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That is lie. Corsets is a reform dress, a invention by Roxey Ann Caplin A bodices is without bones Stays hanging on her shoulders. Unlike a corset which rests on the hip.Haabet 23:55, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
The article is in a right mess as regards MoS and italics. Can someone fix this? If not I am happy to in a couple of days. Chaosdruid ( talk) 02:28, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
I have started to apply MoS, in the first place by turning italicised quotes into quote templates.
There are some other issues though:
It seems as tough this article needs a good seeing to by someone from one of the interested projects ... I will request attention from them on their talk pages once I have finished de-italicising. Chaosdruid ( talk) 08:39, 27 January 2012 (UTC)
fyi I would guess that the main reason for the lack of adherence to MOS and the general style of the article is that it seems to be verbatim lifted from this site. I would say that we can probably remove much of the content that's here now. Markleci ( talk) 11:38, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
In the second to last quote of the Corsets and fashion section, I corrected the line:
"... We measure the corset, pulling he measurements snug."
And added a 't' to the 'he' to make the assumed word 'the'. The assumed corrected line appears as:
"... We measure the corset, pulling the measurements snug."
This makes complete sense to me, correct me if I'm mistaken.
Fortlansing ( talk) 18:30, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
Sorry but I had to rollback the article. Reason, when the quotes were deleted, the references to those quotes were not removed from the article, so the article prepared readers for a quote by directly stating so, and then there was nothing there. This happened at least twice while I was reading the article-(version that I rolled-back). So, sorry about that but there was so much that was removed I just felt that it was better to bring it back to the most-complete previous state, including the header-tags asking that 'excessive quotes' be fixed. If any editor decides to undo my rollback-please read the article that you have left and fix those empty quote references. 24.0.133.234 ( talk) 17:44, 12 September 2014 (UTC) edited to add-please see the last sentence in the "marriage" section for an example of the problem-ty (old version http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Corset_controversy&diff=prev&oldid=611453852) 24.0.133.234 ( talk) 17:48, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
Hello Wikipedians! I will be working with this article as a part of an editing class at my university. My main focus will be to reduce the lengthiness of the article by condensing the quotes. This task has been taken on in the past which can be viewed in this version http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Corset_controversy&diff=prev&oldid=611453852. My goal is to work through this article to see what worked and what needed to be improved on so that this can be implemented into the current article. SwitchTilt ( talk) 19:52, 17 March 2018 (UTC)
After working with this article more, I see why it was rolled back. The article does in fact contain too many extensive quotes, but these quotes are what make up the body and narrative of the article. I've been attempting to move the quotes into wikiquote, as was recommended by the tag. From there, I will finish working with the article in reducing the quoted material in my sandbox ( User:SwitchTilt/sandbox). Basically, my thoughts are to summarize the information from the quotes and link the wikiquote page which would contain the quotes. I will update again once this is complete. Feel free to look through progress on it and/or to contribute there as well. SwitchTilt ( talk) 01:02, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
There is a section in the article discussing the end of the controversy which discusses at length the ways in which the corset began to lose significance as an item of clothing. This is not the same as the end of the controversy (which is by all means continuing today with rhetoric surrounding the presentation of corsetry as cumbersome or entrapping) and ought not to discuss simply how the corset ceased to be a fundamental part of clothing. There are also statements that require citations/are too vague (the hobble skirt did not 'continue' for a few years; this is not how we ought to speak of fashion). I will carry out some of these changes when I get the chance but thought I would mark some of them here in case anybody else has any information to do so themselves. Becsh ( talk) 01:38, 16 April 2019 (UTC)
As the controversy continues to this day, modern perspectives from historical fashion experts and their research should be noted. Modern evidence indicates that certain things were much less prevalent than represented (tightlacing) as well as highlighting the need to have the garment correctly worn and accustomed to and broken in. Also certain misunderstandings such as 'breaking a bone' actually referring to the whalebone of the corset should probably be mentioned. Some historians have also gone on record to state that the controversy was effectively created as social pressure and doctors began to attribute various conditions to being caused by the garment. If the controversy is to be addressed as it has not ended, the modern understanding of the controversy should replace the end section and be split into the end of the garment in daily use and the modern arguments and understandings in the historical context. I am not a historical fashion researcher or expert but anyone who actually has an account might want to reach out to some of them that specialize in that era for their sources to be included and information added. 2020/06/04 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 73.41.211.181 ( talk) 08:11, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
There are a number of problems here besides Manual of Style violations.
This article does not seem to be very well researched. Surely, authors, you can do better. Thank you for your time, Wordreader ( talk) 17:05, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
Citation 4 points to a The Lancet article published in 1785, but The Lancet is published since 1823. I think this is wrong. I also could not find the original article. Caleindos ( talk) 00:01, 15 November 2022 (UTC)
It looks like most of the newspaper archive links are down. I think pqarchiver moved to archive.proquest.com - is anyone able to provide working links? Luiysia ( talk) 19:57, 28 June 2023 (UTC)
How many of these letters quoted were written by genuine schoolgirls, models or shop assistants? To me they read as the products of salacious fantasy, almost certainly written by men. Richmondie ( talk) 23:55, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
The image depicting "Tight Lacing, or Fashion before Ease" is from the 1770s and is clearly depicting a pair of stays (note the flat, conical bust and flared-tab style waist). Stays and corsets entail separate functions and means of construction; stays were meant to flatten/shape the bust conically, and to provide a solid base for heavy clothing and skirts to lay upon. In fact, "tight lacing" a pair of stays is somewhat laughable, as it will not do much for your waist! It will, however, be uncomfortable and place undue strain on the garment (accelerating wear and tear). In the image itself, a pet monkey points to a book lettered "Fashions Victim A Satire." The print is not in support of tight lacing, but exactly the opposite. It is making a fool of the woman doing it. Corsets, meanwhile, were meant to shape the waist through moderate restriction AND a significant amount of padding in the bust and waist areas. The padding is really what created the illusion of the Victorian silhouette. Equating stays and corsets is like calling bell-bottom jeans and skinny jeans the same thing because they are "both jeans." Stybbshrike ( talk) 05:48, 3 June 2024 (UTC)
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Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT ( talk) 19:32, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
That is lie. Corsets is a reform dress, a invention by Roxey Ann Caplin A bodices is without bones Stays hanging on her shoulders. Unlike a corset which rests on the hip.Haabet 23:55, 14 June 2011 (UTC)
The article is in a right mess as regards MoS and italics. Can someone fix this? If not I am happy to in a couple of days. Chaosdruid ( talk) 02:28, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
I have started to apply MoS, in the first place by turning italicised quotes into quote templates.
There are some other issues though:
It seems as tough this article needs a good seeing to by someone from one of the interested projects ... I will request attention from them on their talk pages once I have finished de-italicising. Chaosdruid ( talk) 08:39, 27 January 2012 (UTC)
fyi I would guess that the main reason for the lack of adherence to MOS and the general style of the article is that it seems to be verbatim lifted from this site. I would say that we can probably remove much of the content that's here now. Markleci ( talk) 11:38, 5 March 2012 (UTC)
In the second to last quote of the Corsets and fashion section, I corrected the line:
"... We measure the corset, pulling he measurements snug."
And added a 't' to the 'he' to make the assumed word 'the'. The assumed corrected line appears as:
"... We measure the corset, pulling the measurements snug."
This makes complete sense to me, correct me if I'm mistaken.
Fortlansing ( talk) 18:30, 13 August 2012 (UTC)
Sorry but I had to rollback the article. Reason, when the quotes were deleted, the references to those quotes were not removed from the article, so the article prepared readers for a quote by directly stating so, and then there was nothing there. This happened at least twice while I was reading the article-(version that I rolled-back). So, sorry about that but there was so much that was removed I just felt that it was better to bring it back to the most-complete previous state, including the header-tags asking that 'excessive quotes' be fixed. If any editor decides to undo my rollback-please read the article that you have left and fix those empty quote references. 24.0.133.234 ( talk) 17:44, 12 September 2014 (UTC) edited to add-please see the last sentence in the "marriage" section for an example of the problem-ty (old version http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Corset_controversy&diff=prev&oldid=611453852) 24.0.133.234 ( talk) 17:48, 12 September 2014 (UTC)
Hello Wikipedians! I will be working with this article as a part of an editing class at my university. My main focus will be to reduce the lengthiness of the article by condensing the quotes. This task has been taken on in the past which can be viewed in this version http://en.wikipedia.org/?title=Corset_controversy&diff=prev&oldid=611453852. My goal is to work through this article to see what worked and what needed to be improved on so that this can be implemented into the current article. SwitchTilt ( talk) 19:52, 17 March 2018 (UTC)
After working with this article more, I see why it was rolled back. The article does in fact contain too many extensive quotes, but these quotes are what make up the body and narrative of the article. I've been attempting to move the quotes into wikiquote, as was recommended by the tag. From there, I will finish working with the article in reducing the quoted material in my sandbox ( User:SwitchTilt/sandbox). Basically, my thoughts are to summarize the information from the quotes and link the wikiquote page which would contain the quotes. I will update again once this is complete. Feel free to look through progress on it and/or to contribute there as well. SwitchTilt ( talk) 01:02, 22 March 2018 (UTC)
There is a section in the article discussing the end of the controversy which discusses at length the ways in which the corset began to lose significance as an item of clothing. This is not the same as the end of the controversy (which is by all means continuing today with rhetoric surrounding the presentation of corsetry as cumbersome or entrapping) and ought not to discuss simply how the corset ceased to be a fundamental part of clothing. There are also statements that require citations/are too vague (the hobble skirt did not 'continue' for a few years; this is not how we ought to speak of fashion). I will carry out some of these changes when I get the chance but thought I would mark some of them here in case anybody else has any information to do so themselves. Becsh ( talk) 01:38, 16 April 2019 (UTC)
As the controversy continues to this day, modern perspectives from historical fashion experts and their research should be noted. Modern evidence indicates that certain things were much less prevalent than represented (tightlacing) as well as highlighting the need to have the garment correctly worn and accustomed to and broken in. Also certain misunderstandings such as 'breaking a bone' actually referring to the whalebone of the corset should probably be mentioned. Some historians have also gone on record to state that the controversy was effectively created as social pressure and doctors began to attribute various conditions to being caused by the garment. If the controversy is to be addressed as it has not ended, the modern understanding of the controversy should replace the end section and be split into the end of the garment in daily use and the modern arguments and understandings in the historical context. I am not a historical fashion researcher or expert but anyone who actually has an account might want to reach out to some of them that specialize in that era for their sources to be included and information added. 2020/06/04 — Preceding unsigned comment added by 73.41.211.181 ( talk) 08:11, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
There are a number of problems here besides Manual of Style violations.
This article does not seem to be very well researched. Surely, authors, you can do better. Thank you for your time, Wordreader ( talk) 17:05, 19 September 2022 (UTC)
Citation 4 points to a The Lancet article published in 1785, but The Lancet is published since 1823. I think this is wrong. I also could not find the original article. Caleindos ( talk) 00:01, 15 November 2022 (UTC)
It looks like most of the newspaper archive links are down. I think pqarchiver moved to archive.proquest.com - is anyone able to provide working links? Luiysia ( talk) 19:57, 28 June 2023 (UTC)
How many of these letters quoted were written by genuine schoolgirls, models or shop assistants? To me they read as the products of salacious fantasy, almost certainly written by men. Richmondie ( talk) 23:55, 8 November 2023 (UTC)
The image depicting "Tight Lacing, or Fashion before Ease" is from the 1770s and is clearly depicting a pair of stays (note the flat, conical bust and flared-tab style waist). Stays and corsets entail separate functions and means of construction; stays were meant to flatten/shape the bust conically, and to provide a solid base for heavy clothing and skirts to lay upon. In fact, "tight lacing" a pair of stays is somewhat laughable, as it will not do much for your waist! It will, however, be uncomfortable and place undue strain on the garment (accelerating wear and tear). In the image itself, a pet monkey points to a book lettered "Fashions Victim A Satire." The print is not in support of tight lacing, but exactly the opposite. It is making a fool of the woman doing it. Corsets, meanwhile, were meant to shape the waist through moderate restriction AND a significant amount of padding in the bust and waist areas. The padding is really what created the illusion of the Victorian silhouette. Equating stays and corsets is like calling bell-bottom jeans and skinny jeans the same thing because they are "both jeans." Stybbshrike ( talk) 05:48, 3 June 2024 (UTC)