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Primary Sources template

I know the primary sources template was added a long while ago, and refreshed earlier this month. When can that template be removed? I'm trying to figure out which are the worst sources we should be looking to replace.

At Talk:Lucy Letby/Archive 4#Overly represented sources I had linked four sources I found were cited more than I preferred - Panorama documentary (31 citations), The Times article (15), The Nurse who killed documentary (12), Sky news (9)

Are there any other sources that need to be removed? Soni ( talk) 12:27, 25 May 2024 (UTC) reply

It does not look like anyone else has opinions on it. I have removed the primary sources template. I do not think that template applies, though I still would like to cut down on overuse of sources Soni ( talk) 23:08, 7 June 2024 (UTC) reply
I missed this, but I will put the template back now. Sorry. The article has been written based off newspaper accounts of the trial, and goes into way too much detail from this primary sourced material. Some of it is based off a documentary, which is secondary but has some other issues (e.g. the interviews of doctors etc. are primary and not independent), but we are still lacking a proper authoritative secondary account of this case. This article is currently trying to *be* the secondary source, which is unencyclopaedic. Sirfurboy🏄 ( talk) 08:58, 8 June 2024 (UTC) reply
I agree with all of those concerns, though I'd have placed a different template instead of primary sources. Makes sense to me, let me see what we can do about this. Soni ( talk) 09:13, 8 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Semi-protected edit request on 27 May 2024

Senior Investigating Officer Paul Hughes later said: "the initial focus was around the hypotheses of what could have occurred: so generic hypotheses of 'it could be natural-occurring deaths', 'it could be natural-occurring collapses', 'it could be an organic reason', 'it could be a virus', and then one of the hypotheses was that, obviously, it could be inflicted harm." -> this sentence has no reliable source to back it up, so it needs to be deleted. I checked the source and did not find it in the source. 2600:6C44:117F:95BE:AD59:A396:7B54:FD9E ( talk) 03:42, 27 May 2024 (UTC) reply

I have just also checked and I am in agreement with you. I've removed this line. HouseplantHobbyist ( talk) 07:43, 27 May 2024 (UTC) reply
What did you check? I found it at about 4:32 in the video in the cited source. So I have restored it. -- DeFacto ( talk). 08:25, 27 May 2024 (UTC) reply
Oh dear, my mistake. I hadn't realised there was a video within the article and that's what it referred to. I thought it was the Sky report itself. HouseplantHobbyist ( talk) 08:27, 27 May 2024 (UTC) reply

Semi-protected edit request on 29 May 2024

Please change "Lucy Letby (born 4 January 1990) is a British former neonatal nurse who murdered seven infants and attempted the murder of six others between June 2015 and June 2016." to "Lucy Letby (born 4 January 1990) is a British former neonatal nurse who was convicted of murdering seven infants and attempting the murder of six others between June 2015 and June 2016. 2603:6010:CF01:DD1:BCDB:FF02:134C:47D2 ( talk) 02:45, 29 May 2024 (UTC) reply

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Charliehdb ( talk) 04:47, 29 May 2024 (UTC) reply
Surely this requirement is quite backwards in this situation? There are reliable sources referenced in the responses section which make a good case questioning the validity of the verdict. As well, other sources state that many still believe in her innocence and the possibility of a miscarriage.
The fact there's credible sources dounting her guilt means that "murdered seven infants" is the statement actively making a claim, while "was convicted of murdering seven infants" is a neutral statement. The latter doesn't even read as doubting the conviction, just not taking it as absolute certainty that she did it. 2A0A:EF40:45A:5401:6421:5F92:445B:BDAB ( talk) 16:37, 5 July 2024 (UTC) reply
There was a request for comment on the lead sentence five months ago that settled on the current wording. Please see the link below, thank you.
RFC for Lead sentence
JAYFAX ( talk) 15:43, 9 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Semi-protected edit request on 6 June 2024

In the May 20, 2024 issue of the New Yorker Magazine, there is an article by Rachel Aviv, called "Conviction, Did a neonatal nurse really kill seven newborns?". The article suggests that the allegations against and trial and conviction of Lucy Letby, the accused, may be faulty and based on data from which erroneous conclusions were made. My suggestion is rather than starting the bio with the characterization "murderer of seven infants" it be changed to a more ambiguous description such as "neonatal nurse accused and convicted by UK Court". Perhaps include some of the points made in the New Yorker article to leave for consideration, the possibility of other possible causes (the hospital was understaffed and mismanaged, currently they are experiencing a jump in complications in women in the post-natal unit) and also, the seeming bias toward conviction of some of the witnesses and police agency. Thank you, Karen Blume 71.212.172.63 ( talk) 22:24, 6 June 2024 (UTC) reply

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. M.Bitton ( talk) 16:24, 11 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Guardian - 9 July

I don't have time at the moment to write or edit anything, but this is in the Guardian today [1]. A quick reading of it didn't show me anything we have not seen before, but it may support some information that we formerly chose not to include as it was not published in a reliable source. Sirfurboy🏄 ( talk) 08:15, 9 July 2024 (UTC) reply

The 'Doubts about the conviction' section is highly biased

There's a fair bit in there about conspiracy theorists and amateur investigators, but apart from mentioning Gill and MacKenzie, there's nothing on the wealth of other people with relevant expertise who have weighed in on the case.

Two stories in leading broadsheets from both sides of the political spectrum came out this week. They quote consultant neonatologists, legal professionals, statisticians, forensic scientists, and various other highly qualified individuals. These are paid lip service in the third paragraph, but the sole quote is given to a columnist from Spiked magazine.

2A00:23C6:AE87:3401:213B:61A5:EDC4:518C ( talk) 08:08, 11 July 2024 (UTC) reply

I concur. When I noted the Guardian article above, I meant I had no time to read it carefully and create new prose on our page, not that I had no time to mention it exists. The spiked magazine quote is odd too. We should not be just reporting opinions of columnists. Sirfurboy🏄 ( talk) 08:42, 11 July 2024 (UTC) reply
ETA: I am concurring with the argument here, not necessarily the section title. "Highly biased" is a subjective assessment. Sirfurboy🏄 ( talk) 10:12, 11 July 2024 (UTC) reply
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

Primary Sources template

I know the primary sources template was added a long while ago, and refreshed earlier this month. When can that template be removed? I'm trying to figure out which are the worst sources we should be looking to replace.

At Talk:Lucy Letby/Archive 4#Overly represented sources I had linked four sources I found were cited more than I preferred - Panorama documentary (31 citations), The Times article (15), The Nurse who killed documentary (12), Sky news (9)

Are there any other sources that need to be removed? Soni ( talk) 12:27, 25 May 2024 (UTC) reply

It does not look like anyone else has opinions on it. I have removed the primary sources template. I do not think that template applies, though I still would like to cut down on overuse of sources Soni ( talk) 23:08, 7 June 2024 (UTC) reply
I missed this, but I will put the template back now. Sorry. The article has been written based off newspaper accounts of the trial, and goes into way too much detail from this primary sourced material. Some of it is based off a documentary, which is secondary but has some other issues (e.g. the interviews of doctors etc. are primary and not independent), but we are still lacking a proper authoritative secondary account of this case. This article is currently trying to *be* the secondary source, which is unencyclopaedic. Sirfurboy🏄 ( talk) 08:58, 8 June 2024 (UTC) reply
I agree with all of those concerns, though I'd have placed a different template instead of primary sources. Makes sense to me, let me see what we can do about this. Soni ( talk) 09:13, 8 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Semi-protected edit request on 27 May 2024

Senior Investigating Officer Paul Hughes later said: "the initial focus was around the hypotheses of what could have occurred: so generic hypotheses of 'it could be natural-occurring deaths', 'it could be natural-occurring collapses', 'it could be an organic reason', 'it could be a virus', and then one of the hypotheses was that, obviously, it could be inflicted harm." -> this sentence has no reliable source to back it up, so it needs to be deleted. I checked the source and did not find it in the source. 2600:6C44:117F:95BE:AD59:A396:7B54:FD9E ( talk) 03:42, 27 May 2024 (UTC) reply

I have just also checked and I am in agreement with you. I've removed this line. HouseplantHobbyist ( talk) 07:43, 27 May 2024 (UTC) reply
What did you check? I found it at about 4:32 in the video in the cited source. So I have restored it. -- DeFacto ( talk). 08:25, 27 May 2024 (UTC) reply
Oh dear, my mistake. I hadn't realised there was a video within the article and that's what it referred to. I thought it was the Sky report itself. HouseplantHobbyist ( talk) 08:27, 27 May 2024 (UTC) reply

Semi-protected edit request on 29 May 2024

Please change "Lucy Letby (born 4 January 1990) is a British former neonatal nurse who murdered seven infants and attempted the murder of six others between June 2015 and June 2016." to "Lucy Letby (born 4 January 1990) is a British former neonatal nurse who was convicted of murdering seven infants and attempting the murder of six others between June 2015 and June 2016. 2603:6010:CF01:DD1:BCDB:FF02:134C:47D2 ( talk) 02:45, 29 May 2024 (UTC) reply

 Not done: please provide reliable sources that support the change you want to be made. Charliehdb ( talk) 04:47, 29 May 2024 (UTC) reply
Surely this requirement is quite backwards in this situation? There are reliable sources referenced in the responses section which make a good case questioning the validity of the verdict. As well, other sources state that many still believe in her innocence and the possibility of a miscarriage.
The fact there's credible sources dounting her guilt means that "murdered seven infants" is the statement actively making a claim, while "was convicted of murdering seven infants" is a neutral statement. The latter doesn't even read as doubting the conviction, just not taking it as absolute certainty that she did it. 2A0A:EF40:45A:5401:6421:5F92:445B:BDAB ( talk) 16:37, 5 July 2024 (UTC) reply
There was a request for comment on the lead sentence five months ago that settled on the current wording. Please see the link below, thank you.
RFC for Lead sentence
JAYFAX ( talk) 15:43, 9 July 2024 (UTC) reply

Semi-protected edit request on 6 June 2024

In the May 20, 2024 issue of the New Yorker Magazine, there is an article by Rachel Aviv, called "Conviction, Did a neonatal nurse really kill seven newborns?". The article suggests that the allegations against and trial and conviction of Lucy Letby, the accused, may be faulty and based on data from which erroneous conclusions were made. My suggestion is rather than starting the bio with the characterization "murderer of seven infants" it be changed to a more ambiguous description such as "neonatal nurse accused and convicted by UK Court". Perhaps include some of the points made in the New Yorker article to leave for consideration, the possibility of other possible causes (the hospital was understaffed and mismanaged, currently they are experiencing a jump in complications in women in the post-natal unit) and also, the seeming bias toward conviction of some of the witnesses and police agency. Thank you, Karen Blume 71.212.172.63 ( talk) 22:24, 6 June 2024 (UTC) reply

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. M.Bitton ( talk) 16:24, 11 June 2024 (UTC) reply

Guardian - 9 July

I don't have time at the moment to write or edit anything, but this is in the Guardian today [1]. A quick reading of it didn't show me anything we have not seen before, but it may support some information that we formerly chose not to include as it was not published in a reliable source. Sirfurboy🏄 ( talk) 08:15, 9 July 2024 (UTC) reply

The 'Doubts about the conviction' section is highly biased

There's a fair bit in there about conspiracy theorists and amateur investigators, but apart from mentioning Gill and MacKenzie, there's nothing on the wealth of other people with relevant expertise who have weighed in on the case.

Two stories in leading broadsheets from both sides of the political spectrum came out this week. They quote consultant neonatologists, legal professionals, statisticians, forensic scientists, and various other highly qualified individuals. These are paid lip service in the third paragraph, but the sole quote is given to a columnist from Spiked magazine.

2A00:23C6:AE87:3401:213B:61A5:EDC4:518C ( talk) 08:08, 11 July 2024 (UTC) reply

I concur. When I noted the Guardian article above, I meant I had no time to read it carefully and create new prose on our page, not that I had no time to mention it exists. The spiked magazine quote is odd too. We should not be just reporting opinions of columnists. Sirfurboy🏄 ( talk) 08:42, 11 July 2024 (UTC) reply
ETA: I am concurring with the argument here, not necessarily the section title. "Highly biased" is a subjective assessment. Sirfurboy🏄 ( talk) 10:12, 11 July 2024 (UTC) reply

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