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jxjxjcjcjjcjcs, HJDXC|talk]]) 00:01, jxjfjcjjvjfkc xjcjcjcjjvjvj jjcjcjcjvjjv
Hi
Can content be migrated from the EDS article that had a fairly informative History and Services section? The services section would need minor updates
, and/or maintaining of applications software for clients. Business process outsourcing includes
The state and local health and human services business was sold to Veritas Capital and was renamed to Gainwell Technologies [1] [2] Dxc technology plans on spinning off 5 its companies and or divisions. So far DXC Technology has sold 2 of the 3 divisions to Veritas Capital. The first on being Vencore, KeyPoint, and DXC’s federal business, were merged together to create the DXC spin-off Perspecta. The next one was the Gainwell Technologies composing of the state and local health and human services business.
(my 2cents feel free to add any or all the above to the article)
Msg4real (
talk) 05:25, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
References
I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of DXC Technology's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.
Reference named "pnl":
I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT ⚡ 19:28, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
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Hello, I’m an employee at DXC, the subject of this article. Could an independent reviewer please review the request below and update the article?
“From the 2022/23 premier league season DXC will become the new sleeve sponsor for Manchester United. [1]”
Explanation: Source is a fan site and not reliable. This is also a prediction of future events that might not come to pass and violates WP:Crystal Ball.
Thanks. Chiminpin12 ( talk) 15:46, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hello, I’m an employee at DXC, the subject of this article. I am refraining from doing direct edits myself because of the conflict of interest policy. Another DXC employee,
Chiminpin12, had been making requests but she no longer works at this company. @
Galobtter: since you most recently did a request edit review, I though I would alert you.
1. Please update the info box:
| revenue = US$17.7 billion ( fiscal year 2021) [1]
| operating_income = US$944 million ( fiscal year 2021) [2]
| net_income = US$146 million (
fiscal year 2021)
[2]
| assets = US$22 billion ( fiscal year 2021) [2]
| equity = US$4.97 billion ( fiscal year 2021) [2]
| num_employees = 134,000 (May 2021) [3]
Rationale: Updates financials and number of employees; includes reliable sources.
2. In the History section, please remove the subsection “Creation.”
Rationale: Creation subsection is redundant and doesn’t follow Wikipedia best practices. The content under the subsection is also not all about “Creation.”
3. In the History section - please remove the last sentence in the first paragraph for redundancy:
By June 2021, the employee count of DXC has come down to 134,000. [4]
Rationale: Sentence is out of chronological order, and is repeated at the end of the History section.
4. Please update the first paragraph in the History section
From:
DXC Technology was founded on April 3, 2017 when the Hewlett Packard Enterprise Company (HPE) spun off its Enterprise Services business and merged it with Computer Sciences Corporation (CSC). [5] At the time of its creation, DXC Technology had revenues of $25 billion, employed 170,000 people and operated in 70 countries. [6]
To:
DXC Technology was founded on April 3, 2017 when Hewlett Packard Enterprise’ Enterprise Services business unit merged with the Computer Sciences Corporation. [7] The company provided business-to-business IT services, including supporting the U.S. and other governments in maintaining and operating their computer systems. [7] It began trading on the New York Stock Exchange under the symbol DXC. [8] At the time of its creation, DXC Technology had revenues of $25 billion and 6,000 public and private sector clients. [9]
Rationale: Eliminates superfluous language. Adds Washington Post as source citing April 3rd as the founding date. Adds information about services the company provides. Rewrites sentence about revenue upon foundation for clarity, and eliminates repetitive information (which appears at the end of the article). Relocates the information about 170,000 employees and 70 countries to the end of the article to improve structure. Adds reliable sources.
5. In the History section, please remove the second paragraph:
The spinoff from Hewlett Packard Enterprise did not include two parts of the Enterprise Services segment: the Mphasis Limited reporting unit and the Communications and Media Solutions product group. [5]
Rationale: Sentence is extraneous.
6. In the History section, please replace the fifth paragraph
From:
“In 2019 Mike Salvino was named president and CEO of DXC Technology. He previously served as group chief executive for Accenture Operations. [10]”
To:
Mike Salvino, the former Accenture chief group executive, was named president and CEO of DXC Technology in 2019. [11]
Rationale: Slight rewrite for concision, and replaces a press release with a reliable source.
7. Please replace the last sentence of the History section
From:
By June 2021, DXC had 98,000 employees of which 47,000 employees in countries such as India, the Philippines, Eastern Europe, and Vietnam. [12]
To:
As of November 2021, DXC employed 134,000 in over 70 countries, including the United States, India, the Philippines, Central Europe and Vietnam. [3] [13]
Rationale: Corrects number of DXC employees with a much more reliable source; includes number of countries and updates with additional reliable sourcing.
8. In the Acquisitions subsection, please replace the first paragraph
From:
In 2017, the company completed its first acquisition, buying Tribridge, a provider of Microsoft Dynamics 365 software. [14]
To:
In July 2017, DXC purchased enterprise software company Tribridge and its affiliate company Concerto Cloud Services for $152 million.
[15]
[16]
Rationale: Adds month of acquisition and price. Corrects that the acquisition included Tribridge’s affiliated company, Concerto Cloud Services. Clarifies that Tribridge is an enterprise software company. Removes Microsoft 365 reference: while Tribridge was a provider of Microsoft Dynamics 365 software, their specialty was inclusive of cloud computing and enterprise software for other clients (not just Microsoft). Updates and adds reliable sourcing for all.
9. Please replace the second sentence in sixth paragraph (only one word is changing):
From:
“Atos has proposed for US$10 billion including debt for acquisition. [17] [18]”
To::
Atos had proposed for US$10 billion including debt for acquisition. [19] [20]
Rationale: Rewrites to correct tense - from “has” to “had” since this is the past.
Epictetusfollower ( talk) 17:31, 12 July 2022 (UTC) Epictetusfollower ( talk) 17:31, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
Can you please correct the date in the infobox to state (fiscal year 2021) or (FY 2021)?
There’s also a mistake with the Operating Income number. According to the most recent financial statement you used from the company here [2] (and double-checked against Nasdaq [3] the operating income should be this:
| operating_income = US$139 million ( FY 2021) [2]
Thanks for being an editor doing Request Edit reviews.
Epictetusfollower (
talk) 20:55, 22 July 2022 (UTC)
| key_people =
Mike Salvino
Chairlzn, President and CEO)
[21]
His appointment as Chairman of this Fortune 500 company was announced in May (source: [22]) Chairman of the Board is a distinct job from CEO. As references, I looked at a few other company pages like Cigna, The Hershey Company, State Farm and Lockheed Martin, all of which list these titles for the leader.
If you have a chance, I’d like to request the same change at the page Mike Salvino for the “Occupation” line.
Thanks. Epictetusfollower ( talk) 16:26, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
References
if it's not what does the symbol stand for Severus11 ( talk) 05:15, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
I proposed the following two items in the Request Edit above and User:Ptrnext, who has already reviewed eight other requests, asked for feedback on these.. “#4 and #5 are not yet done. Not sure if #5 is really extraneous. Someone should be able to review those two.” See COI disclosure above.
So I am opening a discussion on these two items. I’m pinging every editor who has participated in a discussion on this talk page or edited the page in 2022 (skipping IP addresses) . @ MeekMark:@ Altamel:@ Galobtter:@ Sofaclass:@ BilCat:@ BlazingContributor:@ W Nowicki:@ Firefly:@ Axe1982:@ HearUnitedSing:.
From:
DXC Technology was founded on April 3, 2017 when the Hewlett Packard Enterprise Company (HPE) spun off its Enterprise Services business and merged it with Computer Sciences Corporation (CSC). [1] At the time of its creation, DXC Technology had revenues of $25 billion, employed 170,000 people and operated in 70 countries. [2]
To:
DXC Technology was founded on April 3, 2017 when Hewlett Packard Enterprise’ Enterprise Services business unit merged with the Computer Sciences Corporation. [3] The company provided business-to-business IT services, including supporting the U.S. and other governments in maintaining and operating their computer systems. [3] It began trading on the New York Stock Exchange under the symbol DXC. [4] At the time of its creation, DXC Technology had revenues of $25 billion and 6,000 public and private sector clients. [5]
Rationale: Eliminates superfluous language. Adds Washington Post as source citing April 3rd as the founding date. Adds information about services the company provides. Rewrites sentence about revenue upon foundation for clarity, and eliminates repetitive information (which appears at the end of the article). Relocates the information about 170,000 employees and 70 countries to the end of the article to improve structure. Adds reliable sources.
The spinoff from Hewlett Packard Enterprise did not include two parts of the Enterprise Services segment: the Mphasis Limited reporting unit and the Communications and Media Solutions product group. [1]
Rationale: Sentence is extraneous.
Thank you. Epictetusfollower ( talk) 16:11, 30 September 2022 (UTC) Epictetusfollower ( talk) 16:11, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
References
Hello, I’m an employee at DXC, the subject of this article. I am refraining from doing direct edits myself because of the conflict of interest policy. Could an independent reviewer please review this proposal to update and improve the article? On January 15th the following was added to our key people section: S Nikhil Kumar (Founder)
Rationale: This individual was not a founder of the company. You’ll notice that no solid evidence was provided for the edit. Can someone please remove this spammy and false entry? @ ChaosTheo @ Sanghamitrap @ Ptrnext Epictetusfollower ( talk) 22:20, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
The opening sentence in the lead currently reads "DXC Technology Company is a pan American multinational information technology (IT) services and consulting company headquartered in Ashburn, Virginia."
What does "pan American" mean here? Should it just read "... is an American multi national ..."? Masato.harada ( talk) 10:19, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
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jxjxjcjcjjcjcs, HJDXC|talk]]) 00:01, jxjfjcjjvjfkc xjcjcjcjjvjvj jjcjcjcjvjjv
Hi
Can content be migrated from the EDS article that had a fairly informative History and Services section? The services section would need minor updates
, and/or maintaining of applications software for clients. Business process outsourcing includes
The state and local health and human services business was sold to Veritas Capital and was renamed to Gainwell Technologies [1] [2] Dxc technology plans on spinning off 5 its companies and or divisions. So far DXC Technology has sold 2 of the 3 divisions to Veritas Capital. The first on being Vencore, KeyPoint, and DXC’s federal business, were merged together to create the DXC spin-off Perspecta. The next one was the Gainwell Technologies composing of the state and local health and human services business.
(my 2cents feel free to add any or all the above to the article)
Msg4real (
talk) 05:25, 30 January 2021 (UTC)
References
I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of DXC Technology's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.
Reference named "pnl":
I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT ⚡ 19:28, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hello, I’m an employee at DXC, the subject of this article. Could an independent reviewer please review the request below and update the article?
“From the 2022/23 premier league season DXC will become the new sleeve sponsor for Manchester United. [1]”
Explanation: Source is a fan site and not reliable. This is also a prediction of future events that might not come to pass and violates WP:Crystal Ball.
Thanks. Chiminpin12 ( talk) 15:46, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
Hello, I’m an employee at DXC, the subject of this article. I am refraining from doing direct edits myself because of the conflict of interest policy. Another DXC employee,
Chiminpin12, had been making requests but she no longer works at this company. @
Galobtter: since you most recently did a request edit review, I though I would alert you.
1. Please update the info box:
| revenue = US$17.7 billion ( fiscal year 2021) [1]
| operating_income = US$944 million ( fiscal year 2021) [2]
| net_income = US$146 million (
fiscal year 2021)
[2]
| assets = US$22 billion ( fiscal year 2021) [2]
| equity = US$4.97 billion ( fiscal year 2021) [2]
| num_employees = 134,000 (May 2021) [3]
Rationale: Updates financials and number of employees; includes reliable sources.
2. In the History section, please remove the subsection “Creation.”
Rationale: Creation subsection is redundant and doesn’t follow Wikipedia best practices. The content under the subsection is also not all about “Creation.”
3. In the History section - please remove the last sentence in the first paragraph for redundancy:
By June 2021, the employee count of DXC has come down to 134,000. [4]
Rationale: Sentence is out of chronological order, and is repeated at the end of the History section.
4. Please update the first paragraph in the History section
From:
DXC Technology was founded on April 3, 2017 when the Hewlett Packard Enterprise Company (HPE) spun off its Enterprise Services business and merged it with Computer Sciences Corporation (CSC). [5] At the time of its creation, DXC Technology had revenues of $25 billion, employed 170,000 people and operated in 70 countries. [6]
To:
DXC Technology was founded on April 3, 2017 when Hewlett Packard Enterprise’ Enterprise Services business unit merged with the Computer Sciences Corporation. [7] The company provided business-to-business IT services, including supporting the U.S. and other governments in maintaining and operating their computer systems. [7] It began trading on the New York Stock Exchange under the symbol DXC. [8] At the time of its creation, DXC Technology had revenues of $25 billion and 6,000 public and private sector clients. [9]
Rationale: Eliminates superfluous language. Adds Washington Post as source citing April 3rd as the founding date. Adds information about services the company provides. Rewrites sentence about revenue upon foundation for clarity, and eliminates repetitive information (which appears at the end of the article). Relocates the information about 170,000 employees and 70 countries to the end of the article to improve structure. Adds reliable sources.
5. In the History section, please remove the second paragraph:
The spinoff from Hewlett Packard Enterprise did not include two parts of the Enterprise Services segment: the Mphasis Limited reporting unit and the Communications and Media Solutions product group. [5]
Rationale: Sentence is extraneous.
6. In the History section, please replace the fifth paragraph
From:
“In 2019 Mike Salvino was named president and CEO of DXC Technology. He previously served as group chief executive for Accenture Operations. [10]”
To:
Mike Salvino, the former Accenture chief group executive, was named president and CEO of DXC Technology in 2019. [11]
Rationale: Slight rewrite for concision, and replaces a press release with a reliable source.
7. Please replace the last sentence of the History section
From:
By June 2021, DXC had 98,000 employees of which 47,000 employees in countries such as India, the Philippines, Eastern Europe, and Vietnam. [12]
To:
As of November 2021, DXC employed 134,000 in over 70 countries, including the United States, India, the Philippines, Central Europe and Vietnam. [3] [13]
Rationale: Corrects number of DXC employees with a much more reliable source; includes number of countries and updates with additional reliable sourcing.
8. In the Acquisitions subsection, please replace the first paragraph
From:
In 2017, the company completed its first acquisition, buying Tribridge, a provider of Microsoft Dynamics 365 software. [14]
To:
In July 2017, DXC purchased enterprise software company Tribridge and its affiliate company Concerto Cloud Services for $152 million.
[15]
[16]
Rationale: Adds month of acquisition and price. Corrects that the acquisition included Tribridge’s affiliated company, Concerto Cloud Services. Clarifies that Tribridge is an enterprise software company. Removes Microsoft 365 reference: while Tribridge was a provider of Microsoft Dynamics 365 software, their specialty was inclusive of cloud computing and enterprise software for other clients (not just Microsoft). Updates and adds reliable sourcing for all.
9. Please replace the second sentence in sixth paragraph (only one word is changing):
From:
“Atos has proposed for US$10 billion including debt for acquisition. [17] [18]”
To::
Atos had proposed for US$10 billion including debt for acquisition. [19] [20]
Rationale: Rewrites to correct tense - from “has” to “had” since this is the past.
Epictetusfollower ( talk) 17:31, 12 July 2022 (UTC) Epictetusfollower ( talk) 17:31, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
Can you please correct the date in the infobox to state (fiscal year 2021) or (FY 2021)?
There’s also a mistake with the Operating Income number. According to the most recent financial statement you used from the company here [2] (and double-checked against Nasdaq [3] the operating income should be this:
| operating_income = US$139 million ( FY 2021) [2]
Thanks for being an editor doing Request Edit reviews.
Epictetusfollower (
talk) 20:55, 22 July 2022 (UTC)
| key_people =
Mike Salvino
Chairlzn, President and CEO)
[21]
His appointment as Chairman of this Fortune 500 company was announced in May (source: [22]) Chairman of the Board is a distinct job from CEO. As references, I looked at a few other company pages like Cigna, The Hershey Company, State Farm and Lockheed Martin, all of which list these titles for the leader.
If you have a chance, I’d like to request the same change at the page Mike Salvino for the “Occupation” line.
Thanks. Epictetusfollower ( talk) 16:26, 4 August 2022 (UTC)
References
if it's not what does the symbol stand for Severus11 ( talk) 05:15, 13 August 2022 (UTC)
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
I proposed the following two items in the Request Edit above and User:Ptrnext, who has already reviewed eight other requests, asked for feedback on these.. “#4 and #5 are not yet done. Not sure if #5 is really extraneous. Someone should be able to review those two.” See COI disclosure above.
So I am opening a discussion on these two items. I’m pinging every editor who has participated in a discussion on this talk page or edited the page in 2022 (skipping IP addresses) . @ MeekMark:@ Altamel:@ Galobtter:@ Sofaclass:@ BilCat:@ BlazingContributor:@ W Nowicki:@ Firefly:@ Axe1982:@ HearUnitedSing:.
From:
DXC Technology was founded on April 3, 2017 when the Hewlett Packard Enterprise Company (HPE) spun off its Enterprise Services business and merged it with Computer Sciences Corporation (CSC). [1] At the time of its creation, DXC Technology had revenues of $25 billion, employed 170,000 people and operated in 70 countries. [2]
To:
DXC Technology was founded on April 3, 2017 when Hewlett Packard Enterprise’ Enterprise Services business unit merged with the Computer Sciences Corporation. [3] The company provided business-to-business IT services, including supporting the U.S. and other governments in maintaining and operating their computer systems. [3] It began trading on the New York Stock Exchange under the symbol DXC. [4] At the time of its creation, DXC Technology had revenues of $25 billion and 6,000 public and private sector clients. [5]
Rationale: Eliminates superfluous language. Adds Washington Post as source citing April 3rd as the founding date. Adds information about services the company provides. Rewrites sentence about revenue upon foundation for clarity, and eliminates repetitive information (which appears at the end of the article). Relocates the information about 170,000 employees and 70 countries to the end of the article to improve structure. Adds reliable sources.
The spinoff from Hewlett Packard Enterprise did not include two parts of the Enterprise Services segment: the Mphasis Limited reporting unit and the Communications and Media Solutions product group. [1]
Rationale: Sentence is extraneous.
Thank you. Epictetusfollower ( talk) 16:11, 30 September 2022 (UTC) Epictetusfollower ( talk) 16:11, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
References
Hello, I’m an employee at DXC, the subject of this article. I am refraining from doing direct edits myself because of the conflict of interest policy. Could an independent reviewer please review this proposal to update and improve the article? On January 15th the following was added to our key people section: S Nikhil Kumar (Founder)
Rationale: This individual was not a founder of the company. You’ll notice that no solid evidence was provided for the edit. Can someone please remove this spammy and false entry? @ ChaosTheo @ Sanghamitrap @ Ptrnext Epictetusfollower ( talk) 22:20, 1 February 2023 (UTC)
The opening sentence in the lead currently reads "DXC Technology Company is a pan American multinational information technology (IT) services and consulting company headquartered in Ashburn, Virginia."
What does "pan American" mean here? Should it just read "... is an American multi national ..."? Masato.harada ( talk) 10:19, 18 May 2024 (UTC)