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"promoted the song with live performances." → "promoted the song with a live performance on
Like a Version." with the wikilink, as only relevant performance(s) should be mentioned in the lead
Remove Swedish singer introduction to Grant because that being solely in the body is sufficent
"of "Changed My Mind" on 23 November 2018." → "of the song on the tour's beginning date."
Background and release
Remove comma after third studio album
"writing and producing the songs." → "working on the songs." per the source not mentioning both writing and production
"Loelv managed production and" → "Loelv managed both production and"
"on 2 February 2018 through" → "on 2 February 2018, through"
Only the pair of dice is sourced as being featured on the artwork
[7][8] are not in the corresponding order with the info
"she elaborated that "My idea" → "she elaborated: "My idea"
"she explained that" → "Stryke explained that"
"the line "I changed my mind".[10] As the song progresses," → "the line "I changed my mind" and as it progresses," since these sentences are short enough to be merged
"She said, "At that point" → "The singer said that "at that point" per this not being a full sentence
"best decision ever."" → "best decision ever"." per
MOS:QUOTE
Reception
This section should be organized by thematic element(s), i.e. what was praised
Mention what the Time magazine writer actually praised about the song
"Graeme Virtue regarded it" → "Graeme Virtue regarded the song"
"and stated that "Playful" → "and stated, "Playful"
Cite
Vevo as publisher instead on ref 22 with the wikilink
MOS:CAPS issues with refs 25 and 26, or is that just how Grant is stylized?
Add url-access subscription to ref 27
External links
Remove the lyric video from here
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this is quite a neat article! --
K. Peake 09:38, 21 April 2022 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: Thanks for the review! Just letting you know that I've started addressing your comments. Should be done in a day or two :)
Pancake (
talk) 14:11, 26 April 2022 (UTC)reply
PancakeMistake That was good at the time but any further updates on this? --
K. Peake 07:33, 2 May 2022 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: Thank you for your patience. I've been really busy with work this last month. Let me know if I've missed any of your comments. I re-arranged the reviews a bit for better flow. Do you have any suggestions on how to organize it better?
Pancake (
talk) 16:00, 23 May 2022 (UTC)reply
PancakeMistake This mostly looks good, though there are still a few issues left unfixed. [9] should not be on the audio sample text, the three-minute and five-second part needs to be altered, a comma is required before through in promotion and cover version, url-access limited and subscription both need to be added to the appropriate refs. --
K. Peake 07:31, 24 May 2022 (UTC)reply
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Pop music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of articles related to
pop music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Pop musicWikipedia:WikiProject Pop musicTemplate:WikiProject Pop musicPop music articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Electronic music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Electronic music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Electronic musicWikipedia:WikiProject Electronic musicTemplate:WikiProject Electronic musicelectronic music articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Songs, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
songs on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.SongsWikipedia:WikiProject SongsTemplate:WikiProject Songssong articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Sweden, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Sweden-related articles on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.SwedenWikipedia:WikiProject SwedenTemplate:WikiProject SwedenSweden articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Women in Music, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of
Women in music on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join
the discussion and see a list of open tasks.Women in MusicWikipedia:WikiProject Women in MusicTemplate:WikiProject Women in MusicWomen in music articles
"promoted the song with live performances." → "promoted the song with a live performance on
Like a Version." with the wikilink, as only relevant performance(s) should be mentioned in the lead
Remove Swedish singer introduction to Grant because that being solely in the body is sufficent
"of "Changed My Mind" on 23 November 2018." → "of the song on the tour's beginning date."
Background and release
Remove comma after third studio album
"writing and producing the songs." → "working on the songs." per the source not mentioning both writing and production
"Loelv managed production and" → "Loelv managed both production and"
"on 2 February 2018 through" → "on 2 February 2018, through"
Only the pair of dice is sourced as being featured on the artwork
[7][8] are not in the corresponding order with the info
"she elaborated that "My idea" → "she elaborated: "My idea"
"she explained that" → "Stryke explained that"
"the line "I changed my mind".[10] As the song progresses," → "the line "I changed my mind" and as it progresses," since these sentences are short enough to be merged
"She said, "At that point" → "The singer said that "at that point" per this not being a full sentence
"best decision ever."" → "best decision ever"." per
MOS:QUOTE
Reception
This section should be organized by thematic element(s), i.e. what was praised
Mention what the Time magazine writer actually praised about the song
"Graeme Virtue regarded it" → "Graeme Virtue regarded the song"
"and stated that "Playful" → "and stated, "Playful"
Cite
Vevo as publisher instead on ref 22 with the wikilink
MOS:CAPS issues with refs 25 and 26, or is that just how Grant is stylized?
Add url-access subscription to ref 27
External links
Remove the lyric video from here
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this is quite a neat article! --
K. Peake 09:38, 21 April 2022 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: Thanks for the review! Just letting you know that I've started addressing your comments. Should be done in a day or two :)
Pancake (
talk) 14:11, 26 April 2022 (UTC)reply
PancakeMistake That was good at the time but any further updates on this? --
K. Peake 07:33, 2 May 2022 (UTC)reply
@
Kyle Peake: Thank you for your patience. I've been really busy with work this last month. Let me know if I've missed any of your comments. I re-arranged the reviews a bit for better flow. Do you have any suggestions on how to organize it better?
Pancake (
talk) 16:00, 23 May 2022 (UTC)reply
PancakeMistake This mostly looks good, though there are still a few issues left unfixed. [9] should not be on the audio sample text, the three-minute and five-second part needs to be altered, a comma is required before through in promotion and cover version, url-access limited and subscription both need to be added to the appropriate refs. --
K. Peake 07:31, 24 May 2022 (UTC)reply