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Reviewer: Dough 48 72 02:07, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose):
b (
MoS):
- The route description contains overuse of "continues" and "then". Try to cut down on the use of these words. The sentence "In 1916, there existed a 12-mile gravel road that was numbered as 10-S from Center to Hooper." sounds awkward and needs to be reworded. "By 1930, SH 112 had been paved from Del Norte to the county line.", what county line are you referring to?
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- The route description should include more detail on the physical surroundings the route passes through. It should not by a dry recital of a map. In addition, did anything happen to the route since 1947 in the history? Can you elaborate on and possibly reword the sentence "The road continued to be realigned for the next eighty years".
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- An image of the road would be nice, but not required.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
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Reviewer: Dough 48 72 02:07, 12 May 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (
MoS):
- The route description contains overuse of "continues" and "then". Try to cut down on the use of these words. The sentence "In 1916, there existed a 12-mile gravel road that was numbered as 10-S from Center to Hooper." sounds awkward and needs to be reworded. "By 1930, SH 112 had been paved from Del Norte to the county line.", what county line are you referring to?
- a (prose):
- It is factually accurate and
verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to
reliable sources): c (
OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- The route description should include more detail on the physical surroundings the route passes through. It should not by a dry recital of a map. In addition, did anything happen to the route since 1947 in the history? Can you elaborate on and possibly reword the sentence "The road continued to be realigned for the next eighty years".
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the
neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by
images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with
suitable captions):
- An image of the road would be nice, but not required.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have
fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail: