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Doesn't that strike anyone else as absurdly dangerous? 24.205.34.217 21:39, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
Hello,
This page seems solid so far, but still needs some touch ups to help it grow. The positives I think are the picture (which helps the viewer relate) and the format guideline. Also, towards the bottom of the page the "related material" would also be helpful to a curious viewer. Some weaknesses I felt were the lack of information in the categories and the futile background information. Also, there is no why section in your article. Why (more specifically then "homebuilding" were these Comp Air Jets invented? Just a thought to help you expand this article.
Mrholman ( talk) 01:51, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
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Doesn't that strike anyone else as absurdly dangerous? 24.205.34.217 21:39, 12 July 2007 (UTC)
Hello,
This page seems solid so far, but still needs some touch ups to help it grow. The positives I think are the picture (which helps the viewer relate) and the format guideline. Also, towards the bottom of the page the "related material" would also be helpful to a curious viewer. Some weaknesses I felt were the lack of information in the categories and the futile background information. Also, there is no why section in your article. Why (more specifically then "homebuilding" were these Comp Air Jets invented? Just a thought to help you expand this article.
Mrholman ( talk) 01:51, 22 March 2011 (UTC)