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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ciutat Morta/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina ( talk · contribs) 20:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC) reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina ( talk) 20:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review so far, the article is improved for it. I've answered everything with some queries, see what you think. Mujinga ( talk) 11:51, 20 March 2021 (UTC) reply
re "expanding #Production to meet the third criteria" I added some lines yesterday and I've added some more today from the last review I found. I've also put in the academic analysis that was previously in further reading. I don't think this film will ever have a production section the size of say Blade Runner 2049, I'm happy the main aspects are covered. Back to you, thanks! Mujinga ( talk) 11:38, 21 March 2021 (UTC) reply

Infobox and lead

  • Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
  • "Poster" → "Promotional release poster"
  • Don't use "<br />" in the infobox. Use " plainlist" instead.
Well, it says on the film infobox template that plainlist is preferred, and it also helps mobile readers.
Those are good reasons, thanks.  Done Mujinga ( talk) 11:17, 21 March 2021 (UTC) reply
  • In the lead, remove the comma after "until 2015".
The issue was that the sentence is kinda short, so a comma wasn't necessary.

Plot

  • This section is over 400 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
  • Remove the comma after "hit on the head".
  • Add a comma after the first naming of Rodrigo Lanza.
I see your point; it was an Oxford comma thing.
  • Remove the comma after "Alfredo Pestana".
  • Add a comma after "they looked".
  • "son of diplomat" → "son of a diplomat"

Themes

  • Add a comma after "gentrification".
Yeah, it was another Oxford comma thing.
  • Other than that, this section looks good.

Production

  • "seven-storey" → "seven-story"
  • Add a comma after "Guàrdia Urbana".
  • "decide" → "decided"
  • This section is extremely short, so try expanding it.

Release

  • Add a comma after "June 8, 2013".
  • "action" → "act"
  • "department" → "Department"

Critical response

  • The word "onesidedness" doesn't sound right, so maybe reword it?
  • Add more reviews (if possible).

Legacy

  • Remove the comma after "Guàrdia Urbana".
  • Add a comma after "Cs, PP".

Progress

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c ( OR):
    d ( copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Ciutat Morta/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina ( talk · contribs) 20:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC) reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina ( talk) 20:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC) reply

Thanks for the review so far, the article is improved for it. I've answered everything with some queries, see what you think. Mujinga ( talk) 11:51, 20 March 2021 (UTC) reply
re "expanding #Production to meet the third criteria" I added some lines yesterday and I've added some more today from the last review I found. I've also put in the academic analysis that was previously in further reading. I don't think this film will ever have a production section the size of say Blade Runner 2049, I'm happy the main aspects are covered. Back to you, thanks! Mujinga ( talk) 11:38, 21 March 2021 (UTC) reply

Infobox and lead

  • Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
  • "Poster" → "Promotional release poster"
  • Don't use "<br />" in the infobox. Use " plainlist" instead.
Well, it says on the film infobox template that plainlist is preferred, and it also helps mobile readers.
Those are good reasons, thanks.  Done Mujinga ( talk) 11:17, 21 March 2021 (UTC) reply
  • In the lead, remove the comma after "until 2015".
The issue was that the sentence is kinda short, so a comma wasn't necessary.

Plot

  • This section is over 400 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
  • Remove the comma after "hit on the head".
  • Add a comma after the first naming of Rodrigo Lanza.
I see your point; it was an Oxford comma thing.
  • Remove the comma after "Alfredo Pestana".
  • Add a comma after "they looked".
  • "son of diplomat" → "son of a diplomat"

Themes

  • Add a comma after "gentrification".
Yeah, it was another Oxford comma thing.
  • Other than that, this section looks good.

Production

  • "seven-storey" → "seven-story"
  • Add a comma after "Guàrdia Urbana".
  • "decide" → "decided"
  • This section is extremely short, so try expanding it.

Release

  • Add a comma after "June 8, 2013".
  • "action" → "act"
  • "department" → "Department"

Critical response

  • The word "onesidedness" doesn't sound right, so maybe reword it?
  • Add more reviews (if possible).

Legacy

  • Remove the comma after "Guàrdia Urbana".
  • Add a comma after "Cs, PP".

Progress

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b ( MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c ( OR):
    d ( copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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