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Could somebody who understands the issue please clean up this section:
"However, in several interviews she has indicated that if her song doesn't address that issue, but if we have decided that adults can have access to guns, then we should make sure that unsupervised children can't get access to them."
It doesn't parse - "that if her song doesn't address that issue" - she would know what her song addresses - "but if we have decided that adults can have access to guns" - that was decided a couple hundred years ago - "then we should make sure that unsupervised children can't get access to them." - does her song suggest a course of action, or is it just imploring parents to use common sense? I can't tell from the quote what issue she's addressing - it might be obvious if you've heard the song, but for the rest of us, is it more than, "gah! don't be stupid!"? Is the more succinct version of what she said, "We should make sure that unsupervised children don't have access to guns."? Thanks for clarifying. BillMcGonigle 00:25, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
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Could somebody who understands the issue please clean up this section:
"However, in several interviews she has indicated that if her song doesn't address that issue, but if we have decided that adults can have access to guns, then we should make sure that unsupervised children can't get access to them."
It doesn't parse - "that if her song doesn't address that issue" - she would know what her song addresses - "but if we have decided that adults can have access to guns" - that was decided a couple hundred years ago - "then we should make sure that unsupervised children can't get access to them." - does her song suggest a course of action, or is it just imploring parents to use common sense? I can't tell from the quote what issue she's addressing - it might be obvious if you've heard the song, but for the rest of us, is it more than, "gah! don't be stupid!"? Is the more succinct version of what she said, "We should make sure that unsupervised children don't have access to guns."? Thanks for clarifying. BillMcGonigle 00:25, 21 May 2007 (UTC)