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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV ( talk · contribs) 23:54, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
I'll do this one. For transparency: although I have edited this article, the extent of that is two minor edits to this article (one where I tweaked formatting, and one where I expanded "didn't" to "did not"), and two edits where I added archive links to it with IAbot - in other words, I have not "made significant contributions" and am still eligible to review this.-- Alexandra IDV 23:54, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
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The puzzle appears in Gabriel Knight 3: Blood of the Sacred, Blood of the Damned. In this game, players control protagonist Gabriel Knight.- you can combine these into one sentence for better flow. Additionally, you don't need to call Gabriel "protagonist" - it is obvious since you've already mentioned that he's controlled by the player
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the differences between Gabriel and the man he was impersonatingshould be written in present tense, as the fiction happens as you play the game rather than being a past event
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parameter, where 1.0 is the default sizeI will put this on hold for the usual seven days - ping me if you when you have addressed the above or if you have any questions!-- Alexandra IDV 00:24, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
In the Reception and legacy section, I feel like the significance of the Old Man Murray article ("Death of Adventure Games") in this puzzle's notoriety is not acknowledged adequately.
It's one of only two roughly contemporary sources cited here, everything else is 10 to 20 years after the fact. Additionally, A lot of the other sources here specifically cite Old Man Murray/Erik Wolpaw as informing their opinions. Yet in the text here, it's just another in a long line of "Person A said this. While Person B said this and Person C said this."
In my opinion, without the OMM article I don't feel like this puzzle would ever have reached the notoriety necessary for this wikipedia page.
Reallymeaningfulnoreally ( talk) 01:35, 14 April 2022 (UTC)
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Reviewer: Alexandra IDV ( talk · contribs) 23:54, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
I'll do this one. For transparency: although I have edited this article, the extent of that is two minor edits to this article (one where I tweaked formatting, and one where I expanded "didn't" to "did not"), and two edits where I added archive links to it with IAbot - in other words, I have not "made significant contributions" and am still eligible to review this.-- Alexandra IDV 23:54, 26 July 2021 (UTC)
Lead
Puzzle and solution
The puzzle appears in Gabriel Knight 3: Blood of the Sacred, Blood of the Damned. In this game, players control protagonist Gabriel Knight.- you can combine these into one sentence for better flow. Additionally, you don't need to call Gabriel "protagonist" - it is obvious since you've already mentioned that he's controlled by the player
Concept and creation
Reception
References
Images
the differences between Gabriel and the man he was impersonatingshould be written in present tense, as the fiction happens as you play the game rather than being a past event
|upright=
parameter, where 1.0 is the default sizeI will put this on hold for the usual seven days - ping me if you when you have addressed the above or if you have any questions!-- Alexandra IDV 00:24, 27 July 2021 (UTC)
In the Reception and legacy section, I feel like the significance of the Old Man Murray article ("Death of Adventure Games") in this puzzle's notoriety is not acknowledged adequately.
It's one of only two roughly contemporary sources cited here, everything else is 10 to 20 years after the fact. Additionally, A lot of the other sources here specifically cite Old Man Murray/Erik Wolpaw as informing their opinions. Yet in the text here, it's just another in a long line of "Person A said this. While Person B said this and Person C said this."
In my opinion, without the OMM article I don't feel like this puzzle would ever have reached the notoriety necessary for this wikipedia page.
Reallymeaningfulnoreally ( talk) 01:35, 14 April 2022 (UTC)