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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 ( talk · contribs) 17:52, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
I'll review this one.
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He was able to increase his size to 6 ft 5 in, 264 lb, the way this is written, it makes it seem like he made himself grow longer. Maybe rerword to say he increase his weight to 264 lbs while also growing 2 inches in height?
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:37, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
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I'll review this one.
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He was able to increase his size to 6 ft 5 in, 264 lb, the way this is written, it makes it seem like he made himself grow longer. Maybe rerword to say he increase his weight to 264 lbs while also growing 2 inches in height?
Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:37, 25 August 2023 (UTC)