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"the group taunts the listener into its" → "4Minute taunts the listener into the song's"
Done All
Reception
Critical reception
"received generally positive reviews" → "was met with generally positive reviews"
All of the rankings on lists should be in the same area of critical reception; it is awkward having most at the end and some near the start, they should all be around the latter
"Dorof further wrote that" → "Jakob Dorof wrote that" since the order should be switched for lists
Idolator should be italicised
"opined the group had" → "opined that 4Minute had"
"aggressive" and felt" → "aggressive," and felt"
""outstanding" which he" → ""outstanding," which he"
"ranked it the best song of 4Minutes' career," → "named the track the best song of their career,"
"and Idolator listed" → "and Idolator both listed"
Done All
Awards
You should create this sub-section for the table and its above text, though fixes are needed; see your own article "
Any Song" for a proper example
Done
Chart performance
Retitle to Commercial performance
"It was the sixth" → ""Crazy" was the sixth"
"in February 2015 of the" → "in February 2015 on the"
"at number two on US" → "at number two on the US"
Done All
Promotion and music video
Retitle to Music video and promotion, since promotion comes after the music video here
"to the release of the single," → "to the release of "Crazy","
"serving as a" → "which served as a"
"accompanying
music video for was uploaded to the group's" → "accompanying
music video was uploaded to 4Minute's"
Remove KBS International Radio publisher from ref 8
Cite Idolator as website instead for ref 19
Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 24 and 26
The language parameter is missing for a lot of the Gaon refs, or is it not needed in the cases when the titles of the charts are accessible in English?
Kyle Peake, thank you so much for another quick and awesome review! I have left one comment above and fixed everything else as you pointed out. Also, I added another fact to the newly created "Awards" section which I'd missed earlier. Let me know what you think of all the changes. --
Ashleyyoursmile!07:48, 28 October 2020 (UTC)reply
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"the group taunts the listener into its" → "4Minute taunts the listener into the song's"
Done All
Reception
Critical reception
"received generally positive reviews" → "was met with generally positive reviews"
All of the rankings on lists should be in the same area of critical reception; it is awkward having most at the end and some near the start, they should all be around the latter
"Dorof further wrote that" → "Jakob Dorof wrote that" since the order should be switched for lists
Idolator should be italicised
"opined the group had" → "opined that 4Minute had"
"aggressive" and felt" → "aggressive," and felt"
""outstanding" which he" → ""outstanding," which he"
"ranked it the best song of 4Minutes' career," → "named the track the best song of their career,"
"and Idolator listed" → "and Idolator both listed"
Done All
Awards
You should create this sub-section for the table and its above text, though fixes are needed; see your own article "
Any Song" for a proper example
Done
Chart performance
Retitle to Commercial performance
"It was the sixth" → ""Crazy" was the sixth"
"in February 2015 of the" → "in February 2015 on the"
"at number two on US" → "at number two on the US"
Done All
Promotion and music video
Retitle to Music video and promotion, since promotion comes after the music video here
"to the release of the single," → "to the release of "Crazy","
"serving as a" → "which served as a"
"accompanying
music video for was uploaded to the group's" → "accompanying
music video was uploaded to 4Minute's"
Remove KBS International Radio publisher from ref 8
Cite Idolator as website instead for ref 19
Fix MOS:QWQ issues with refs 24 and 26
The language parameter is missing for a lot of the Gaon refs, or is it not needed in the cases when the titles of the charts are accessible in English?
Kyle Peake, thank you so much for another quick and awesome review! I have left one comment above and fixed everything else as you pointed out. Also, I added another fact to the newly created "Awards" section which I'd missed earlier. Let me know what you think of all the changes. --
Ashleyyoursmile!07:48, 28 October 2020 (UTC)reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.