assignment last updated by Eaturvegeez ( talk) 19:00, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
When looking at this page I found many areas that I think could benefit from strong edits. While I may not be a professional on daydreaming, as a technical editor I find that there can be a lot of beneficial improvements to this article. It has a strong base at this point, but there is always room for improvement! Over the course of the next few weeks, I plan on making the following bold edits:
- Restructuring the word choices used in this article in order to make sure that it follows Wikipedia's tone guide that allows the article to be written as a encyclopedic page rather than an overly scientific document which it currently is leaning towards
- Formatting subheadings to break up the page more under the major headings to increase readability throughout.
These are just the starting edits that I have noticed, but as I dive into this article I will update this talk page and hopefully help improve the overall quality of this page! Editingenchilada ( talk) 20:23, 20 February 2024 (UTC)
This article is rated Start-class on Wikipedia's
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 January 2020 and 25 April 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Hrasmussen16.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 19:06, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
Is there eople need to daydream..." Article text should not be written with informal "you". -- Mgreenbe 09:02, 8 February 2006 (UTC)
This article needs a lot of cleaning up. Very badly written and sourced in parts — Preceding unsigned comment added by 66.129.163.253 ( talk) 04:14, 9 May 2012 (UTC)
The human activity strikes me as a far more definite subject matter than the mysterious mental content that transpires, and the present page title seems inconsistent with my instincts regarding similar topics (edit: e.g. mind-wandering). — MaxEnt 03:57, 20 July 2015 (UTC)
Society and the negative vs. positive aspects: First sentence of third paragraph needs fixing. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.180.1.46 ( talk) 01:12, 18 June 2019 (UTC)
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 17 January 2024 and 7 May 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Editingenchilada ( article contribs).
— Assignment last updated by Eaturvegeez ( talk) 19:00, 10 February 2024 (UTC)
When looking at this page I found many areas that I think could benefit from strong edits. While I may not be a professional on daydreaming, as a technical editor I find that there can be a lot of beneficial improvements to this article. It has a strong base at this point, but there is always room for improvement! Over the course of the next few weeks, I plan on making the following bold edits:
- Restructuring the word choices used in this article in order to make sure that it follows Wikipedia's tone guide that allows the article to be written as a encyclopedic page rather than an overly scientific document which it currently is leaning towards
- Formatting subheadings to break up the page more under the major headings to increase readability throughout.
These are just the starting edits that I have noticed, but as I dive into this article I will update this talk page and hopefully help improve the overall quality of this page! Editingenchilada ( talk) 20:23, 20 February 2024 (UTC)